【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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+ M' Q4 b& W$ v8 b我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
! v1 b$ _, @. N, [  o2 n/ t5 OWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 Z+ Q9 i$ n2 c' y) y1 f9 l5 II would probably know how you feel
! ?' I% x# u% ]9 s! N$ j* r0 gLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ v7 ?0 I! v" z! T! Q; k1 W2 \% TBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 M0 _1 n6 K5 O4 p1 Q! r9 \6 OIf today isn’t too late,
; j/ L: ~* `# i% i+ X5 }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ y* G3 Z/ f7 e2 U5 ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ f& j$ Z" C8 v- ]; @9 A2 G8 U" rLove… just the word love
! s, l. ?0 U  u' \Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& }) ?4 |* |4 V- v0 H* O* VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( O* A2 m+ q3 T2 T8 r( g, w' x9 YIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. L3 {7 t; s% u1 t- U' ZCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 D  Q3 T1 c- _6 X8 aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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6 W! s- E* _, H/ W" H) x* Q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, e6 i- W( f& b, p$ q# C1 ?<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: M) C, d  X! t, x! {7 t<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ d/ q5 b# h0 y$ C/ O9 t* L<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ [  m# O8 ~" d9 T6 m<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' l, i. O  j7 q7 c" P$ x' y- n<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; ^5 N0 ~8 g2 Q. R& @* `. ]$ t<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! f8 c* L, C& L& k! `<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 H* _$ T" e% N/ n4 H! ]<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 T* m4 y3 O; G7 u<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 S* S+ E3 A5 N8 g<P>但我不会</P>
& |9 J# F- P' q4 @<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" A6 |3 J8 m7 x<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* u) F$ a* `  g. g. n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 `" I7 b$ Q' V/ l1 R- ?  V" i/ k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- R: [- g3 u5 b* x, y4 v' _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ b. N5 E: f/ W) P+ ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 v5 f  D$ `7 j/ y4 U' `7 p, I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% {; o5 l& g5 V+ h' j<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# v+ ]2 z9 V1 z- L<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 y. `1 ^* P8 N: s<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, N+ t. Y1 |) E<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 o+ p" q% s$ ?* c6 M<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
: [% K5 ]# M  y( ?4 L# K<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! V* t* R# Y. M. v- N1 M1 f<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 w) c& s8 }% L* D8 E/ \<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 a2 ^  s. b( A# {6 k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, m# X' A+ C  o  b$ ^5 l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% Q, c6 s( o7 J5 K! X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 }4 K7 @& }5 [% q4 q# v2 Z0 U* X9 q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 ~; i6 H& V# {: o& d3 a7 I) p% T' W<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 ^4 J9 O# s: q. p<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' e7 J$ n- {8 k( {& [* [ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% h0 n: @+ S0 H这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 E7 q. X. h6 ?, z+ d2 G  h<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>