【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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6 n1 Q- h* h+ d# ?& @我另将歌词附在此。
# t2 n% [$ `4 W! W6 P$ f) CThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 a: j+ @4 N+ R$ h6 N% kThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
. N6 Z- @8 l5 Z3 `. ~, OI already loved you with all my heart
8 D& Z2 u$ W- z/ p8 s/ ~We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 `5 \6 ^# v+ M0 JIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. Y8 j8 f5 H( TI would probably know how you feel
: G; A$ d0 [6 B$ E3 ], Z3 ^' QLove… just the word love
9 ], y/ f* a1 YWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
" i& t! H& ^1 r! X& ABut I never did
1 u2 w- |% t* \) P! _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% S+ ?" c9 D8 O+ p. s2 C4 h6 i5 kIf today isn’t too late,
. Z  B0 ]: S5 ~8 c( bI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 ]6 J3 M7 v' _2 VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# n' B/ k9 g0 W/ @5 ]5 EEntrust my love within your heart
7 r# j4 P7 c, k6 H! YLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 ~# c2 s$ X9 R& T, i$ t- u1 A! R% yI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 u3 d% d& l8 c  `% I# |' cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 H) ^5 ?0 y3 A2 w6 _6 ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" o! ~2 `( }1 RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 R+ i2 w0 u, QCan I entrust it to you?
2 {% |3 f2 }7 U5 g* uEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; \$ E! [. _; Q. X/ }: a<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 K. K9 R5 B! J& N8 c<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 i3 D6 T4 g# d$ ~* U<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! O& }- N" _, k0 m<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% L6 v4 i% j+ p7 x9 [<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 |3 V+ ?( v& Y* c+ o7 j7 ^<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& D2 m7 f8 j& m! N- P" E# L8 v" S<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  r) o) y& t& T# ?<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. M4 _1 \" N9 ^  Q) q) x  t<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 K2 y, ], P# k$ B$ g& j. R<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 p' r1 e4 X. p1 l3 h) ?3 J<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; s: R6 k5 i7 ^# q* h& e<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! D  O* c: ~. `& q7 w) P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ m+ X# i8 J' {' H% T! r& H<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% u' _, R5 l; J; ~/ d1 x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. x" k9 e& S8 |$ o/ |<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 a8 }( ?/ `& u# }2 U3 C3 e<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- T2 \5 s$ e( T6 y2 h<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ V+ _" S/ H# n+ F<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- [5 F, X* N3 A' a<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- S) t. N9 C/ X2 f: e* v  E8 Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' y' z9 w# S, l+ s! E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! H1 c- M* I5 h! o0 r, Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 w7 F( _* Z- ?5 r' a5 C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 \# y+ d. L' o) [- Y. R+ w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ r1 C; B5 Y3 I! x7 P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% I$ O9 ~! T: Q$ I1 x* d: E' ?) B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 X8 z, k$ W: r$ K4 c( ]! u$ L<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 E9 F4 Z* t; v5 y 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

7 ]# \9 [& v: o! s$ y/ u这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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8 U' q7 {" r! L2 Y6 D" i, Y8 _<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>