【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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4 J( _1 q) x" h& P8 \- V" G% x我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- F! u" F; w* U2 X$ n+ `' Q* IThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 w- T: v# {# ^: t$ ~, y' yIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! J- Y" i$ ?# S" H$ W$ M% J" S' R% ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 @% X/ c/ y) y: O+ S% A7 _Entrust my love within your heart
8 v7 M: b+ O* v1 ]% @Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  @  |1 G" x- y4 x* O8 qI want to confess that I love you,
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; m2 {6 ]0 `  r- n6 B5 C# \If today isn’t too late,
( }( v5 t; L7 W- W  K$ E2 {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# y- @  f4 l# U! ]" l<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' n) g1 x2 H. ], ?4 j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& N- G6 x( M7 V: `7 c  V<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, n# Q4 e1 `; x: k* ?* k) |7 D8 t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 m$ \  E8 A8 W# P<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 V/ r$ Q* p1 q+ v) A! h/ {<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 o- m4 x1 |/ H<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 y) u6 w( v1 U. H<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 C# U/ Z/ e; K7 K<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* l% j8 p5 a6 e: _' d<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* i3 n6 n0 L- E$ D$ F. G3 D* q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" k6 }2 @9 I  l: q: P<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 w1 Z) `  F4 z" A. w<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" g/ Y5 Q# s8 }3 i<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- u3 }. m3 R4 \0 Z+ R  \8 R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- J: I4 t4 V  j5 {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 K6 m) `% a2 K0 C+ F% S<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) ^5 w+ U% O9 w/ z  C  K1 ?# ~3 r% T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 \, R0 _; _* C3 W9 c# \# S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 E# ^( K  T: l  J! k. p" m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 \6 @# t3 j6 o+ j5 d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. f, Y3 U7 b: E1 l8 R' U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. C& {* J! n1 l5 E% k( g<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
. f# z; t9 a* q+ R) I7 w<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* z4 x& e' x0 d% y! N0 `3 P  B' A* [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 `  B7 r& q. o<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ g1 D5 t8 W( ^6 v% K! n- k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 ~. ~3 v/ m: g) @; n, R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ w" M" W: a. G2 N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( z3 p: t7 V8 }1 B- M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* R( {# a+ n& s% b. j% S7 B4 V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ ^9 `1 r# `* U6 _7 N3 e4 Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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# a4 j) @5 z& i, M<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>