【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
: Q1 K( @8 y: w+ ~; F. kThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
, H5 l8 @# R. `) TI already loved you with all my heart
# r7 L2 ~' U  m, n1 {$ n8 X4 hWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ ^, \- T8 t% t7 I0 b3 yI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; \" ]5 {: X6 y$ a: KWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
" n5 z5 v% e$ \3 F/ x9 fBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. b% H: u9 [1 Q0 TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ W6 A$ U2 {2 m" `. m5 e( IEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
! K/ p, R/ u, l: y! `' NWhy is it so difficult to express?
& b& {2 u/ J; E( R% ]- A, J2 \  tI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
8 [) N( A$ a$ S7 y  n8 d3 dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 V9 f6 y2 ?5 P& `% E7 a  [0 RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 [7 a5 K8 q' x+ KI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
/ o$ z- L& H( j) [Can I entrust it to you?
. D6 L5 f* W5 T, ?4 f9 e* zEntrust my love within your heart
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4 B" O, F8 ?% U, S8 P[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" H& j! E* y) w) x3 j" y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 i, _. s; G+ f' I/ b0 O<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; c2 ]( w( b! g, N7 T<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
! N3 h- x. s1 _& w( `4 d<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  K  m  \9 f1 [  w" u<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ G! d) ?& J' G+ C; ?4 P0 O6 z/ G7 m<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( P6 Q0 r" h7 i2 e<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 |6 m5 _, V- `  W% m6 N* |: [<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# t. U' O, W# o( l<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- D4 ^% G) W* \2 J, a3 G" F<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
" g% b2 {( }7 q: j+ u6 n, L<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& {( Q3 \. J9 [0 t! y1 a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! u! D5 G1 X6 K3 y" M8 s<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ M: E: P/ [1 o  y" [: p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: z9 Y" d: X& l. M/ h7 ^! e6 _* Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* m5 f, U! f& C  l6 t: w9 l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; u- X+ P- ]$ \0 L1 R; ]<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- }" q, ]! G) w+ U6 m, t- u7 O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 h; y& C6 c. u: `' y+ f<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% W9 m$ a: V! y  g; T<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! l2 b7 E# R( l7 ?5 K! D<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
* t1 H) ^+ n+ Q4 ?' K<P>但我不会 </P>
7 S3 x# l. T5 M& O<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  U! t$ p1 Y5 L<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ K* \0 J% j  d6 N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 ^) L! M% z3 x3 s) D- y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: O' [& X  b- u" e<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 r: _$ J& j# B  n<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! i; y8 m5 U' }: x/ K& Z  f7 H0 Q0 j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! P0 M- s* a  Y1 A: K# C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 R3 P$ `$ ?; k* D$ i( Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
6 E& }, }, H8 x<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
! D9 y! `7 K* C) M8 t1 a! u2 G4 ]6 e<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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2 |8 Y6 U  }5 p! v! R) p这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>