【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
5 J1 h0 c, P, BThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# M! _2 w" r! Z8 v* {8 H9 `That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
0 |& G6 c0 G0 aI already loved you with all my heart
+ Z7 G: Q6 x! [! hWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 {/ g& ]5 Y9 j" XIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 Z7 V$ C& }* h* OI want to confess that I love you,
" b( W1 B& e4 m8 f' uBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
% R) b2 g  E+ A9 J! y! j, f5 lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ B; ^# |* D. L+ y7 u6 c4 D% aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ w7 P" Z7 Q) l. T! j9 c- D! d2 gEntrust my love within your heart
/ V* H: c8 z$ z/ H; A+ |! \- RLove… just the word love
, ^  b) j, D$ PWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 I# m$ d" y; {4 iI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 \: s8 R- _& ]+ G1 Y: [6 SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 I' l9 {/ S. E! i0 Z! p( KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
! p  f( N2 U- R" v# R5 ]Can I entrust it to you?
# F* [7 I! n9 \. G/ U; GEntrust my love within your heart

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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

1 E5 d$ e8 i4 X; g- P6 n<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 F% \5 `& e$ o8 p<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 j& i" S# V4 v  X. ]$ X( |<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 M! U. d8 v% p% J, L0 x6 `2 S8 F<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 @* \$ m& {# s  {<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. T* R. f' s2 ~: g5 \' P<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 _, O7 u6 ^5 z# p% f5 e% P<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 N2 ?4 Z) X' p1 r& u* l. t. d<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 }$ Q# V( c. }; N/ x<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, C) b1 m2 ]9 `' ?<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 S' A0 n! X  B9 S/ T5 |<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& {2 G9 B4 P# i! Z( g! Q<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 B. w/ b; n7 H; R<P>但我不会</P>
( _8 L2 `* T9 y1 n+ s1 U<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; @  G8 X  M) q" g) o1 Y8 E<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" A) O* `4 R6 Q4 v3 q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; D/ @; d2 F, f$ D<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: c4 x7 k- ?$ J( o1 Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 d3 N% U5 w8 v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: A- C* B1 q* ?6 B+ V/ Y: D9 x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 J% ?' j5 U1 ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 A# J9 E: K. z1 G' Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ b* o+ _. W/ F! f2 s<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ y3 P4 l# o# l) o<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& K" Q& V. Q% H7 [- Q4 s( ]8 y7 O0 {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  v% h2 ?$ @' K* X) w% S<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; L/ @3 J" C8 I3 R. l; X0 B- S1 C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! E# s8 [, p2 z# d2 g, V<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( g5 a- b7 i6 g- O8 U  W" |0 S: \  Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  v4 J3 c5 b% _6 }2 v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 J9 W8 U; z* g+ _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' n( f( D& z4 A7 s7 R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
* v0 i/ |/ t$ ?2 h6 {<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ l# I1 U$ l, S3 g5 g这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>