【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 U$ ?) j5 p6 T% p0 AThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 F" m7 R' r) n! ZFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- t  ], x# f1 J0 ]- TI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
% _( \0 W+ k. jWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
& l1 t- ]9 i: t! e# nBut I never did
0 J0 q* P3 o9 D; ~) g4 SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. _3 b+ K% B; e" g  o' k- LIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 C' X, M* ?9 F0 e! W  Y9 pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 D2 [& _: _- L/ K. wEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; `* b  }3 n0 h. b& Q7 JI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ l& A; ^  z6 B9 |; G) D2 xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ s" q* {, B. n6 I7 q6 z0 H* wIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. ]: e; c9 m  PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% F3 s8 A, g( w# b+ AEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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, S& X0 n6 o/ x. u/ F: |2 O[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

- K8 {( O  f3 k# L8 U<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 p9 _8 o; n& K0 e4 i<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 x- L, C7 o8 F<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& D$ _3 ]7 _! E+ E0 U4 o% D' }<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ V! X3 o  c/ k7 U, _<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# |; @( F. X2 c) j( g<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 x9 R  j1 ?! y4 Q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ Q2 W6 g# d6 b4 T( s# A<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ V! i" J7 U4 G& ^6 O! y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 b1 j& T3 g' u<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 h. X1 F  r# l2 k0 b2 ]* k; U<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  N* q+ E. t" O/ g( O* V3 r<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 s. ^6 s+ j4 J6 d- s& |4 e<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* |  M( R  I: r8 i" w# c<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
2 J3 T& Y6 Q; p' D* U5 U<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 c( V, d* S+ ]1 W2 L( e<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* c3 U, l9 `4 w0 K<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) S; U1 D9 ?( W6 g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& O  i+ g  |* g5 g: i6 d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 O6 N# d9 X* I, }6 _& @/ `+ I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 M  c3 n3 B+ }1 J<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ q6 ~! X0 U  f6 H<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 S0 T$ p2 Q! _" M) l) S# Y9 t<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 U# p' T* t# [2 S% Q5 R<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
5 P9 E: @! z- z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 \/ [! u; t3 M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 p  _& O5 X! D6 G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) y$ B$ @! Y: w9 ~) J) v8 l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) H" C, c8 j: n1 p5 j5 s. T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, d" g: i3 C# `1 V; Q$ d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 \/ H3 q1 F1 c9 @. \2 K8 H) D6 d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, D% K9 |" f( `; n- H- b1 `3 F<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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+ c# @; A4 n3 C4 C: ~  Q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>