【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
2 t  E" t9 ^) b: O9 g. `The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
4 |6 L9 }- H8 b; [I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
  z0 b1 C- P2 W1 w2 g5 E  WBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 j$ r5 n% ^- b' U% ]If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
. a/ T6 t) b& w, [Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 C0 X4 x5 M, u# nBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! H$ P6 e+ V" N1 f& B3 OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! T$ [4 n; I) qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 V7 j) @: u' m. ]$ z, B) K0 KLove… just the word love
0 d2 D# d. H# oWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. c7 j" g; a. y& F8 g: S5 y* Q7 DBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 \3 {. j6 U8 }, |. l3 f7 v3 eIf today isn’t too late,
5 g) k; B* a0 yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. Q0 l" s0 ^+ [/ u5 t9 @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( Z; \% ~! ]7 j# C# j<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; J& O$ F# h: m1 q) o9 |6 Y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; c* j& P' p( S- r" i1 P  W7 G1 g<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" X- n7 G9 G3 D$ Q; Q' N+ m: p. K+ R<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" F) V& ?  h! i1 B. V& T* O8 Y1 N4 L<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% M  X0 ~8 {0 Y0 Z/ z3 B8 T<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' T: `7 o. r% L/ `+ b3 F, t. E) l<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 ?5 Z, L0 t* U. z: X7 d<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 e  }  j8 ~2 F+ D2 b- T<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 l0 |9 g$ u( f* d8 P; B<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
; p$ T- u, G& c- j9 c7 N<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
, w: [+ R. n1 E9 T8 C0 N& Y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
1 n. j( V8 u1 V" M; a<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# ^7 X0 H' c1 ^0 d<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 F0 e1 F1 U' M! x' S2 Z6 w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 W) m  S+ y% y1 `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& f" a7 U* R1 N9 C, M" O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, [+ ]) G2 W) y6 m& B/ ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) ~8 `2 x& ]8 E' d/ t3 W( b; Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 |" R# r- e4 h, ^7 ?, a<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( l2 r" r& k2 {5 z( X4 ?9 C<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 C& a; w1 R2 Y/ |<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# e, \+ k4 r8 g<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, z# M; |/ j( r: A<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 ~8 n/ o0 @" J& C, _<P>But I never did </P>
/ {9 K9 `( O& f  S<P>但我不会 </P>
. l2 t  Y+ d) C4 c: S- b. `' P<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, Q  j& j- ^; k' r" U& ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 U: t6 u: Y4 L<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, {" i% y# t, b' x9 U! X5 b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" ~$ N& U- C1 U- w9 n" d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' X% r3 ?3 B4 ?/ Z( B0 Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 F7 V& y1 V4 v5 [1 P# I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. d* Y/ C5 q9 J; x<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# }  R: u1 i  p+ H% j- c4 c<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>