【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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" g4 X- c0 Z& R+ C# {" r) h我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% S% C) e% Y, A* }: ~2 a  V9 ~From the first moment we met,
8 ^: P! x$ `. ~1 }# [I already loved you with all my heart
2 p, H! G/ q/ D3 ~7 KWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; s9 G! y  z3 mI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 |3 x; Q, W! c5 s# f; nIf today isn’t too late,
' j2 }+ M: A9 [- g( JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# }2 \  K7 s) d& }- H  tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ A" q# |9 D3 s9 X8 w# ZLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
" X! m% L2 t6 N7 _4 W* jBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- f2 w. b% M# _' Q: R& PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 ]& Z; I  ?1 E" a9 WCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 {5 j1 o* W) LCan I entrust it to you?
0 N5 E2 m/ B7 T! R, ^Entrust my love within your heart
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! W. Y$ X2 X$ ~: `3 Z[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

; {3 j- Z! V7 i6 X. K<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 v2 A, y+ |! K. g" |<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" ~- J+ T* P' G6 Z5 n+ X7 F6 J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 m- s5 d! T5 m" r) P- D" ?3 l1 }<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, j3 U: W% E. ~6 u5 R7 P<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 G% E3 w) `9 t3 D- W: l<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) ?+ b' }1 F4 q  s- c4 {<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 \. W3 f8 j2 B6 _6 T) ~4 I<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# m6 i/ j% ^& ?1 i% g, b" p2 S, s<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 G, [% v, q& u. ~3 ?5 b<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" p+ Q$ [2 I: j<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" ]- I3 |" o- b<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ L5 B( v3 P$ H/ r3 j$ t9 X% s<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  @. N& q  d9 J0 ]% x8 K1 j5 a( v<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  g# h7 m2 e8 r% K2 N5 s4 ?4 v<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: P8 [4 _) W2 S! x5 k<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 J6 J; X4 |' d; A- L- G+ v<P>但我不会</P>
3 T, q. \7 s4 ]) o" y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# ^: g# |% l- ~3 u. ]/ R. o1 u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 V& v) d% B3 }# c! A! ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, I4 ]- n; _% q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 g7 \+ c+ W9 m# [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 q; Q0 a5 v% H/ z+ k) k% ]+ {/ W<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ S$ d2 y+ @6 [/ U<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
1 J) \$ m. D5 {/ Z- K2 N5 }, K<P>但我不会 </P>
4 R% K, r' W1 X8 x- T<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 J3 q3 P, T, Z( v& W5 H2 o$ @<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 @: y( i3 `- [+ ?) h! [<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ a  e$ r; W, J. u3 R$ {+ ~8 ~5 a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ X: a! N6 d6 F8 `$ w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 B8 @$ {* k- K% d0 @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 z2 c$ Y  o: Z/ s/ V- r  Y. m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! S  [0 G, `8 m* M* t* {8 i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% Q4 e0 f- B. ]  o; C# j+ S<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 J& V1 S. J& E2 e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 Z7 n% d. \$ V) [# i<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
) o" {- h2 B8 s& e( q<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

, @" U4 ]7 W' u2 H0 s+ t3 b' ]这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& p* P% m! a# |- x8 ^! C<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>