【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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* [/ x/ _# g: x; o我另将歌词附在此。
9 e4 O3 B" e+ Q4 A1 {$ j. `0 I5 \( bThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 b" \" s7 D) ^7 t1 m' LThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; Z/ p$ K& z' t( FFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 g  P, r8 ]& J2 d* y/ }If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; M3 N6 b  k6 b/ |( P( UWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* A' H  U1 J% O  U9 v+ e& wBut I never did
/ S. g' Q! H" c) C3 S* o8 FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ K& \, d7 w$ R8 EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& j  r, l" `* k# s3 _% r$ pCan I entrust it to you?
  F0 K* T  I) s. a/ z1 e! Q" QEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
1 \, i3 _% V! _4 OWhy is it so difficult to express?
. @# _0 I7 A7 I3 ]' ]5 I$ xI want to confess that I love you,
- |3 a- o1 I0 KBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 _% s7 }2 g/ a1 F2 ?3 l* KIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' x4 R: G8 k( u/ H: B! m% KI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. `$ s6 l! W0 J3 _, BCan I entrust it to you?
3 u7 f9 S- |4 A) @# e$ rEntrust my love within your heart
1 D7 }& t. C* G* NCan I entrust it to you?
) B5 q* A& {( yEntrust my love within your heart
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' M" C- |; T. `8 }, d  ?6 ~[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
0 t& J5 _3 _( _, [0 b6 W) r& V# ^<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 o8 z9 `% P. h9 T% g: X' X6 w<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% U% y9 l  y: r0 r<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& M4 ?, L  y2 l9 I: S. M* J<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, b! {% R8 q0 [! k' l<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 s: S/ Z6 c7 k<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 @5 Q3 J9 f$ e- a<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 P3 }! a* E( T<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
) }# p# ]3 p: C  a<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! `3 u6 m5 e: J. N6 O9 a9 `  Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. ~: m( Y" k3 V5 o' _' h7 r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% X6 d% \" W: V2 C) `& y2 x$ X<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ l4 ?9 r. h0 a<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; P$ w8 K& U. x9 \<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 R: P( J8 {' i6 d5 A+ G<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, ^) l/ s4 g8 ~0 T3 j' A<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ l( v7 A7 R: j2 Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" e) C. X5 s2 F4 X% c# X- {' A0 }<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- N1 T# I, L6 D& W3 A+ D$ Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! Q! I" @8 ?: n0 z9 F5 }! n' n, \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ [$ R, N9 R! N) H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ K" q: |' b; p, z0 p% m<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 U8 I  l& j/ r) j3 [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- t: y* w/ r+ t3 v# X0 Q* r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ Q- h& ?* Y6 f3 I$ p  `<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
) R5 y+ k$ d3 e  T$ K% t<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' ^; ^) `/ D) a6 [. ?这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 S+ k  k" `5 \+ L+ K* X6 d' z/ v这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ |: a/ g* r5 E8 r/ d, ]. D" t<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>