【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 }2 ]. F5 H* S( K* U% t: IThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
. m  i6 L/ u! [( x3 OI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 R: u- F1 f' F0 O  s2 SIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
) u# K, M" h7 ^/ _* e" b7 g* L; VLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" U1 Q5 o5 R; g4 D6 s9 ?& ZIf today isn’t too late,
2 F3 u0 d0 t* H3 nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& J$ ]: R4 ^& H3 J  K  ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
! Z& `1 [( C. u9 }) D# k2 CWhy is it so difficult to express?
3 c+ X/ C9 J* _6 @' k$ jI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ y. \6 c! [: N( JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 N. d* g4 L# A1 E# X# lCan I entrust it to you?
! m5 x. m! @  s! |0 P7 U  d& ^Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

- t$ n1 }( R4 @2 I# y  Q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' V- L; i4 {0 u( C& H. m4 M; j) o. {<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ z8 {/ y8 S1 Z$ f<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 D: v: `: c( g; U1 R( f<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 d0 C7 Q$ z% D3 U% u5 X; K<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( J! Q0 D( c' N( I6 r<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ y5 _2 g; s* t3 V, r' {<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. F) A+ M& }% ^4 s<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 {1 Y3 c- O7 ]. e' F& s<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( w# O6 A  \5 h8 m. C7 Y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& p" k4 L: d/ A% ~<P>但我不会</P>
/ i" ~- Y  X7 w4 ~( `  n<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 |! U  V6 A/ {$ j- `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ G/ {) J' o% f0 y( G" V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 y  _' c$ J3 o0 ^: I  @& n$ V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' u+ |9 I# v+ I& j- ^$ d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( t* ]0 t8 M9 |+ F* \/ S<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, h( e( H$ y% C7 D: K  {5 m# c<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, A8 }1 a& Y. {" l8 p- f7 l+ p<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
( C% d5 i8 z' q- h, j<P>但我不会 </P>
( B( V. Y) b, m1 U+ @6 J) J2 Q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ z( t: m+ [9 H6 V6 t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' d" w; e, i) [: h4 n! \/ m<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; Z- B9 K; [0 S4 B5 T3 p, C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 a9 y9 V9 U' C- X; f4 }<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& f3 i( d" {3 w- l6 X: Q  S2 B* ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: L" h3 L9 ~! n% z! n" T$ H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 i3 ?' D4 b: m7 l+ Y: u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" y+ N6 k% X8 e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* |$ P1 N6 {! E  B9 k' r# g<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>