【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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' o( K3 @+ h) S- X我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 T% o; x% e) u) W4 L$ |* `That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 Z5 a2 s+ w3 d8 kFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* i, r7 F9 |$ m% g2 n  \; o4 @If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
, Q4 l& e# Y6 c1 g/ r1 Z1 q, {Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, g! e+ {4 a+ W; J; i8 r; gI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 |; A7 K) \1 j/ uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 j5 c7 O" E* y- H; [* q1 ELove… just the word love
5 b  @2 W0 K2 M% GWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- T. u0 \; \+ H- `8 T) S9 L6 xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) V. H1 R' \- ~: ~& m9 a# QCan I entrust it to you?
: I8 E& a3 o: dEntrust my love within your heart
# M9 f$ t7 z1 k4 U* H5 n' aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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% B! f! d2 M3 o  N& b[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

" T. z5 [7 m+ w4 z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* |7 |. G1 c! D* S/ R, [& m<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 ~6 P$ a, O, d0 {( k<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 _4 J* S5 O9 i8 a. D<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# Q/ h, z3 e' B9 f. D( |7 z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' j* n0 R) R' F! J0 g; L<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( y- E+ p, ^5 ~. ~$ w<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* \, v5 \: Q9 L! g/ _' A8 ~<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 {* P3 l6 L2 F<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 [/ \/ X$ K4 u<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) W1 {( F8 o5 l0 W5 ]/ U0 p% {6 ]<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 d3 T, _% u0 e) J, F7 R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ p8 k7 q" h, |. ^- L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 e1 a6 |$ E. i, D4 p' @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" o6 o! n2 A" N) ^- I0 H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( ]" E8 Z' `7 r9 Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 U, j# R  V( N$ R) A7 J. ?<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; T+ i8 a4 r( x; _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 j. l* i6 |! }" k/ X: C  w<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 t- g3 i, X9 m7 R. s4 i<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" w& _5 Y2 W; |' z" D<P>But I never did </P>
  D& [* s1 @9 }( W0 E<P>但我不会 </P>
% M/ A! m8 @$ r2 H9 j<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 b1 D/ w  A- E' ~: B8 U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& I# l' z( O) d2 @8 h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& f0 B: P5 L9 p* h2 N- I3 k- y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) w' H# p0 S3 i4 e( V  k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( D6 K; ?3 S$ e6 D# i9 S5 S<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% ?" k9 |3 G+ j; H7 n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' t8 Q# q3 J8 k: W9 q0 T, _<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 ?& i- ~$ [# D! I8 T& i3 u<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

- \% c% d7 f3 w, E这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. p& G8 a7 s- L4 w7 ?" q! ]+ L& o<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>