【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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' X7 N$ m7 T" h- S我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  p, K0 B' e1 o( MThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 @- E+ `# c4 w& G; z+ AFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 h  U0 k7 O+ ~9 k. U6 LIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: A  L, P% i) w- \) O2 YI would probably know how you feel
9 C# ^% M! r0 Z; Y; W4 F; Z9 tLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 W3 t" a/ Z4 {1 |# K) }% BI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) o+ v/ @4 f' ]2 f, X. o) zIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 C9 x2 E5 b1 yCan I entrust it to you?
- U0 E4 p8 S4 w* m7 N9 BEntrust my love within your heart
9 P3 Y! O# y  o: [8 QLove… just the word love
; t! ~) {) I, Z! m' T3 |Why is it so difficult to express?
. U/ \9 i. V, t/ zI want to confess that I love you,
# v% D* @+ A1 J+ R' pBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! l5 @& w% p; T  Z6 Z( EIf today isn’t too late,
( |* W2 Q" A6 G" iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 m0 K3 n. A/ z4 ^- qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& l6 s; p1 J! u4 wEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

* ^$ I8 X) D. q' C) y: J[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

! K5 {. [- U  Y% w- M<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 u/ ?# p; @# x<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" T/ i" t; v0 q" G$ ~$ w) u<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ v4 J( W( E0 i+ \<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& r  j9 ?) P% Q+ ^) r5 {* O( H<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ H0 a0 Q; P7 w: ]1 O8 |<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! @) S" m+ m" G0 E<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 T1 ?5 Y. ~7 @4 Q) p7 y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ V9 M/ t5 o, U  l" R9 U<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 p1 L! x" f, N. N# Y! f. `<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
. t. K0 i5 Y3 [. {# n<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# s$ `& ^7 E$ ]8 x5 h' F<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" O" T6 L6 \6 ^  K$ j<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# ~! b$ z7 a. _( m<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 d5 N+ ?+ w, Y3 p! e& u4 n2 J3 c. [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ e3 i2 R) Y, O9 x6 @<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  r0 X& X& ]) I" X4 K; v. a<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! ]; b/ ^3 b7 G- M. `<P>But I never did </P>
  A! i6 H0 q5 f5 X5 C, f<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% [2 M" Z+ P( k  j8 z+ M# D<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! O0 C' u3 j7 b& G! b3 k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. O7 N" j1 K3 t3 X+ M. D<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# g1 U6 Q& L% H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# d. ^* T  C! a! m$ P2 F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# d1 Z5 k4 y- z+ s1 u) @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 h. T+ R+ w) z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

: [) N3 P* U2 l* m 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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$ v4 H  m  f& I$ n" H这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% }' \+ y6 e1 S; S6 K& o3 B这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( x+ P5 X: u4 I) w<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, |( r8 _2 Z* f2 n* t% @<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>