【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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$ J; z" M; w0 [, n! X) r我另将歌词附在此。
/ {3 m2 a8 A. @The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 b, J$ U% A3 F/ fThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 j" I2 v9 o, o; @7 d2 C- VFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
7 M# H7 J/ U0 T+ P0 VWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
: ]$ ~3 h+ J- V5 \3 e$ dWhy is it so difficult to express?
  }1 }/ g  O0 @4 bI want to confess that I love you,
! w4 R  b8 \' ABut I never did
$ Z( p( T. f5 s5 `! i' {  H8 SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; S, _. ]/ b* E8 Z) h# Y4 mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 G2 Q: L2 S3 b; h! u0 m9 N$ r: U2 f, i5 YEntrust my love within your heart
( c) N& s4 p3 c) c) lLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 G+ j6 x& P; g" Y5 P0 R+ sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 Y* B6 C/ r! f; xCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- N' n7 Z2 x4 C5 ?+ Z, Q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- d, V( ~" |8 B/ e9 J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 ^8 o0 w* @; {' L3 ~  T<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 l* f8 _' U2 y; q6 r- F<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! c* Z8 A+ W* I6 B) _<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( B, ]3 D( P. E1 d( R# F9 }- O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ R# e# g+ L& J8 R! [0 q; g' Q6 K0 C<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' p# x0 m  j; _7 f, d  x<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 D* k8 f* X) j<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
' P. X! x: g$ A' q2 Y# g0 R<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 J/ S- k7 _, `$ X0 y& J6 o( o<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) k# u8 c4 O: M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 W$ e3 k1 M+ ^$ [1 }7 `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( @; z" x: q3 b5 T; x8 k  }! z4 A$ v  A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 V4 k4 x3 E9 A) H<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 U' p8 @: K6 Z/ n+ b% K) O' J<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
4 k5 d4 r2 x0 ?5 j3 @! d2 U<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" }' r* m4 }; S" w- I, [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. ~2 K# C9 J+ _8 e5 K9 K: [4 {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 o5 R/ D7 {! B% g4 W1 m! F<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- `3 K* a3 w; d4 H+ u, a# E3 K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 \# d4 c! U0 \- x1 T& A+ l4 W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* G6 C) a9 N- l2 M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 n9 Z# o3 m5 k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( [6 r4 Z; A9 t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' L! H: A5 m  \2 t; W+ U+ E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

  C+ k- b; K4 f这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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/ @: H) u; P) @+ F; b这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>