【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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# w4 w* C6 S5 o5 k4 R6 ]4 i我另将歌词附在此。
8 O6 b; J8 l$ l# u( V% WThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
6 A2 c5 D! T- s' ~We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- F8 _6 S5 u/ n" o- aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: j# Z' L; ]( E! D+ u5 }% Y8 TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! t7 N9 _1 {5 d; K8 K! ?( lCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
1 O( `/ F1 E1 z% a$ d# ]/ l! kWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 O, \7 ^5 R6 T( I( YBut I never did
7 z% {- q* @4 c4 y  J# _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, I9 o2 Q6 ^5 s: }( nIf today isn’t too late,
, @2 E8 \  T+ }3 @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( z- o# q$ }  ^3 V# w& Y) [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# U) K' U4 ~! {" \) v* b% qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
7 \0 L# d7 `+ j8 KEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 d& A' L4 y" j<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 D0 M/ I  ?" T$ K<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 J) h0 o; C3 l1 W" f1 j# r0 p4 l( c<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ B" G9 k* N/ ?& U$ x  t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# |' o. d. \0 ^<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) k  A+ j2 R* d3 Z+ w6 I! h& Y7 \2 E1 u<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; ?1 M  {& j4 a<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* s8 y% [& G0 j- O" ~3 a<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 y( t$ u2 p' H* [3 ~<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) _4 |9 L+ P' Y. I/ V# j  f<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: F# G; ^1 X+ q) \: v% J& Q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% p8 @' V7 N. v- B; _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  c/ F5 W3 p) K* P, z/ M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 P' ~: t4 N0 r, D! {7 h8 M0 O- _& M1 H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* C8 L- |! e: J% c* `* K  b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# L5 \6 p1 J# u: t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- g/ d: W  c- ]0 N) J% T+ ?<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 B% X& l( J" A- s: [+ G$ n! r<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  d5 w# y% O. E3 G9 v6 u1 d<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ p) |: d  m/ k8 t<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ S( R' A$ q9 n1 L: |( L* w  Q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) Q4 X8 t7 i8 i& s; _<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) |4 ?5 c# E0 ]' B9 n" S. k<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& V& U# }; M5 }: T2 p, m7 A! H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 l% O- j# j2 d/ l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 N5 U# E9 \% }$ o$ q* K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ C; l1 @  V" g6 l$ r. v& c+ q0 B# v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& M+ n- _( z. F" f4 ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 g: A( U: P, }' Z- A0 j+ O6 t这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 `9 H# U: {) g/ F0 H<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>