【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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1 ~! z4 u& x% X$ _我另将歌词附在此。
, n$ H. T/ l6 q  ^8 d' ^! K; [The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
0 e  w0 O8 X" D- r! IBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* C3 e0 ]! m' |' x1 K3 P( ^$ \I would probably know how you feel
7 j( l7 G# [! {1 B# QLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, D! w# z& Q+ VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: O& l! K/ W- L* g$ U# II want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ g: J  f7 E* h8 t, z4 zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 H" C! _5 N, p, H) Y2 [6 I% ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( C- R0 `) t) N# D) F/ a2 I4 x. gLove… just the word love
+ L$ T1 y1 C# W4 q, h5 d. {Why is it so difficult to express?
6 ?7 n. I1 }0 D$ c" aI want to confess that I love you,
5 b# B  u: C& ^( @' `  S* E* LBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. E  O9 L- W1 G, W6 C9 HCan I entrust it to you?
9 Z+ W4 m6 U/ ~( f- Q7 FEntrust my love within your heart
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; b3 F2 Y% u1 r[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ z( c+ m$ U: ^<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 I' \8 u+ `+ @<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 O- p. y0 f( _/ x  e: P<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" I, u/ [, K8 p7 P2 k<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ Z2 ~, V/ v% L0 ?! v) R<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 A$ }9 G1 J" s! s) I$ }: y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 E4 ^5 [9 f% I5 q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 y% h( D, Y* Q6 q* R$ v8 ]<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. a. n$ i4 S1 Z% \<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& J1 H8 T* Z% {$ r! Z/ b<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ s8 y( ^3 J! q2 t6 C) A4 i<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% f5 g( ^8 Y  r( I& j<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ C  h" K5 T- E* t* \. D9 n<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 I$ u+ U: w$ b7 o, K" O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ b. M5 S/ E( x% M* h% N4 I( u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ q- g8 I. b2 X0 @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) N, `" h  R/ i% d<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  K2 N4 t; O/ G2 C) F. N5 I" O<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
2 D" F$ e( _2 g! ?$ ]5 x9 W$ |/ i<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: }9 u5 I4 J- b. u. {6 s, t# I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 ~, W& N! N4 n" S<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 M1 ?$ H1 A6 v9 d; m5 J  A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 S6 D5 e4 l4 }' p. C; L$ N8 x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' @7 Z3 o. g1 [) X; t+ v" \2 G3 E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 u  Z: L+ U8 X3 l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" C0 U+ H8 Q' T/ U! `. _- H6 G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 L* ]1 R8 v4 ~; s# Y$ f( T* ]9 I$ N9 s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 }" j0 K% o, f9 U9 o<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>