【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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! V. K$ I' \" H) L3 u我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
; A% H: M( }/ V$ QBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 S3 e  R* q! r) nI want to confess that I love you,
  l* d& d9 J; Y9 x! G' q/ [But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. k( P6 g% z! ^+ f  N" \- F8 BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# u3 P4 u3 y; D( pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 X1 O4 ~3 u2 ]5 OCan I entrust it to you?
- f0 G8 J0 R% O/ ~# d5 UEntrust my love within your heart
4 l# }( w' I  b9 ALove… just the word love
+ b& B# J3 E0 HWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ h4 Z# Q* ]- }1 hBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ @( E2 i/ e& J! TIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ C2 ^8 N8 g- z$ ]; K7 DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, d% O$ F3 k) r/ rCan I entrust it to you?
( {- o) v/ A! g  q  x: WEntrust my love within your heart
- @! }# w% I. ~( U! D' g6 xCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ |5 a$ @4 x; Y, n<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 T' Y* X  T$ @. e; _<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 I1 i+ ^& Z3 q/ V0 Z. Y* g<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- x& N* h- E2 t9 V! |<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" ^+ ^& `5 [& c, _$ q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 d, o0 C- L, M* G5 m<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 y2 ?, x0 `8 R1 t% E5 I<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 G: A6 k" t( B$ x' W8 W<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 w  O3 u. Y" C0 B% ]: Y9 ?: X<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ j$ j" d* R! y0 [4 h% N<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- M" Z! W+ r! X; k' h<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 q; C( m# V4 f! n) z+ r- A* r<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 O, L+ C) s9 ?1 M' ?<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; m9 w1 W4 G; L; f6 k0 G% A# q6 K<P>但我不会</P>
* z0 R# i% Q  u. J  c5 z5 J) n/ q<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ j; d: Q1 `% p2 l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) r5 v& g& c+ a* e; q, H+ v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# }* i( i# s8 y& R. U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ m6 q, I+ i9 y7 f1 g- k8 B! Y8 k6 D$ X<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 s$ o: Q: M; L+ Q& T- e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: V9 P+ }& R: p; y<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% i: s6 ^6 s9 C3 h<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
; P; {( k1 R& V  \<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 p) e2 X& L, e9 f<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
1 A( S5 f' M( {<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% h/ S' l& j0 b' o* n" K6 B<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% |; Q( y6 M* f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) e4 L, `2 r- m6 V+ M$ `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( d4 f% u4 O; V# _9 T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! S# k# j+ M/ U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, E) X) {( H: Q6 ^. e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! c. z) Y7 v7 n  {& d+ J! E<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ I$ s: v0 k- ]- }" Z& y: B: c这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 p2 Y4 a$ L* `- m8 y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>