【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 d5 H' g; g2 q1 f1 K/ V5 u) M( YI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
" w% u, y, C0 `& oWhy is it so difficult to express?
( T+ b% d- M" ]7 SI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 n4 a9 \, y& J0 y" t' m/ \+ ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" ^* M  b8 w6 T* D* gIf today isn’t too late,
8 d4 L8 N- N" V' VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% ~* c) l! s4 b4 O* ~  f* K/ o8 {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
$ F7 I  y/ ?9 o9 ~8 gWhy is it so difficult to express?
% G9 E( A1 Q5 J1 }. r1 C8 II want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
  k5 Y2 v7 P7 E  |One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ i) K* m. a5 ^/ sIf today isn’t too late,
1 m- w2 t% k1 F" i/ l1 oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& D  J) X- D4 B1 h  g5 Y- oCan I entrust it to you?
3 d" j' X7 S0 _/ Q3 u+ UEntrust my love within your heart
) u1 s3 j* R1 X4 ^Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: k8 e  Y1 w" b<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& d' A% H, N, I6 m7 E7 d<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 P- j& x3 s  Z. a7 v0 x, o<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% y" a( U0 g% g' ~<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, I0 w0 F7 s. x) i+ R<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 N. |2 `  y- U/ R8 z8 ]<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) L% t% G- b7 c) [1 m8 G<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 l+ D  b  i) h, L& _<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. n( Q! M% F+ z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( o( x3 o  z. F<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: l0 _( P2 S& s8 X# }) y: E<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: z1 `# t9 Q1 p: C<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 B7 M' ]( Q( R5 X" [# {<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 I$ G, _' }9 H! z: @' ?<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 O, }- z. _( v1 f<P>但我不会</P>
' K5 `' F5 o8 k2 w<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 U- @" J- a0 f: n, |5 M7 P+ ]! W/ V  z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: [! W0 _* P* g6 I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: Z$ U; f: M! I3 u; l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 T# P+ B- Y8 w' H7 R1 S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; ~4 U0 R. R0 D<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# L; D' O7 I6 j* v<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- e# ]  a3 n* ^<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 Z  W- G" F) G. C" l, `9 l<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' B3 q& a4 u+ L# O3 S) c<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  F" j0 _" W7 C* X<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: h; f/ ?! C* F3 @! a9 x<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* A% \3 J) [/ s8 ?5 A6 W+ Q) a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ F; e* _$ t3 @% E; J1 r* z2 E  q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  V$ N4 e# u! f& \/ e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, a5 K# Y0 k, c7 R  a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: @4 A# E0 X& O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( X: b" h3 Q5 X/ X% `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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* y& P7 m' `8 u/ | 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

3 `7 M2 f" k% n1 u这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& L1 e) x+ O4 w<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>