【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 S, ?' r8 {0 o8 A9 _歌词我附在后面。
1 y7 q/ |' T9 x/ c# uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 ?! s% i  s6 ~. q4 ~* RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; L8 V' X( \) K, R3 n, H9 N2 ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 \0 U2 w; Z: J' {" CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 p: r. _2 b1 G0 x* g! G3 E+ bYou needn’t fear anything
, R0 H* T; q8 I9 g, a' ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 J% T, e% u0 v: b0 S( |I really want to know just how much you love me
4 [, s; p4 ?! k) A7 c6 }8 C) DI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! m9 ~; M! J4 t2 S" c9 GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( P6 J! J) C% q5 D) }- X3 s/ J+ \: eI want so much to see inside your heart
& |* X6 _, b  s  [* VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- }6 q1 P' I, tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 d' B! W  z) g& H5 l5 PI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( ~: o6 X0 Z& ^7 j4 f. `( VWith such a tongue as yours,
$ ]% S( }  Z* n- [& HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 d( a' Z/ W+ t1 i$ P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ }/ Z5 W) {& T% J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 L4 a7 `0 }8 `5 k4 U8 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 ]0 {8 Z7 g0 z) a: g9 X  S4 l4 ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* q) F9 }6 D! ]5 ?+ ^  v* ]9 [2 z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 E0 S' T# }8 @2 \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 K+ |, x: f! B2 i7 a3 U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# [: G+ R9 @6 Q* Y$ T; P8 \; E) S+ t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 u) L8 p4 D2 ?/ j# m5 ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 ]3 o, Y1 O, ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 E: ~( E3 l& T. N9 r0 r; m$ Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" q( I, ?( n8 p: J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 j/ l0 d. ?2 x, {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& @( w$ D7 F( j$ k5 ]: H9 T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 T; y/ G- H; H1 F3 }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 H1 i2 ]# ^/ S5 H- Q8 D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 b6 S6 L5 [) R: Z$ {, P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 P1 w# w2 ?2 e% h: o" [8 Z4 {8 c9 C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! W" G$ q3 D! X& b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* T0 u- H! F; L# X. \+ b$ n  T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, I- ]+ }6 Y* Z% W# }0 _9 m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* \! k3 K9 K5 ~* x# j, M$ R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 {7 T$ V! c' `4 ]: K6 e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 w! m5 A0 l4 }* _( O) j<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 C& W9 p9 X3 [& W. ^4 I! c2 p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 B6 ?8 W# c1 Z7 t+ l. ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 A2 m& F- d; S% Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) X0 h  ^, ~; p1 L# q: ~7 b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, c2 Q7 k. v& S6 W5 L2 Y0 y, c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 d5 i. m5 e& a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- L8 H) [; C9 o: K6 b+ h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# \& _; I( @* n" A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ _% n8 p! v; i! {" y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; q9 ^) U9 l* @, n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 b) V' b6 ?' H) j我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: X/ F3 A( P) ~( m$ R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>