【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- m" f* g6 P2 JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* p0 f9 N2 i8 M+ O  {7 _Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 X: l( Y5 [4 T. j  H# K7 {. PWith the moon kissing it every night
+ e1 D* D3 ^9 c% ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 p( k. Q; e& t% Q9 n* q8 fI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 S! e" E  C$ v, O1 r1 o: C- QNothing can compare to my love
' U2 o2 _4 `) E5 P; G) ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% l, ]9 d0 v+ t( @1 D( d+ f* F4 b( MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 D# g, i; T+ J) }: eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 f. Y9 Q: b  t* Z9 \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 l* u- z! g) i: w- {7 eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ g* L' ~5 z- ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ {7 }+ @# d% @/ Z/ i, BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) z- {7 U( e0 I. m0 r$ `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" w; \* c) P8 u5 N, k- Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 `0 j/ |# t  q- ^6 U8 i# D! V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) C) f- P" E2 p1 P- `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# Z5 f7 w8 @% t2 }2 v' |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( y& Y3 |  M  ^) g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ y3 K* n6 |: \: @$ W+ U7 }  C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) B8 i* ^9 V% w, w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 A- v1 K( \* L2 U: e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 m  Z: ^. D+ Z0 w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' w" V3 K1 F6 ~2 r8 L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ m6 t- ^/ L  Z, x2 H" J' P9 b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  g( S# y+ X0 n* S+ C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 q, U2 z& s9 D: k+ {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! a0 s' Y* G* f, ~2 o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. h6 ~0 V! Y1 O* P& Z: G  ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 _6 Z: ]. I9 L0 G2 O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& i- y  F' K, D% O& b3 ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- Y4 v( W3 K# C  L% v7 r' R& x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# |8 Z& h: ?$ W" P- l9 G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 _( z3 C$ z0 Z+ d' A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 a$ P& N' k1 N$ L# x<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ ~9 w& l* ?  o: n6 ^& j7 s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) @) a8 e' `+ ~' a0 F2 o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ `+ @" S. x0 H2 K! J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 O0 K2 p% v* k+ e% x: \- M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- c9 V% T: W* Y& D+ q& j5 z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% y& ]3 s9 f4 w2 s* `9 h我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ j, |; I0 {8 z  U% F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>