【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 r9 }7 k9 Y- P: ]1 n' d# JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: j% u9 h! R# {4 ?, t# b9 ]9 I4 RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) ~# Q8 U! q' ]% Y5 k$ oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% A2 T7 ]' ]2 ~: x+ E; T* eWith the moon kissing it every night
# P& g# d0 a; ]' r1 ~0 wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" _' ^/ [8 j, W; XYou needn’t fear anything
; Y& \/ F( h0 Z1 O4 \2 Y) V; OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 g, Y3 A, `* O- }Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ F( F! z) x8 V0 gI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( f9 Q1 A. L9 m! }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% Y* }) A' f- L0 u- aWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* q" [+ z- D# K& r" e7 L  a  {* {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 |3 V2 D$ `  I* K0 {; v( l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ u4 f) }9 j$ u$ C/ ~" Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 T( r3 N* z% T  C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# ]' D* p4 ?! _" y+ l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 w, X  Y  E, x. o6 Y! o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& p- i9 t" B& p8 I  l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 u6 W- G+ `6 \( N2 A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 o- V4 S# R* }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; i3 t/ l5 Q( n  P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, ^, S" b* J5 H! a, X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 M. r( n% l! V) a  \3 [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# b, T: I; O  q) q7 m# P! B5 L# b, A% F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ X; l. M. t( Y5 {2 N  e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) P* W- [+ T$ G  w) O7 P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" l1 w: M6 K  H, o- \" w  a" W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! P! q4 ?9 M' Q8 C. Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  ]& P6 U  {$ i7 u% w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ }0 H; f, y1 F" ^5 A; s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ j9 S$ y/ N0 d  k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" B0 T' w" b) u, r8 G5 d& f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) g2 G) r( x) `# G9 p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ W/ x3 x# h! X% g6 R* q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 Z4 S+ S) x! r8 L1 z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, W' X  E* ]& r% \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- j# ]3 y* I. `) K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- t2 I3 _7 Z& \9 |; _. R$ i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* S  k" I" f" a9 _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 L6 S9 u# V) b1 V6 |/ x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

% U  m) k% O  l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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