【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: {" O3 o7 j' p( F: nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 C9 G, ^- I* K/ p6 w$ |1 v( `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, [# R1 J" f( x2 wThe sky is happy down to its soul
  y4 m( ]$ D( E! v' `8 iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& l. u- [' q* U" v4 i- R( QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ n7 ~+ R" c) F0 W) bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) t0 U0 }; H+ s$ ^  [0 C2 I* VI love you I love you with all my heart
5 ]. W% ~  S- ]* j; A+ w1 m: BNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, Z* M; v( U3 J7 {, _I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) F: k$ R& z4 k+ rI regret not dying
' t$ v5 j; D7 y) II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. d) Z0 j) ~2 W4 M+ U! X4 HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 G# f( J* R2 d  ~7 x/ h2 NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& O; L5 X, J/ R; s$ Z/ q' S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) M9 p+ S! c8 N9 V8 o7 n% A4 b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 b+ T) k" \0 \; ?  i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" U( r/ H: o: f  v- _  ~' \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. z0 F: E6 q0 v5 U" A. x) u/ A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 N4 [) V" k& ?6 ~5 L) Z& n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 w- W( W; e! X0 G% F5 d" d1 i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 _' g5 Z) b2 ^6 j' i( c: E0 O- {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, D' a( S7 N* f* W2 ]5 ~  K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 i& L8 G5 H% u" Y0 A0 d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" B0 c8 [1 l% d% Y$ {: r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 h2 P+ h3 O* X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( u, Q( E6 s( t. ]$ E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 }6 C/ P2 Y1 v2 D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 a( p0 `& A$ t  v; V/ g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 B2 N. F! l$ J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( a" q/ {; a, v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& |8 |* X8 K* t5 ?0 M# R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* I' S# `9 @  @$ D1 `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; c9 c8 c7 U2 g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- K" ^, W+ m% T9 G, L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" ?& q" ^& M/ f0 O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! W0 B: O. ]( {0 ~7 _<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 j* x! l) v- x5 ~, t8 ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# `( m3 b2 s- D% T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% y/ {& B$ u4 _/ x7 q0 ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 Y7 y, [$ T8 l  C9 y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 |# s! S& a9 a* z" ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 J( U1 S" M1 I! u, {$ g3 x) n$ E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& K: b4 \8 B3 M7 U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) m, g7 _# ^$ ^; X% a' _& r4 r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  W2 T& A1 u1 a- C. `9 Z9 m& I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>