【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ p9 _8 s- C' d  l* N* XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! t. y' E# U+ b* A0 O/ _Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 Z. G/ f$ V" ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% q6 {& k- E, ?2 g! U- UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  s3 q7 V+ T8 n/ D, J8 G8 |. y+ VEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 K2 u0 E5 N. }" x1 e* Z5 X; s0 BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 a3 J5 `$ m- h  TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- Y$ {$ y3 [( R% k, I. wI regret not dying
3 {& Q$ j' h7 P! F% JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. p$ h. l. n# ]4 H( X) wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 f. L0 X5 M- c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  `( M' K4 G( ]2 T8 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. G* I* i2 M$ O8 p0 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* Z) _3 ]  Y- Z0 s% j; V) K; A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: v' }+ @2 H2 K4 d& o- K6 L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& c; S/ R* o: o7 X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 P* P2 t8 j' `4 U6 e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& r: \4 x9 a& V7 B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 b! R% U9 _; I6 ]% p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& x5 e( ]' O1 h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, r. |8 f8 d+ ^1 ~" V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 ]+ ?) |' F2 L* K3 G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 G( V9 R1 ]# M2 J4 e+ p& z% n* R  c<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( D- V3 K: N0 z6 F$ `. R! R  b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" D5 y: H# h) ^3 C! m' M# u0 N! l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' x3 Q7 l, w% V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 P$ ]6 h& N0 T3 u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. U5 v# Q# G3 ]2 P9 L0 ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& M% M( G$ l! m2 O9 j, }+ U; U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- x, G' v+ |( S+ F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ X7 W, T- P) ?6 R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  u) K- ?8 `8 I. u  O# w8 X1 \2 z: o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. W  n" v) H1 g4 m( ^3 t; ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. b/ _  }& U$ }& }" Q! _+ Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& @& J; K$ J+ Z  F" }( \% e0 K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- R) [2 j$ D/ o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- t/ o! ]) w+ z+ C! T; F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  C! g) C5 d+ m, I7 H; V5 U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 y$ n( x1 `% v. A) e% O2 m: q- R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: n8 F/ H. i9 J, E5 |' c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. B- B* C2 u" z' Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: e- ]0 v! c, f1 t) o我请你剖开它
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$ z$ d2 y1 p4 U7 H, I! E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# h/ D7 a. {' ?5 m/ O! v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>