【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  H' A6 u7 R( n: E% a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 {: Q2 p3 C& z5 X! \; O" z' MThe sky is happy down to its soul
' Q, U1 d! a' t8 {With the moon kissing it every night
; `  [' w6 l  BSeeing the sky content with its love
! s6 o; [0 Z* v, k8 o; o) x& cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" f4 M1 n- E$ ?- E8 M! V$ RYou needn’t fear anything
( j8 d9 A( x1 o* f  O; d" L* a& i, ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ E" B) T* \% U1 E. n( TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; k4 {& s: g, z3 t' C$ [) QNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 O1 ~2 c  \/ B7 ^+ II want so much to see inside your heart
$ f- q6 a8 n4 G: V  |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& x* E' p) i" Z7 ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 f8 ?4 v# c# J2 |With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ _4 x& o9 ]( {2 j5 ]$ @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 n4 S: o% O- M9 l6 j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 @% L+ C  A# x6 c' t  w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& U5 w8 r+ V3 \4 [9 L; T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, H0 ]% d2 a+ C: g2 o( m5 K9 H; T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 S0 |2 L% _  {9 l( F: [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 e+ ?; ~2 ]' u+ _' `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, w( Z2 Y; b. R0 p1 C9 v8 M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& ~$ c: z' x/ F$ q! V' a' h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, V) o* {2 c1 l( }2 i0 ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 g# v. l' D! L4 o! B9 Z<P>你无需担心</P>
* h% D) H- ?/ d+ T' H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 p; A  b. U% J2 L: w! W2 P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 z( {* E" p+ E: U" R  ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 t$ V# E8 E( [. e. U6 U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 ]& Z8 _) J  ~! d+ E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 B4 ^, V' }# D- E  y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 ]6 s; h6 }6 D# S+ u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 Y% ?# L1 {. D' c% Q& {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* w5 T8 Y0 T( d+ A/ t$ l  t! f& I9 i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* D6 O6 C/ E* l6 i/ k% d# d$ g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# m8 _' ?/ A# j0 k8 E! @* b# ]6 z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& S" [4 j( Q' L  Z+ W5 a<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 }  F; \. B0 g. Y& K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ X6 S) }! l% G6 p, g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" X) f. k3 f- m5 u$ l4 X1 E* d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' i; G9 T7 Z6 s; }' u' V# y我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 e) i2 |1 a: K7 T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>