【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
) V7 f4 O, y8 w% A/ ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* {; b/ Z4 K5 y0 w: NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 J$ J& E/ ^& WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# E* {4 [4 Y1 z8 L0 aWith the moon kissing it every night
$ z" [' }. E8 `$ z7 I) JSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# b, X3 K$ z/ G9 R& KI really want to know just how much you love me
/ ?6 R" y0 S. {$ j6 kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% ?; b$ z' c; w3 P6 pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ g( a8 Z7 C6 O) TI want so much to see inside your heart
- R: H* X0 ]+ P2 }1 ^1 q  B$ vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 o; U/ e" W0 d% x4 @7 i0 k5 w6 y' CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 B' |7 Y8 h) n4 j. S( MI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- n4 `5 {, j5 S1 B4 o: u- d; m( T$ kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 h6 B: j0 |/ \0 l' Z, ]+ D( rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' g- ?7 w, @, J$ h( U. F5 q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  d5 e* f" p. Q& A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 F3 v8 a& J6 S" O6 Y; p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! a! l/ X# C% \: n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: d2 D! C0 a- a0 ^2 w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 B/ r( n  a& S6 o% H5 O, x1 X# ]5 D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 U- q4 d- Y" P' N; g) r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( S( l4 l/ B+ r9 o3 v$ j( S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 ^. U" G7 H- V* R<P>你无需担心</P>
) o$ @+ ^3 N3 n( ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 [: s- j. U1 p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% O* O9 r5 J# c8 w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 u& }4 F( H4 C% A1 b2 |7 p" Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ \- P. t5 f! O, O  d5 k' s( O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 n+ I8 l4 ?; R- {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ x% Z! ~+ m3 N/ b! a% g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 [% K  f5 Z9 M! k. U- z+ w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 R: b4 S1 n6 Q) f$ {+ Q4 J6 t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 b0 w* R8 g* J) E! U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 O6 Z5 G0 [1 B8 C# [# ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. o. v2 \" l) v1 D# c; B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 Q/ Q1 e: ~5 x# U2 ~! K; k( U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, G4 [6 Q) Y8 G5 L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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2 Z: f% l$ g. u$ z. ^$ L* g: \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>