【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& }3 n: i( V; N3 l5 fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- j) n( L7 N" b! C8 sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" Z: }0 }+ l5 }6 fThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 \& H1 I7 R- I* s7 G- VWith the moon kissing it every night
) u; @! E, @( @9 NSeeing the sky content with its love
7 F9 W' p4 L* z4 |) m, g) |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 g, B+ c  a8 S5 ]( t' F4 Y6 v% zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! F" Q9 h# F" {8 e6 kEvery other word you utter is love
8 B, j) y: O+ Y4 QI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% P* \3 X0 x6 E( y6 u# t  YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 F$ s& F. X: ~9 f8 w- F6 [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: ?% T8 e9 }4 u5 j1 p1 J/ gI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* z' v' |+ w% P# U0 p9 NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, @9 h; g' e8 \2 l0 M# o2 URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# U; C; e  z) H# ?& g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' I/ R7 N0 J5 W- ]7 Q' c& g<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, A2 D1 W2 E) E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ T& c4 F7 ]5 [! M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: c9 `/ ?1 s7 s& B2 S+ B<P>你无需担心</P>
" c+ S! O( A/ a: ?/ `( p& u  V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 f! t4 E3 e# q; X- L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 ]" D, Z  _1 [2 U/ v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" E- }! t6 |3 Y6 N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  \3 s: l) u! `! p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' o" F6 L. T5 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 G7 L* {  k" E/ R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 N5 u, W2 i# L: c& t% ~" C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" |! }9 W' u& k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 M) ?# L- a; L5 Z; d+ ?6 O& n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ R/ G. h4 W! \$ W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% |* m7 O: n, F% I- s4 C: L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: Q) S& T+ _/ u" \3 {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 j6 ^' X; e# ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ [* y" ?; t# U4 D; R; R1 w( x+ R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, o$ o; q# a" k( m& i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- L" I8 a4 i2 l! ]9 M$ f5 M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& a9 r0 P3 T1 a1 Q) |/ E) ]) I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 w, K7 G0 k" Z2 {5 O( C4 d: b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! [& \) _& t, ^" d4 }  U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! @2 f0 ~8 O( y) F% ^1 [6 K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 L' L& p! g. [- [9 y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& h5 e" z9 G& l; }3 D8 c" t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& o; |  ?3 ^/ O" F5 e. l  b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! a  N' T5 W8 h% {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) P+ u7 J0 B# f9 E- W' ^4 T# _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 w" z$ G8 P. X/ [$ \1 j我请你剖开它

7 {9 c) @. e5 D3 h/ f' x8 F4 z9 ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>