【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 ?) l" x" C, q8 F+ k. _  d4 b6 o! \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# z" U* m) g$ z4 m, U0 S2 nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  `& W  F: M0 U1 @With the moon kissing it every night
0 {2 [: V! w( ?& N* R; g$ DSeeing the sky content with its love
2 i/ n4 i: y( gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. v! I* T' c0 c+ l3 N3 _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 P) l' a9 ?* v0 p; `I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 @; R" b" w  t/ VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* n, V$ n3 d/ T, c; g+ E7 D: m% iI want so much to see inside your heart
& ]! @$ c7 c5 k3 \* ^. P/ vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 N1 V7 Q( [: a/ _I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 a; {, M3 @9 y' Y5 DWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" F8 S) d/ q8 A! V, W/ @" VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" y4 F4 K4 G2 ~' f: a+ i  G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ r' }: j' n- W/ v. Q( E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" P( Q: v+ G" H' Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; V& H/ \2 Y2 s& h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) L" j$ N9 E7 P! k3 r* b, g<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 U3 D1 X% T2 O! y6 Y' p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- t3 z9 t9 J0 \. S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 _7 F. t+ j* M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 O) c& b$ e% s, n) D9 z' R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 W* ^; k$ W1 U" W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' i/ n7 f; X& V/ y4 U$ o0 G$ I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ f! `. T# ^1 H: r3 @" F7 x# t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ s0 X3 ^5 q3 G- d+ ~. t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 G3 T8 l' q/ h8 x5 V( V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 d' B% i& V9 A+ @. B. B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ e! }- A) o/ x2 L7 ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# [! X8 _7 G8 Y; d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* ^+ o0 b0 D4 p9 p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 @3 k8 D* S2 H5 S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! k2 N2 n8 M6 c9 y9 q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 U. t! b7 ^& i/ @' Q; k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% U4 ^$ |$ N, S6 u. @* s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 |" y5 Z, A  N* V9 \9 _7 t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: s- g/ `1 `# L9 ]8 \( x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
; I9 s- {" W& Z2 r6 W
我请你剖开它

' C5 J" \0 ^& [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>