【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, s, D4 [# Y# e" ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 M, }; O) o( ]2 T4 g6 QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 r9 z& M3 y2 B( I5 ~The sky is happy down to its soul
0 @. V3 c+ A3 k  }* V; k( K) Y& _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 u# R/ t" A9 K0 Q2 v. x+ G! ]You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( _- |5 Y* x; e' T! GEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' a6 t# B+ j& k; KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 i$ `* W6 o& t1 I( SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" D5 V5 |: i# E  _! |I’m still filled with fear
( T! U; X8 w4 Z) c1 o% WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# w4 ~7 v, |6 C4 uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% }" i2 m, G$ T2 U3 Z# BWith such a tongue as yours,
" c# d* E+ W0 v. Z5 R- N$ ~5 _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% w* q) P8 I# X5 c  ?  u9 s& Y" _' WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: O6 [0 I9 y4 u; L0 G/ E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 |+ g- A3 p2 b% w9 d8 b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 ^0 f/ C$ y0 B9 o5 ]  l$ a7 X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 E) {$ b  A  _- V8 Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ v9 l- F  L# y4 E% @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 c- L- Q' z, z* E! H$ J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 @. e* Q4 |" B( m- O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- [! B& z- a* d" A, a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! b; E, V. j2 g; ~1 g! W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* }+ a8 s, p* O3 s& d) `" z5 b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& x" e# ^" ^- |, c. [7 E! Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 s1 ^7 q4 ~  L4 d% |# ^1 `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ [3 j  f$ [+ Z: B, o: X1 I* D! g3 x! `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
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<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 {2 S  Z6 f' u( F0 E6 U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* K; A5 p. R8 i9 k5 R+ m* k1 M: B/ {/ r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! @# g4 V, i6 r" d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: K" n# q- \: T/ R/ h1 Y: w* c& C; X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 r: s8 z4 G& U- J0 i. R4 x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  t3 i- X0 S- Z% U2 w" _% N' L我请你剖开它
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: ]- n4 D8 Z- ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>