【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
( T& Q" j- s6 l7 r5 {$ b* cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* H4 Q+ |$ g. L/ HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 R5 l3 m. M% Y2 m, N3 B. J* XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ ^5 Q2 I& n' h7 o( jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ R3 v# Y2 k2 U7 h- i. }" zWith the moon kissing it every night
7 X- I( g! z+ P( }. Q) iSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 W# [1 h$ m5 \: f+ Q3 j5 D8 z+ ~I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 @' E" [- t* ?: Y8 m  yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 T" |5 {% ?6 Z- q" yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" ?1 F! `: g9 FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 W- D) v5 ^4 M9 f" Y; V, W1 ^! ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 m; s" [; H' d4 y) AWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! p: }. x7 e- g5 uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 q/ U: G, |/ m  J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" ~0 h6 }/ [# }, _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 B  p: R& x6 k& |; s4 v: S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 ^" x+ r4 m9 i9 ~- E3 @2 j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 {* Z# E7 i- r6 ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 B. o1 ]0 C3 ~. L5 p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" s. j) L& m. S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 k/ U3 v9 d0 t7 S/ w  P- ~, N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, D; |4 n: t; M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( F0 g/ a5 ~0 f4 q6 K6 e9 k$ Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ l+ P. `- v/ d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' o0 p7 f9 s5 f) E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 P) O/ r/ {3 P+ c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ \5 W( @; n* A1 g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: c# i* {* o% U4 [4 N9 \2 G1 f% F: Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  e+ E# E( j& w) n! [8 T4 o# L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 O$ a1 ~4 Z9 h& G* w. U; [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" I9 g% u) u& d4 R% I/ B+ W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 _1 R* ?' `; h& D4 F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! W" I$ c) t" \- S6 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 d9 [9 ?/ M. q: s5 ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( i4 F* ~* _$ j3 v4 T5 x2 i2 \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. o1 Y5 j; v9 E% n/ J, n, r3 n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
/ _. n- h* r, ~. o+ _7 o5 \4 z$ I
我请你剖开它
( Q9 u( ]2 O; }) ~% }$ C" U% E
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% ~2 y4 ~2 o9 a( P$ S( m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>