【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* p! Q7 ^/ ^) x; MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ z. k2 \8 s" o" O5 ]/ B) E% CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 V% f& Y# ?: s' a/ O) EThe sky is happy down to its soul
# \" i6 ?2 q$ o- OWith the moon kissing it every night
0 \7 L8 O* d% j6 C2 y4 iSeeing the sky content with its love
5 J/ E9 j2 R- r8 f2 }' B, fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 `. `" ~; E1 o8 V+ N( hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" o0 U, L# y! Z+ n- nEvery other word you utter is love
& p: |5 ~/ y( d- uI really want to know just how much you love me
1 ~& Q% x0 y& P, L5 i7 KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. s- {& P2 u2 _/ @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% y7 V; `1 q* a- }, @; LI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 O1 U6 P+ r; i( }4 L: N3 z; ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 W1 j; W0 f6 K- f- }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 ?; K2 I2 z' V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. R/ ^$ a1 }) P( g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 g0 A' _9 `/ S  Q/ O) J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 T+ q" Q5 o: X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ s$ l' s& A" Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( S/ t4 L; n. W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ ], ^  y9 L( z5 r; ~* s6 I1 J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ d: W/ M$ {* e4 d$ ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ N* u: T. ?! j, i- B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, T( q# u. X. i, u) W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 c  ?1 E& ~- f6 i! I. v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' u; b6 S. M" Z& }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ D( X: D3 r" V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 r9 s  T6 K1 g& ?1 r1 y<P>你无需担心</P>
$ V2 Y9 }! L2 G. w) C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 C# ~8 [$ ?, Z5 h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, N  C1 o# X6 ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: b* B2 x& J* N; `3 f/ X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  j3 S' O/ T- g8 g2 l; W. P- a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% P7 n0 w& Z! h: c9 F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" ~' K% c3 ]! E/ a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 ?7 ~" S2 [* N0 I( j$ w* l3 B1 D<P>I regret not dying</P>
. Q; F3 l! U( I* y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  T/ Z/ Q0 M+ N: t" N. C" N; K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" v& L( `  l4 z3 C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& P* f8 s, L6 A6 d& w8 \7 j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 ?  w6 }8 [# p* t3 r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* z3 j5 b& B7 I; ?; l# b; s7 G% D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- e- Y6 o; i; |! P1 _, s4 A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. g+ P0 W6 t' D% \. {3 n& }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; e2 ?, i" e* ]  o8 ^6 q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>