【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 R: P& K2 A- [9 Y# H2 J6 K; O歌词我附在后面。
& _  p$ e& t& v' `- CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 f& ]. S4 R( P8 R/ \' o3 S0 D% t- sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; d1 B$ H) W, p9 a# RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 j6 M' [/ j  |8 F3 b8 ?& H$ P8 dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 G3 K3 Z0 B$ ~+ W6 g9 XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, ]& p" I) l  E' mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 \) p9 j' z) H& `9 F( w( e" I' EYou needn’t fear anything
2 W/ c$ ?, f" {1 @: EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ n7 Z, [+ z: B( z; LI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, a# k, \6 F4 M1 X9 F/ r% [! {$ P5 rNothing can compare to my love
6 ~0 Q& Q0 C) p& J6 p/ zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 [( g# E- |5 _8 ~( \* t! SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! Q) {3 B4 s8 C7 T* |$ l7 }% Y$ q5 I1 CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ W4 {( d4 U1 u" i: i( `, w. oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 W8 ]* j" J+ z$ W) f$ sWith such a tongue as yours,
$ b1 _4 g2 {. V' ?5 g5 d; VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% {* b7 }5 j' T7 o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" a$ ^+ l6 P2 w$ R' @7 n  i( [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 Q3 }: R+ Q2 y# t  x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" O/ M9 M, k( q2 K+ L! l8 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 m& Q: X' U; W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 y+ d1 h0 e  h1 B% Z& p6 P# `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 k( u1 I0 {& i' s& t* l/ K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- N* o6 K$ {) |, M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 w. K: r4 [+ ~  b9 d  t) ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 W. y. o6 o3 C- O' B) i- i5 y- L/ U5 Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% ^( i* ?' w( l, b% x' J' g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! f$ V; Z( G, u6 u$ r! B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ ~7 k% f0 e+ x# N+ \: h7 t$ i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 ?7 \) f; U0 N8 q# R& u2 }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ D# U7 S: _5 ^' i( P  M! i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 Y: M. ]4 P5 j" E* ]6 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 e2 t5 p8 f) M$ z  E& T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- `) T, d* n( ]  i% I8 X& k2 W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# O" t+ J+ F% @4 V, a. E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 l+ r( ~4 n8 q. c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 v  V- K6 C' J; y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" g! x2 g2 z& d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% r# i( B) M+ P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ M% \7 F% c, ]- ?8 A' m" q" l: W, p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) g1 l, i5 F6 _$ i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 U% J' N$ P$ ~" X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' q4 u3 N1 g: x/ S: H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! Z0 p2 d: c2 z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 j+ _* @! T' C3 Y$ r3 g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; V, U& y% V- m1 P/ L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; e1 d+ j8 e! l4 l# ~8 C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* P9 l4 V1 R; h/ W  G, D5 F/ N8 ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% T/ P7 `+ p' {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  H- G! l# t8 b8 j; H/ E: x4 |, U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>