【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) t; D- }# N2 i" q. L! NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* ?7 f& [6 Q+ M( |# W- qThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 C4 z( ^1 K& e& h4 w9 [+ TI really want to know just how much you love me
- K( F" f; L. Y' K& ^6 cI love you I love you with all my heart
/ Y' `( c/ v' XNothing can compare to my love
& u' A% M; M: I2 g# lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; r9 `# R' d0 u3 F0 R3 U$ @2 ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" x( q& ]8 z: A! w! yI regret not dying
* g1 l3 u9 Y1 d* ^! UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 d' [& S- x3 G6 D2 ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 r6 O: L8 N* Y  @. B3 ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 K& F" e7 v2 m+ h% _* s* Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 i' w2 ~) [5 L8 {' P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 u% c6 a# v) ~6 b4 @; S0 w, x5 g: q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. i- h% @. ^$ m4 e3 ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ G& ?% {; f- a, I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' ?- D8 O, e6 }( X5 C* V6 P% I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- F9 _+ q' \- S0 ?+ N% r" l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! n" A8 [# _! L1 U4 q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, j0 S3 v! C; Y& T3 e* C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 H, d3 n% e% d<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' ?" K& o% @3 S" k3 d) H5 |0 H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, g" j' C3 {% l( j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ V% P& v. h& B$ [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 |7 v; a0 W. p$ x. U+ A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 |9 a" D$ }: s2 L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 w3 K9 n0 L: C: ~2 K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* a; t5 a/ C" s! ]3 M  T8 Z" U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 ^" b3 ^' [) H; ~$ Q$ C& _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: K4 I& p! V* e9 c, O  Z6 J; s. N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* [( X8 Y3 {# e/ [: j! h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) g" m  P8 @( f/ P# H/ i* s3 q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% a, o5 L8 L/ Q" M<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% X! [: s- \4 J& j( m  t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ O3 ^/ _# M$ N- _  y4 `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 T2 y  ]9 O6 O  ?, v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 j! \. Q5 @1 S0 B2 {) w7 D2 I2 _  [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 F3 x3 N, P  B! z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) X- s" H; j8 s$ l' ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. `1 C! k3 ?' E& Z8 n2 C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>