【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& A# z. ^! Z( z* cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 z. F( }' j$ `2 A/ u( X7 TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 i4 U0 q3 L/ u) q* jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% b! X7 O( C$ TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! c! P9 p5 k! c9 b% t4 T% JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 n2 L0 P3 J3 c- N  ^* v" hSeeing the sky content with its love
' ]2 q) B+ y: o, s* C7 X7 A. x" NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 i$ R) t1 a. _& X: X% u& @; BYou needn’t fear anything
! ~1 x; K) ~# q0 ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ N( o% p! B+ S5 E0 t0 \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" w: {2 u& F( @# E# lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 N2 [' u8 i. _8 g& q8 k9 q* PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% f( A7 w) n4 ?- S2 C8 H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( y# k, g0 v1 B# U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. m: `  u5 Q' u4 v/ b# Q. w; i% v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" c  a% u. J* U6 j0 X# x4 P1 z! \, }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& ^, k% M8 F7 c9 o. y4 Y! p# X# s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& W3 G- u4 p9 {/ K) m! n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' k5 g7 _9 W7 r7 n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* _: S6 A8 s! m( M: D  s% q) b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 O7 j9 b# J0 ~2 @5 _/ a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; K) I( V, A, S( v& x7 F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ H: h, c! s+ u6 C: W& Q5 V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 W! Q! @( i, I! V$ m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) \2 j6 N  k, V: S$ B: k. n# ^0 E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" {1 A4 m- b1 K; Z# `9 Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; \5 M# d. {1 L( `5 p: C' P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 |; S. v7 y: _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" V: r3 ^" ?' E- b9 X) ^* G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" [& |8 d. W6 f# O. C4 c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) r; ^7 a9 }2 x6 s$ w+ |  j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; U: {' P+ U9 G+ {$ A8 e- H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ e; m! A* }  p" v6 c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 y, G- o# v6 \5 c( L! i6 L$ V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  L; R5 m! F# T* ]: Q/ t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ H  q1 I' @* z1 i) S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' m) I1 b* p! D9 H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) M5 I6 y+ k* K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 i2 B  j" `& m6 E% L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 ~: j" n' }' v: V8 ?% j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 ?, j* Y0 p* U9 A, f- \7 A' l& r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' E  r6 q; r- ?/ \( ?! T; V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ @$ q1 D# ?1 L: C$ X  j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; o9 }6 k* m( d我请你剖开它
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- g' Y( L/ p$ f, N6 ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 _9 A  p' W3 p  R5 Y. Y" v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>