【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, R& O& H& ~: \6 ]5 P+ |歌词我附在后面。
/ i  C/ I3 R7 X' W1 _3 SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 A( C% P  Y5 o+ rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 E* X" X9 C5 ~( ?" gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& p1 @8 K- R; Q( s6 G5 @: iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- w+ L9 g+ e5 \- t: AThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! u) g9 M) u- t! K; g9 ]You needn’t fear anything
; H+ ?( @0 R0 Q# B& `) oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 Q" l8 z$ x5 k  M5 }" Z+ TNothing can compare to my love
; Q% E& ?7 \( z" [1 S/ i1 pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: S6 k; {% T8 h6 B% q; G  Q# wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' s" c1 U' t) c# C. NWith such a tongue as yours,
' F. @2 G, s4 u% i# fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 {. y  C$ W) t. A  F0 O8 S5 z% C( BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. ~, U: f/ t0 v0 o$ V$ o9 |9 _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% f6 ?/ Z* }! ~: j( y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 t" }* m/ y+ X. d' I. V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 A$ A2 B) d5 j* U3 j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' Q9 @! L$ N, a: Y4 K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 N+ ]5 j$ r: o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 s# y( c# Z: d+ A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( K- O7 {8 c7 D& H/ g7 ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 z9 f6 F! I1 J8 f# |# X! ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. b0 [) Y" X3 t% l( m" X' K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- x% d% Y5 V% C$ T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 [; P6 ]4 q) A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ q: U  x7 i8 F! x: H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 W5 p* k. B5 |  `4 k3 }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 ]8 R8 a- e  p! `$ {6 G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 Q* F+ G/ N* p7 O7 t8 T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 }# U3 V# V5 {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' x8 R" r) E1 R$ ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 J8 I' M3 C- n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) D  R# y" t. z( |  K& G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: M; G  y  M: W) a( t% b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" v% ~% d. W8 i+ F4 W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 s$ C4 N) _- ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 a; t0 G( u% o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 V( D$ m5 b, |7 @  g) b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 g2 J. R2 |, X我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 \/ P# t3 q' `6 {4 {8 E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>