【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 w' G7 M* J$ j7 l0 Y1 [- M歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 e5 z; y1 `; @6 _2 a: PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 |9 m9 h) M1 `$ B( xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ J4 Q% \, }8 n$ [% ]The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 v1 a- d$ U5 L$ }9 W" XYou needn’t fear anything
; t; k% }1 r7 Q+ H+ {+ AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* X$ B! \0 P& CEvery other word you utter is love
% V. c. c$ P# _I really want to know just how much you love me
1 Y' v3 J. @0 v3 X9 SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' d9 X0 k7 R( l; l/ z" ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: L6 k+ X7 I+ E4 W$ @7 uI’m still filled with fear
' ]2 V% C' {9 u6 q( wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) ]# U+ A; X3 J7 k7 lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 U- q: J5 ?. {( _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 h2 V$ G$ B. N+ o9 F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 }3 o( `7 K8 q. Z5 Z3 R0 C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ i- g7 w; @& S$ z* h* n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 [' E, W- A7 B+ t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- `% Y, N  [8 y) n* ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ F+ e, O' F. `& H, s2 c# e4 D8 ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 q! _( E$ {. t+ S9 ~3 `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' k' K5 }% W) r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 R" n- X! W' ?, C& ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 q3 N) J/ n/ W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, I. Z  F0 B% v2 W* r5 Z  l/ N<P>你无需担心</P>
- j/ H2 l9 o% S6 e, I0 v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( _+ m0 j# O; P) E8 j  n, _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& ~' d1 h9 I2 Y* k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' v( ?- B' Q& w, }) L6 Y; ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 Z+ g3 g3 I' S# p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 R$ I4 j6 X1 Y. M$ a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ i& {7 X; |4 r4 Q9 n! b& D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) \4 e' }) |4 u( _4 D+ }: Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 N* G/ E9 q0 Y8 Z$ c8 t- k& Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ \7 L, K2 ]/ R- s& _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 L) A& E- X, E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 r# {! g5 H- Z5 ~- v2 G我请你剖开它

% b5 L* J8 I0 f, A2 O9 k4 } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>