【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  Y0 o: a/ E) \- ?8 B歌词我附在后面。
% Z/ t3 o7 r& @# O# _  Z7 W' dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- C* X/ Z2 g# x& B9 V" J5 aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 X2 Q9 t' E+ f3 X, T/ X2 dWith the moon kissing it every night
% Q# Q6 d! w, fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) d; H: @9 c" ^Every other word you utter is love
" `: T' \1 Z- AI really want to know just how much you love me
( A1 p* |2 o# K& Q; [9 ?9 zI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 M7 ]3 g7 v8 a) HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 {/ P  l; h+ DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' e/ L" ]- g$ \) W( ?: ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 H) x$ W4 V" c2 c0 @' M+ a9 dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) I' u! E* f) NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" t# Q, \0 S: W, rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 t6 R& a* k$ V9 F2 ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ S& T  T+ b& Z* i( e+ C3 s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 O9 N6 `* P8 {* Z2 K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 S5 Y& i# G: ?* Q5 u5 p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 M* t& ^7 H' p1 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 l5 _6 @7 k. o1 |/ k1 T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; o; l2 j; |; j3 [6 U3 J# L0 _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) T' r7 O% Z) q3 B8 O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 a: A# f4 j9 x7 Q1 N2 L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% U) L  U* g  _8 v6 C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 P5 D$ b( b. c* p2 V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 x5 ~, B, a, z! [5 ^+ s. M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& X$ D) Z- C$ b* A% _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 W+ U4 Q" I6 D9 d( k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 C3 e8 n& ?" L8 T; N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 M( [! G1 x0 M1 Z! U. Q5 @0 T% ]& w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' G! e1 @% y8 `) \* [3 T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( l* A1 U" U9 y& U1 q我请你剖开它

' h4 v& P/ F: ]0 C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ W# H- b& n4 w6 N0 G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>