【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ r# C( {' W* v6 i3 HThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 t# M! v( U7 EWith the moon kissing it every night
2 \9 ^" i+ X# ASeeing the sky content with its love
( b! W- ?8 `( R! i! G6 EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 }7 ^4 S! `( `+ w9 e; uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ G, W7 P3 C* u9 ZEvery other word you utter is love
  V: Z" P5 c: G* II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ L/ f- C9 w  ?$ N, l  }. fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* f0 n# E; J& x4 R# BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# J3 o% K! m) x3 TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 d, \7 L3 \6 dI’m still filled with fear
9 P" V2 Z6 Z- MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 ]9 A" F; Y5 ]1 eI regret not dying
# p( K, M; Y# ?& uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 K/ ^% |5 u9 Z1 [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 N0 z* Z: E' u# y- V" |2 r7 aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% i5 e5 d9 Q5 Z$ F9 _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- I' p! g$ G/ ^" S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 G/ _3 e) ~4 G, s9 ^! b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) W9 r! {9 n  b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 l4 ~( D  c5 `  g/ P5 ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 o; |7 B2 S) _6 }. X7 }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, W- P- ?+ h4 G3 ^( C6 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- V, f) _% l/ t7 j  e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 m& J' ~( C' O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- n/ G# {' M, r& k2 T( b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& f4 n) w0 C5 J" n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, y" j( i, X* \! y6 V( G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, m  ]& }0 _( n- ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 d, Y* F, a2 X2 l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" h/ T0 G1 ]" P/ f$ T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! w, J3 w; y! }. w9 h<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& x* b- r: \5 [8 t0 k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 P- E$ E9 d; z4 |0 s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>