【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" k8 B6 w7 I% ^3 o  U7 Z* iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; |" A! p) B; JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 ^5 ]5 _3 p7 \/ ?; J  b" I- Y9 r; XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 W, @$ b* V6 W9 V& U' _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; `+ P- y9 @4 FYou needn’t fear anything
" V$ j( b% |2 R4 k0 oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; B8 W& `5 k' t& ^: x! E* PNothing can compare to my love
- V) p  V; B7 t3 ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 }( G8 ^5 M1 _- X' XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& p- @" o% X, eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! A) C+ @( [2 G9 ~* _I regret not dying
" U1 A6 ?0 ^& S6 M- hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 ]5 E7 E4 F+ X1 D5 }With such a tongue as yours,
6 o! I! `9 l8 Y7 P$ c5 j0 h, I* fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( ^! x* K1 x+ W- ?. C9 T& ~# eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ F( L" l( r" B# i- X# o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 z& B: K& e! j' q* T- r, O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  h. r& A% p3 u* S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  o$ g# w- W7 J( v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 z/ e+ B! _; y4 I/ w: F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! u3 f! v8 u3 }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 f* R6 F9 {% _& c- }1 p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 Y6 B9 O( t7 s6 ]. S2 R% P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& r( Z- D* s2 H$ @& W/ T0 ^3 L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: V! K+ u5 t. l% W; [6 C* e  k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. S0 {; G/ q$ u8 J; M8 N# C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  z# R: C5 u, m3 I! X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" m4 S: j; T- r5 _( W; S7 q' R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 S4 j" U$ X3 t! [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( [+ Y$ A7 o( z# R* Z4 H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) H1 y9 f" [* n- P6 {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( s% g, ~! R+ x3 x& P$ r0 X! A/ k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 ~. y* T$ z  G5 a8 y, Z% k* }2 V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 @" v1 p/ n$ ]; W0 ?  @6 _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: \# |8 P1 r: T- [& \0 z! R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 T% J5 n/ B7 h+ T! {( O' J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 }' d3 m+ N4 E: J7 r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, f: `( M/ l3 g7 g$ j1 P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% h5 W6 ?$ c1 `# C6 T7 ]" Q& d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* T5 W" i9 l7 D7 r% E6 ?: Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" n9 }0 Q( W1 i8 O# v3 C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& \) |" e" |0 H; y% n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>