【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" ^+ f# W: Q% h# C' |2 {6 r5 P! ]歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 \5 G* E/ @7 XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; k: p9 i# E) d0 W" D3 U- iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ I- g# v: S) P! m9 \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 i0 s8 _  Z6 s/ p9 Z3 p  dThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; W: N6 ~8 B+ @: fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- Z& G5 q( P; b/ C3 m9 G2 a! wYou needn’t fear anything
8 J8 f$ X* l! M9 V8 h  b* ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* F: s) p0 F3 G4 ~- m1 |Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 ]+ ?$ c$ E7 [I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# X# Q/ u% Z# I) S4 HI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 q2 m% o( h; D' G2 q2 M% q( I. }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. e7 V5 w+ g$ }$ rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% a8 f! m, X; K, l/ ~5 l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- {* Y2 M2 C0 n. U! g, e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" n+ Z  R* E7 C8 T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. w  J0 y  U7 j9 L$ O  g5 Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 `& C: ~7 z. I6 O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 j2 s- R) A8 Q* ~& y2 ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# i1 k% Z, K( V  M" W) E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  I2 f+ @  l) d( P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- v, j- x) M4 j0 r9 V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 D2 [+ l& e( c/ `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- D1 b8 j) Y" U% N' e+ s6 q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" ]! _& ~6 @5 G5 w# \( a! s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 c* g0 P' J, p$ @3 A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* s, t, _$ D5 N( N" h( y$ e! R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: I0 g% ^( O, I" t# O$ I% H& P( U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, l& U( ^) K7 G, f- t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% f: D0 V& L" J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ {: n- O- x8 w$ ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; }/ ?9 Z) S3 f# y( j; E/ ?; V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, c% i  Z! w& ]# D% F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. R' \/ F* o" d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ n, ?3 ?# F' a( ~6 v/ e7 l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; K& y+ \& p( F" M( O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& S, o/ S7 h. a% n" q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' ]! \& X" F1 h3 c: @& n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>