【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ j6 {" X) D! `# YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 p' H3 n0 r2 ~2 gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) A, I& k" f1 [. f  ~1 _% _The sky is happy down to its soul
5 a& I; J( ]" w- P* QWith the moon kissing it every night
! v) z( A7 m9 p2 b1 W  g2 p) i- @Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! Q4 D/ I; e' ?+ z; I2 GYou needn’t fear anything
9 ^% M9 L0 q6 [3 q) hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& z+ s: s! m; bEvery other word you utter is love
0 A3 Y& ^1 j  K  y& A( q/ |2 PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 S' B/ C7 q, D$ gNothing can compare to my love
. R5 A# p0 ]' t' TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( F2 J. I) t$ U" a! t9 C$ s) BI want so much to see inside your heart
5 ^  R! }. K! A% K: dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 ?' j) _: f% f* CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
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If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ z. `" o4 [) r! FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% _( A. C9 p5 E0 n" t. `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# |# w, @7 K& \3 y+ I( M+ T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* s+ N9 y$ [" d8 t0 R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. p5 G' i' T/ d9 a, k% w9 ^$ w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( k0 n) g8 E" ^' ]& R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! Y  x4 x$ f1 d9 k: I" L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) ~* f* ?, y8 F5 H! H! Y1 l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! l/ ~# Q# M# s5 W/ f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 y8 G. z: _- I* B0 f1 m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* N8 `0 L% w  a# O# R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, L8 \# N0 n; ^1 A  B- V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& m7 m! Q) z  J2 p: u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 y$ }* U) J0 \) c( F! W- r+ o/ v7 I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) `- r, ]$ d( r1 y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ _9 W1 K& ~2 B) j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  T! n7 F/ t: Q: ?' U" q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* W1 Y: B$ |4 x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  l4 m# [- W+ o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 Q+ @0 f* n9 l; L5 H0 c* f. ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 Q6 C: l$ J& A) e<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ n/ Y4 \! Y* G) f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' C1 j, {9 n! @1 m& \' m- y( u6 k2 S4 s2 d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% |6 [( ^7 s5 O6 L5 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; A7 @; D( m: A! W! e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 Y. F6 i1 p% c; p& P/ j我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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