【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
: Q  q% I: R8 ~! ?, y9 C+ `. I! XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 Z+ {3 i) e* y' |$ L0 x, TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. X  C9 x. c1 }0 A- m: m- _' ]The sky is happy down to its soul
  b: D$ @. K; t6 QWith the moon kissing it every night
. t# O2 k! _6 w) ?& b4 \$ Y& gSeeing the sky content with its love
2 \: A$ Y# Z) H2 V$ K5 iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 a! i! g8 k) B6 `Every other word you utter is love
: c3 F/ p- m/ A  xI really want to know just how much you love me
% S5 v; I, b6 m0 l5 |4 QI love you I love you with all my heart
8 o4 I4 o1 s3 h7 tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  c1 I0 u' }* L4 N5 o% L- qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 Z' M, R( J3 ~' vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% E: Z. ]6 P( o: q: b4 KI regret not dying
# A- B, v; k. F3 z! Y2 sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  P" G2 }3 _! q9 F; V: HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ Z& Z' [- c, F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 N3 ]) R# q9 N/ ^  P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! M: |; r: R6 |& c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 s  ]  A$ s7 U& c. K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: L' a3 C1 ~, J2 j5 e: r* L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ ]4 T9 u! E' \% S) C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; w( t# `4 C* P; g1 m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! h$ N; Y( }4 |2 `- E8 E9 o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ s. ?5 b0 O. T$ t5 M, G& s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' l1 l0 w1 K$ N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 s; V' J, g  V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( s  x7 V" ]5 T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" m& H8 \2 L# I0 Z) P$ {. z" m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: x# b( g% Y9 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* j4 g$ u* B" O9 ?0 S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ E% R: }% z$ O) _# i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 b0 Y, H1 |$ o2 I1 o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' D+ ~  C* Q) _/ t0 p: ~& L) c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 B+ w3 x, T4 r/ h* o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* d" F" f3 k. b4 K* d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  P! |- r! D0 J9 a) T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) |* m) b6 V; X! d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 {' W6 j$ g& X5 a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; A7 q1 p8 S+ Z) m! {. T2 r- N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ ]6 I5 a$ K+ L' @8 ]5 P9 ?( ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; H$ u3 Z; T9 n# E/ p  [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! s* @/ F0 z' n( c9 f. G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 i* V8 O, P! P" X# a: ?我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" b1 h/ r- Z2 W. |- q$ z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>