【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) ?; \1 M* L, V, b1 I" D$ N4 YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' O/ O% Y1 w, F5 o- @: ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" z; @" u' I, @& k! w$ ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 a4 [  T2 W" k' P1 P# _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 ^# _0 z& u+ `" C& ]! ]) zYou needn’t fear anything
. w; o2 s  {8 f5 a* F2 ^9 @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 g/ L: g- k. }6 E' `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 Y7 y5 b1 I+ h  u. Q- T: dNothing can compare to my love
  A: R& `, g2 p) M5 j( pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. z' {, B3 F% O" d3 w% C/ m% }) \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 I, F0 G: q8 f- Q- P# D5 z7 Y& FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 b  n. g9 O# vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' B% J( H$ p8 n# `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) Z8 H' f( e- e6 d- K: t; mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  N; h" u5 G9 ^0 ?2 SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& K( R9 C8 F) T+ x$ V/ c. y; E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% V' r9 }/ y* J! I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 V' e/ A& w. f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 {9 w: s8 `' ^5 F1 K8 ]" Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  u+ C/ W" h* |" Y1 u! {, D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ c8 c/ T! x6 y1 S2 {* ~! A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ V& S. P  E6 H/ s  ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, w( I- E" ~4 U* ]* n+ h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 Z( L8 }9 N+ s4 ?( g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 W/ P- Q: z  N1 `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 c) }5 u% i3 a  {- Z5 U8 e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) a9 a2 [' l2 d7 ~3 L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: ^' f1 g. f& w0 w* J/ I" w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! a& }- Y9 G6 k. J& J5 ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. H$ N6 q* Y; P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 Q8 c# t, ?9 w3 @, _' y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# L$ t( b2 i3 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 l3 i0 n$ R1 h( ~: i* l' B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 y4 {3 Z( s& Z  F% D, r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 ?2 F1 c, w3 _0 g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 B7 F. ~6 A+ R) F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ ?3 ^  i! u5 i我请你剖开它

. r5 b. z% P% D" h2 Q5 D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 K" u7 A2 G& S. q" X" w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>