【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 E  @3 q# z4 QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 M8 v9 l* j3 D: ]' N  `Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) U$ w" j$ [7 N! uThe sky is happy down to its soul
% a: ~, y1 F, W5 A- w( [# s: CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 A; j) {7 z* R' v# f2 H4 `You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# l5 N8 u& M. Z% C4 _; T0 O- qEvery other word you utter is love
" r8 i* p  M# a! ~! ~6 yI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) _" ^) F2 ]+ ]7 iI want so much to see inside your heart
8 c/ ~( M( A* LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ ]' O: C; ^7 U( E5 L0 l; }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 }8 |) |$ R/ m/ R7 U  J. yI regret not dying
2 ^$ P9 w$ }: r2 P6 xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( _5 W: Q/ L  w# T, r: K( }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( x( l& z/ f: Y7 e, Y  v8 A# P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 H$ q6 d. c4 @; Q( s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& ~  ?  k* L5 J! B+ k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; K& h& S$ W' {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 v. V% R/ W% J& X8 \% A; \% ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 O0 d4 y  ^. [" y% m# x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 x0 i9 E+ k: Z, s: w, G7 V; G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 C% t8 d' O8 q( s! F7 a2 \- F<P>你无需担心</P>
7 b$ J0 _8 l4 F! _; n0 |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, v9 K, V' ]/ u9 t' [0 X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) r# ]5 F2 I/ d+ G; V. i" R4 x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" N4 U% E$ d$ E" t6 F  o! k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 E+ n  A3 v& O9 b8 k, l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( t$ H9 I( w$ k+ S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 ?" B0 _9 n3 l" h3 M% c$ Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 g+ V: r) Q( m. v( Y  h; ]4 f* Y* k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 Z7 H( N' ]8 L: v' u  G/ A% I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  h+ K/ K* e* q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# i  F; E  Q+ z' p8 P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 K6 i* ]& I% Z5 [  D0 r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& w+ E) b6 ~2 ]% M0 k8 }; M1 N1 i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 e; ~* H5 R  @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" \# q0 w4 I8 }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' g. W8 W/ d1 {( l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! f8 ?' V7 _8 D. x5 N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- s; ]% r) b" x2 M' ^& k& G1 k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ m3 d9 k% g. A  ^0 g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 s# s/ [  U" [+ d1 D3 r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; s* S/ i3 w  E; [# J- m" H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; \+ J/ G. v8 w0 Z) u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>