【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% @% v( S9 \  q! K& h! h7 bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 o1 t7 [- R5 EThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ j. }/ q1 y  n) D  U& OWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 F) q; v, I; u  y: eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# H7 w' ?8 H6 D8 hYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; l* j: L' u$ K) T9 i; cI really want to know just how much you love me
& j0 W* _+ ?& t+ [I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 m+ ]* p- ^, ]  E3 R6 k4 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 n2 S# L* \. Y( K# gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ |, j+ U4 ~6 a& k+ eI want so much to see inside your heart
: s  D3 q+ t( v3 c8 |8 pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# `7 J3 G6 z4 `( b5 _+ PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 X0 `& [' c5 VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" q4 S- M9 i9 [2 U* p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# F" e8 f# U: x# E+ I) T+ H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 W; e5 S+ z# H: s" X$ p1 \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 f4 I4 F$ h- q3 z" t. [$ U$ U7 j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 ~  }9 V$ ^0 H' g( N" u3 n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 r$ C5 M! t6 ?8 \" y! O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 m" a6 x& V- m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 B5 ^1 z! x! w& P6 g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 n$ v0 x2 b% w, r; o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* b  Z3 \) D! i2 N3 S8 A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 e, ~. }; c0 W& ^, s, L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 _& l% J% a% h- M3 w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ B. l$ W# ?9 p4 G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: h, A4 W: ~# [% t& l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 s* l8 q  z1 s2 i, U0 L) @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' G; M2 I3 f* H, O1 i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 \7 E3 N$ S6 [& h' k) n3 X" `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" I- d9 @3 ?& Y* |4 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- q+ b4 f# t( X3 W3 D, U8 a$ G- `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' ]% j6 }. C, c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" n) [9 O  t+ Z8 L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ o) G) i* L1 f8 f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) h7 V) m5 @7 l' ?# r5 F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 E0 }) f. @( k) @. ]- }5 I( f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! F0 G2 R) N0 F% b. a, _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>