【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* z0 r( h' ^* |! {' k, ~6 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ [% ~* v$ S% D1 H3 DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% H% V& @3 b3 H: G. @% g0 X) DSeeing the sky content with its love
' C4 E" ?0 O8 }2 r" rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) b% o6 f4 z% C* g; m. G& |You needn’t fear anything
5 p. r4 j8 e  i" ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, z; S7 K' V! I& p8 REvery other word you utter is love
! e+ y( K4 F) B: x* X7 u0 {I really want to know just how much you love me
0 i: ?% N/ L: \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 U  h/ V  j8 c  gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& m' m$ m  Q. o% P6 hI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  }, q# P! W  w/ W" cI’m still filled with fear
' ]& P- x: u- T$ h0 v" {# _5 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) J* z" V8 U6 l: ]  P/ B5 J2 z( @I regret not dying
( R! {0 L  q# C' V% S6 dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. D8 f& n# ]& R6 }/ Z  @5 WWith such a tongue as yours,
  l! w( w0 y1 I0 \# `3 ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# j% }& z! S$ z; S/ QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* X0 E. s6 R, J' U* v) u  B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& U4 @6 u8 f( Q3 w& q0 q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 U- E! j% e7 l; d) `: N! ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" s# ?4 c5 y3 ]# @1 }' Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& L0 `* \: G! N* T9 o  m% `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. W9 @* y) P& b: @7 b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 s6 G" w; |1 @# V. D# r0 e8 w7 M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( Z1 J/ j+ Z  Z; p2 e$ c* ^  Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 b3 S+ I- v' g8 w  c0 P3 d. ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 X; _& ?/ x5 ]) u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' ^, T( S, _/ C, t# q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" Z3 F# X6 T; v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 }* p; @' {8 v  s4 b/ b* i& F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ D/ ]; ?6 J& g9 m) z3 f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  T1 e4 [3 R) f1 s, d. F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ ~$ S+ i9 P; S3 n# Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* `/ s1 j% v3 B. N. @, w4 T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ m* G/ U. e0 ?. p* M* b0 h- E5 h8 |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 m# j& K# q4 F0 r& P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- b6 C4 V6 s3 G" r, e<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ }* M3 Y4 i- Q) \6 b4 J2 I0 E" v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! i4 G7 g4 e6 s: t) [- ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. B8 [( U7 R& ?' Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- W! t+ Y9 c- m5 M6 A3 U# Z; \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 Y- a# O, ~3 c7 Z3 w$ s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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