【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% S+ Q4 g: J- ^) b0 O. C; `歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( W( J3 X' \* W. I- J0 EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 @+ t4 ~6 Z! U/ rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* n: e) Z; v8 A. Q6 t! {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 N. L' n/ _& u8 g5 w$ vWith the moon kissing it every night
# a! k  q( B8 I( i! y1 @Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; ?: U) i. d  x/ ?" ^) W' \. wYou needn’t fear anything
8 j8 l7 E: d: X- h. H! [1 gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( l* Q, l" i2 D( W; TEvery other word you utter is love
# l) w2 K! O9 uI really want to know just how much you love me
) }8 a+ t: B$ {I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& H% J& m+ i1 H$ A$ \4 z) B; l& [4 @I want so much to see inside your heart
+ ]/ K+ Q3 [* n+ G7 V9 B( O, YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' Q7 g1 `; q' SI’m still filled with fear
" S" ?6 P: b# kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* Y0 a9 H: u; l( z+ N/ fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# o  O* E! `- J* u8 W6 F6 uWith such a tongue as yours,
8 ]. B, k; V3 q0 f3 b8 g2 C, R2 ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 n2 ^% C& m% X' NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. @% l$ G* n; O" D( k+ d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- R% n4 ~$ G- U" L7 k0 ?& F+ p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" k% ]. m$ P, v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! e+ q9 f! T6 Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. z9 G" V1 E: X* }/ m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, r2 D- o6 z5 J# T* w  b( s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; i9 n) A  b$ Y  R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ v+ U. V- ]  K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ R( C* t, A- u8 s! d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 S$ j0 y+ o" w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ j0 z$ F  m* I$ k" t* s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" x. O7 U4 g6 k$ K2 `$ @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" A( k5 a; X+ M& B# h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 E8 X2 ^) M3 X+ K/ ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. a- p! u' Z# H6 v9 c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& C( |: A  Z2 N2 m4 x: ]9 L$ o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 g% E1 J$ _. p: g! R" |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 v6 b# A( H5 K4 g( T) Y# {) r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 B" _' w2 N% E% b8 A* ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ p! Y2 Z7 p6 y+ O- E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ M1 n* j# L: |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; L. p' i4 e6 l# m8 B/ ]<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: e. g# P7 ~( l9 ~( p' Y8 r% @* p我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>