【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 e( B% J# V" f5 j0 v% }歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  B  G! Z1 v: D4 c( x+ `! tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( h1 o9 R: E, `6 v; L3 M3 i3 GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- g) k' u+ o- C1 [2 F: w9 U) gThe sky is happy down to its soul
, t! ~% l  {# V/ A0 \% |With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 G* h& }7 H# Y& \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, {! s, ?  {# t1 t2 cYou needn’t fear anything
8 N, Y# F" |+ Z/ v* jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 i) t: s: }+ K, z' J5 |! vI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: K. N; }9 z- {4 Y0 ^5 kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- o! q  o) o% p& b- bI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 r' N- N2 \7 D2 o. HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% F- `$ A  d6 ~7 T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! c5 l0 |$ b& V+ Q, P7 `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 `* X3 x2 i0 r+ O% B0 }/ W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  k4 G$ t3 m( Y; e# b- I5 _# c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 ]" k8 x6 w4 G! ]3 a$ l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 z7 b3 Q/ U6 d% o$ ~; C1 {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" O6 c; I$ L) d( y. e5 Y: ]. u' A( W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 ~8 s* ?) p% z5 H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 O8 T% W8 b' z* n3 B<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ ?3 g; @5 L. B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( S( I$ |: H: }* u) j, w9 J7 X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ Q3 [8 Q* K: Y# ]% B. d5 N& f# q$ D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ J# ^, [1 J# R  w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" K. @4 a. Z2 o/ A( n  D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' E1 m$ }1 ^& `- v6 D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 f5 J: f/ Z7 u: a( y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 G5 Y6 J4 ?( w5 O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: [/ r3 v9 w7 y, R1 O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  \2 r  ~: z7 Y. ?% J3 z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. I/ v+ P2 v8 O) T* Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: h2 c# P( v, N/ }" i6 `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 ^4 w; h$ E# M' O& o) G$ |7 v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, F7 F9 @: `' {) g1 K  q3 U1 ~  C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; i$ E( K6 m2 J& y2 j+ E8 Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" I- `2 a- U( ?5 W* \* ?9 g& D) i& N" X<P>I regret not dying</P>
) I) q, ^: e( t# P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 p1 e/ O$ H- D9 v1 ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 j* ^/ B' e6 L; f6 H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 `/ R3 N" g: g5 |. p我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 ?) g- H9 f6 M" h. [$ B( F" |$ D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>