【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 s. E4 x% Z6 v& ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: p& g5 e( V9 s0 n* BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& S, v2 G* J# {: g3 |) MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 R6 r0 k' k9 f9 j8 p7 u  ?Every other word you utter is love
( f; G; L8 W" o: NI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ E% d/ }* X" `# T- dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) x8 q' o* {3 v7 r# p5 ^# U2 IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! h% a2 m7 Q" M: H# lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 ~8 U7 }. ]' c7 n" H6 }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 j  @4 ?& V% z1 o8 _4 o  fI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" a3 K0 X- H+ kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# `: O) O5 Z% R: D2 fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 k- u* m! S2 C( Y! e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 z2 i( q. X/ X9 X$ X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: V1 L: b. |" L; t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 v6 }7 s( v0 }+ c: e, y) X) E# C7 w  u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; ]3 ]4 L& k% K$ W' R! [3 d" Q# p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. d, s$ C- c" h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: p8 A0 N% ]+ W# C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# i# L# }- M% _- ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) m8 _5 G0 y. U# ^) j/ T7 B( |<P>你无需担心</P>
8 y" y5 @1 e3 ?1 I' e0 a1 S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 X+ ]% j4 |2 Y1 U6 C* S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 R1 \4 W( b6 d6 @0 v$ @" G1 \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* z! \1 e. F1 t) z  h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 j5 M" `  h6 Z$ X5 X3 T+ B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' I" ?7 Q$ T3 e! ~" O9 V4 }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! w4 `8 y$ i  q* l# c: F; X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: {% \- f" V/ D/ U- I$ {% \7 M1 S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! n5 B1 x& i5 m2 }; P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( [. P! t9 w0 r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- k9 m9 Y: _& O1 O: m3 R! ^- l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ X" T) M0 q' ^; X( V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>