【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 \0 Q# K  v3 u7 |8 ?8 ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, I, Y# k& Q2 AThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! q: ~+ F- k0 r# n2 dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 a0 M& c0 C: O0 z0 b7 E5 ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ t. U" p* ^" f4 [' K0 D! v7 kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* e; P0 B* x* @/ }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- n% P9 L. O/ TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; r& C, I' ~0 B. u1 ^5 h& s. g! FI regret not dying
8 z6 f3 {3 J3 Q( R  KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" E3 T% S$ H; b1 aWith such a tongue as yours,
. H) M$ }1 ~) t6 Z% Q; @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 h# t4 b' E6 I; q" s" jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 x) f5 v0 l1 I# M( y) ?" J6 I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 x( F5 B9 ^; p6 S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  T/ y. C- Z% u9 [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 H4 C7 W. [& t: p& C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% F! |1 K: b# o2 r$ n, n2 y( k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' ^! i( w- q/ ?' \6 q9 u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 ?0 B% @9 A- _4 X' m. R8 f3 Y3 f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 D% \$ l: _2 a: a& a# L+ Y+ X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" W+ |, q5 ]$ j/ j0 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) y, \+ ?: y' m( ]8 ^$ |( R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; V1 Q( q+ J, Q. T7 o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% H$ A/ `* e1 p& i' k4 Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" K  C+ R2 s- {% e  k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" h  g. z3 Q7 S4 C8 k( e+ \1 O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- D. G. {/ O' A0 r  M: }: W& E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  a5 q" P; m0 G8 X" C, [) g2 p: @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 I' Z" P9 t7 W1 ~: J5 G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* F8 Z$ }2 ~$ {# B  |: R& E<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 Z5 F/ ~; Y3 n8 Y( v" v8 @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 k1 x2 P  c* y- y" V- d  q! n1 L" K& M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 I* f$ t1 ]+ _* d7 |3 S$ {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 b* V* F: ^5 Z9 s. Z4 y% E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; b6 ?+ k5 ?" b* }0 N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" G1 y* t9 S# K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! x, \: z5 K. m  N- q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, @- _" a" Y9 ~' v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ I2 i* [. _9 w. N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  S* H% ?+ ?  `" G; [我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>