【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; {: c- C, i3 C: u. w& `* A0 L& NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  n, c4 U2 c: P$ FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 k9 F4 o" I8 O! K3 `9 e. y2 Z% HWith the moon kissing it every night
" n, x% M9 `7 [Seeing the sky content with its love
' ?- S. E) l* @8 M' YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 `/ z/ p+ \, O0 c- [& D5 YI really want to know just how much you love me
/ o6 U( \. t. ^3 I6 x" u; u6 `7 GI love you I love you with all my heart
+ B' C2 \* z; n# }& l4 [6 WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 w# P. V" n1 ~% l3 NI want so much to see inside your heart
: J( Q+ N; ]$ f* @+ w% O* C" OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& c+ G5 A! T8 J+ X# p: |1 pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* h& m1 U& O/ g2 BI regret not dying
: X3 k4 c' V2 ^8 m9 II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 X( o; {$ E: l6 JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( D: o. O; y% p: k  }/ m7 _9 JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 W( w. g. O1 Z' E& Q/ p) `9 f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: L8 c  u/ F/ U  K6 i0 N, }) k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% |) O: K1 W9 |: g( b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; ]9 `! \8 Q# b% t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( n+ I3 Y7 y" [7 Y5 u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ S2 |" \5 W( N( H) t# V- ^- T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 M/ ^# X8 N  W: q5 ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 [$ K) c8 N9 d0 p8 m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ U& |. z* k/ j! P% O/ S7 u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- Z$ }: Q: O- I' n7 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ E: d8 G5 U9 t0 K4 A1 Y- C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* X3 n0 Z4 y! J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* [6 |/ p  \2 T8 N4 E* ]) N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' b9 n  a1 u$ l( O& ?( d1 }5 Z: a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 s% ~* m3 K( K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 w2 ?+ Z) B/ v4 X2 \6 q. P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( X8 b* Y8 {4 e! F5 ^# q- M+ s<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ @5 M& j: l  b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 W+ M7 t6 h* Z* T6 H# I0 g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! @$ ]% J7 a, V$ [  f1 U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# x, N9 s- ^- \2 q* ^+ n5 G& U" [  U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, ~; w- @# b3 y1 S* n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ u) l2 W8 e5 C1 B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( C' t3 _/ b1 w  _  R0 F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
: g- Y' f( m: A% |% T! D" N
我请你剖开它

! R2 U3 d7 Y$ q5 B4 J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>