【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 N9 v; z* h2 e4 g8 @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, `! [, D* ]- Y" [' jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 f  R# f: W* i2 t( L7 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% L4 I9 H6 P" o6 C6 b* B# c( OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# |- w3 `) u: Q9 p6 d0 \; M' nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 E# f' G, X% OI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- V# A8 G- e* i8 p( J5 JI regret not dying
* @9 H& E* Q( u) k" O0 w/ H+ T' u# II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 m, v. a& Y* N9 h9 }/ O8 _* cWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 h4 k: A' g8 |" e) s, M/ P, S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 J7 e2 w* p% Y$ R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 C9 L2 {5 F: `, X; @$ u% I* l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% g  ]1 a) S1 t5 e# O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) K( ?1 J7 B+ K  c2 U  e% {2 d9 {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: v6 Y' V/ b7 [3 m8 z/ I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ h  V) |" r" a7 v9 e<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* Y. }7 j: _. j' t! i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 @  W$ N  F/ n/ A! t; Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# N( {/ n# z0 M' j7 E6 D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 o$ |# U0 U9 F" N* ~1 ^/ ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! l/ [" T" {5 ]) j( Q- x9 Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 F" H/ R- c4 \6 N/ l, Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 s- C2 T9 c! j( [! k3 H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 T- o* f9 v0 L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* A5 Z1 K: R9 d0 O; T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 I1 K; B# R4 {# a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- j( p" e( y" Q2 l+ f0 z+ `9 A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 [4 I1 |$ Z: Z6 T; M' Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" a9 w5 F/ z* D+ \# @+ r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& x% a8 f0 b" O9 o5 ]6 G$ G<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 b3 C  H' M6 p" I我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 N, l" G0 R$ ~+ J2 s  w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>