【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 p5 M$ ?; H* a) d- Z% }: @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" m$ J! L  ]4 B6 ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 _; H5 b: {. PThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* d* j* l' M& b* I+ ]1 s, bSeeing the sky content with its love
. M( w2 w! l5 ?. VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 L- [3 T: e! q2 N  |6 |* P' \! `3 II really want to know just how much you love me
6 ^/ l4 d5 c7 [I love you I love you with all my heart
! B2 @; w: z, |1 L  XNothing can compare to my love
5 Z3 a/ Y9 J' c9 s; N' z& Q  NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: J' S, v* Q0 J2 S4 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 U0 h9 R! H$ U* z0 T* I; |I regret not dying
( r, i8 r8 I" w: F+ A! R5 a/ B/ p/ wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( o4 k: Y# S) O- t8 d7 I! [+ F) M% QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 j, R$ [  @; {' M4 h& Z9 c4 |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 s: V& Y! p* T( r  ~! n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 ]; F4 D/ c/ y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 I: W4 a+ L1 R+ |, o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ S, Y5 F- h, E+ G+ x8 M' k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# a# x2 Z* F" R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 K! E9 ]- U7 \8 L; c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% B# S! _% [& M, ~' w3 \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ m1 ~' f. ~, U, K8 _, k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ D' G1 J9 G0 G( O; F/ M: q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ j8 z6 S2 b) k- b; i" o* N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; a2 K: t. [( A0 |& a. g8 s) M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. B* X. u" v% l+ K, n* U2 I! y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' p$ Z  K( J$ A<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( t/ o  m5 E  ?6 ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) m0 L6 j1 E& Z2 K8 `8 V) ^4 j5 {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 X0 z" y1 R" p( `# F, Q" q/ w4 u+ Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 E0 D! J" y- C9 G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 G7 n3 d% s( g- G+ X* f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* S. c9 p; }, m0 n* I+ n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 p" `/ G( ~, {1 ]- c) s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) h! U+ J+ n/ L6 f  }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) K  s$ C6 z7 N+ R4 a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. r3 O9 I; t4 _& I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  [( i* q9 J3 |& |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 Q4 ]. B4 V& X& m, l+ {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ q& ^5 ^$ F5 {% [! B8 t7 W7 b/ p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" a9 k( C! W; T, T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- d% F3 d$ u; G. r  T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  [9 ~# k* @8 P: b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. j( U2 c6 q# h2 q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 r' Q2 C/ ?, H1 }. L$ Y$ Y5 L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; m& V/ G+ `! {: q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ B" F4 n6 ?! [' i) f1 {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( u& A8 K6 @4 F* t/ z- a  q1 \8 n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. q, y2 w% h1 i6 j$ }  F! u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  C# y! j/ a& \  y5 n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' b: B4 O3 ^/ c) t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ r7 p0 t6 \- |5 H% U6 _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 Q( e/ m8 j4 s$ w5 g' c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

) ]/ F5 N& d& h7 h4 i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>