【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' ?# V4 [7 r1 f( B2 g  ~1 }6 fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 `& [: B, B9 y& w. VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; o' V7 \, E* NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 g" J/ j3 T! VSeeing the sky content with its love
) g/ y' V' d) H+ C) LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 C' f7 _4 ?2 t! q/ G6 [; SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! f0 q. W& c( q3 TI love you I love you with all my heart
% j+ N' v  `7 i% nNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 j# B  A8 r; O3 S; Y9 X& Z& ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 E* F/ l/ m3 e# a+ l! AI regret not dying
: |. b& e* |0 ~& A# @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ S( X- V5 l! SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. G- T. U- r( V; }! HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  B8 p4 K3 N# b) _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 S7 @% Z1 C5 H% K( w% }& H% r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; x0 c5 }. A# o+ d3 e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 S, Q! h+ J, G+ D" ?. N! K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 C8 f/ t& N9 W. P# m/ u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# w4 N: [: Q' G" o8 t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ t3 S; ]+ H: ~8 [. \6 T9 {2 A' d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 y+ D: A: n; {9 p0 d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' A) [0 ^4 g/ q/ q2 t5 `7 E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 v/ b5 p/ b6 w- v7 r: Z' H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, M+ Z$ G# A, p% U) H+ d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 {+ z6 S- M6 n- H4 K7 n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* C1 }) P/ F1 F& U, Y$ d  c( a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* z, c6 j. O) ]9 S- `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( S4 s' q1 l+ A2 w: z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 ^& R# X; e' u7 }2 r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& \$ h  ~! l6 e6 Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# e9 G+ @/ i: ^: O) o  }' [/ \  L6 t3 R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 @% h: r8 P% X* t. k' I) m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( d0 y) i- d+ G; `5 s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 v9 o! p) [( Y4 o& {7 y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, q3 m' N8 V# u6 P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 v  s* b8 D! K) F+ _/ p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" F/ t* l" i' `. h/ d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& R5 [  J  a9 ?$ K% X2 p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. z$ L) r, \3 f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 y" \& t. R7 B* t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 r# q" E7 V5 l, `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 N0 h- b9 E3 q5 V; T" U/ r* |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 y' X% D  I, n- l# d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. N7 e: z* _% F4 s% e  v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& L) t* Y: t9 X  w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% h# J; v) C1 w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 }* n/ d/ n8 ^4 a- s! p) L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>