【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ ~. |$ Z, |+ n1 {* ]! kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# {, X, ?9 _9 S, w7 M2 {% PThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 C2 ^) }  S9 Q; R, @; [/ CWith the moon kissing it every night
# V' B3 w" L7 B7 [" J& d) a2 T& YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; C0 I6 n9 `: ]7 oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  s' }2 F, l6 d5 U' Y! D) H9 P6 ~Every other word you utter is love
3 \3 G) ^7 ]6 X+ sI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 K- S/ v5 M( O4 [: wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  B: q- X5 ^, A# s$ D! E% f/ G" mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' `4 F+ V; e2 ?8 ]4 wWith such a tongue as yours,
$ M# D" b: |3 l" iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 X4 g; V9 e( ^3 Q' b+ t2 xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. c& b# C0 I* z* z. eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ A9 p% ?& S- m& p. j. X) {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# @7 [6 `, j: |) E3 e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, E. {# ?  b. c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' m* ~% o" F1 N* R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 j1 W* L- ]+ m3 s: s2 \! s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; K2 X% r! W" a+ e) L2 x7 q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ L, t- ?! z( ~% ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ n5 e1 S- h4 P$ R# n, Q6 K5 y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  C5 X' e" [1 F; @. [- G' i, w3 {7 D# N4 b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% g  N2 @! ~* u' N7 s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' b0 y7 Y" w+ T+ o, z/ F$ R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 u1 N* B& Z: `8 A" @$ S# f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 b. e9 U& o- \7 R2 o  y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: u1 }; K' c3 l3 a# l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ @* H4 n) A. w! @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 }/ d8 v0 K8 T) d2 _3 i' j3 H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ y9 [. G# z1 w+ Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( l% J; t: R0 L( Z8 H0 @. d& i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 p0 l& z$ c# E" M( a; c$ D( w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 K! \/ X' V, T' O0 h# `% I' D+ ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 ]3 b  g$ b1 t7 p) O' f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; Q  Z8 `6 j& d  k) R, W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ d! L4 R6 w' w/ l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 p4 V( T2 V, R# C9 {<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" m1 d9 a9 X6 k0 x$ V' Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 D" O. y0 f3 F9 }5 ^; {' k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; _% ?/ F  V8 J% a. K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  F8 w( W4 E4 B; V+ `" e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" w8 J- J' J# G1 L& Y我请你剖开它

2 X& K. L. F& F! }7 O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# C; S2 u+ f3 ]9 s3 @7 Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>