【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: F, t% q! d' [4 n. Z5 `歌词我附在后面。
; Q" l0 b& N, b4 E! \% }The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 n8 n( |0 {4 |; r( w% HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* a7 t4 F7 Q9 U, s( c' gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' {' f3 m  ]8 @% m0 hThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 o- A/ }0 f! ]With the moon kissing it every night
4 }& \2 G4 [4 k0 tSeeing the sky content with its love
2 C5 G4 Q2 `1 o$ `, ^" d: e8 Q. kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# q; p2 {* x; `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 X2 ]+ l1 ]9 y) dI love you I love you with all my heart
7 H7 o" `. W+ V; ?" R/ \# YNothing can compare to my love
1 q5 G0 A3 s# r$ i# ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 S( y4 u: {( x1 f# M% fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 `* g+ Y6 l1 y; JI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 C8 \8 R" \, U8 |5 l# tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# M" f; N2 V1 Y" Y2 rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ a. _  X; ]$ C/ |. YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 j$ d) x* H3 ]* `  `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( j  L2 T* D: G8 i. ]6 ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 c, ^5 A& Y7 d) i  h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" b4 ~# F6 c& ~  `( @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; p! D9 e; y& n' E. P  U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& Z. I5 |9 ]  Z* w; ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( |' S0 m: Z+ K$ U, y; \. y; h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  O5 n8 n+ [% P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- c  I1 u( A$ k, O, `, D9 Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 k' o/ X% X/ \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 N3 a1 U: P# W, |5 E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 H3 l6 h8 k: B6 d* a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 N& E4 X7 L* w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& l' Z$ [7 m+ i( S8 L2 E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 r, n3 x3 }) i; n9 B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ }, z, w. b" g/ \/ U/ d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: T0 y$ S& {* M0 T6 R  P; ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 u1 s4 m: O; t6 y9 @9 L. B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  v$ P9 l$ {0 S, `( x. @' H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 t: Y7 C/ J) O1 C7 w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 T: C8 C3 y  \4 s0 w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 T2 A/ B9 H7 x! p# }9 U' }  G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, k) t7 Y' H0 G& A% n, _7 K" v4 i' g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 O* W, Q( P* G+ ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& J: l1 Y, Q9 @& a/ j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 m' y- \) }9 n' y4 v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 \; |; X$ Y; @5 ^6 |6 y, r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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; n6 P& k) q0 f& ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 `8 r, l: j8 {$ Z1 P1 ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>