【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
, F0 J8 {6 y4 f7 H- `The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 D- N& M8 q+ h, J4 i" _- w% iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 A5 R2 q/ H9 B# lWith the moon kissing it every night
' c5 w9 c' ^5 n* S. SSeeing the sky content with its love
; Y# w+ Q, U% ], O  ?/ gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 A2 {+ j  |* Z2 VYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' `. J7 E( K; c* x% }: sI love you I love you with all my heart
; Z. J  \8 O2 t: {4 o, [Nothing can compare to my love
, l  D, a# U+ N. K6 L' U+ ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& o; h* K9 f' n8 y2 L. W" `1 }" zI want so much to see inside your heart
& ?$ b2 n2 ~( P+ uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 T1 J1 w" P* C( t) t! q# tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! g+ d; u' V/ i8 n  ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 |$ D+ t# b( z  q, Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: H) T1 {. c% G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ H) r: G) T2 c: y1 U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 F: w4 G" v6 Q: J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 Y! Z" z/ Q# _" e; P8 |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  d& L# G- A! J: |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% A7 l3 j: g( \0 }, G8 N* _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ S6 ]; t  }8 A9 k& X: O; Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- s7 B1 p, a, G* [. d7 @% T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, W  `0 k0 N% v: _$ ?; r, o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 \0 O* e. f" L1 O( \: C- Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ k8 y# H0 p/ E" P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  n0 V, X/ H7 C, T+ D) |: Q; P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. `# f, |6 B% C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; [' p4 ~7 g! o8 x  o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& C# a* J% ?# M6 |; a5 K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! f& f, Y% t' X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 R( N; ~8 U. s) G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 T- o* V, t; [, |/ B+ S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, Y: x% F3 O' t: q# M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  K" N$ D' X) H5 L* }+ W) `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 n+ q: Y9 \! w8 ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- b& \3 b$ G' V* g$ o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" O; T. F$ [: Q- R8 g4 t8 }% C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 K0 j( E: Z& e8 B4 w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: i  o8 w1 _3 C- [7 C9 N+ p& p( c& Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 K2 r  Y8 b: w; t我请你剖开它

4 D- M" a  o2 V3 N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 `& [$ }* w/ b; w" M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>