【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* I/ s, P1 o" |. ]+ F' J/ }歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 }1 N( z2 `; I, `) V3 G) vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- @* ]/ t1 ^9 b! z" P* ?( r3 MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- V, o: J( ^3 JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% u$ s" k5 a& K) j- i6 q- f. iEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. u* @  V8 J6 ^6 C/ [  m6 n$ ~: FI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 @0 G$ q; P$ A2 d6 wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 r  T8 o' w0 @' {- kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ X( W( z, X+ J0 w8 E& lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! t4 ]+ U( S' z2 r6 r- lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 d/ E0 v1 k+ ~; d) w" h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 w2 r3 C0 f$ K1 F2 R, v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 T: I! k6 P" ~0 T  M6 G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* f9 s$ F" n; c# L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 f& Z* ^6 G6 j6 Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: S) ?5 g( s' O8 N1 I, E6 {' E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 w' {3 p" p3 i* B  p* U<P>你无需担心</P>
3 J" D' G: A1 m, s" I, ^& I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- T4 P( `1 M! G' c$ I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 L( |8 `: |; F0 i, f. w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 `4 M3 x0 r$ N0 c* W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, S( I! ~% q8 G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 U( T' l4 T; e  v2 P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 K0 \2 {# R; v5 ~3 L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. g3 ~+ C, b7 B7 {3 M( W/ s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% t. ^) p* a% u$ c& ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# R# z  o! Y/ v5 t7 g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 o- D: j" p$ z7 X7 |$ V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 G1 w. J& s" N3 q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' g: Z& A% q& _5 M& V, d0 Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" `: `5 D* g( U- K6 r' S7 e6 X7 S4 Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 H2 }7 h( E3 p& L8 `2 \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# t7 o( X6 |( R! W2 a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: O# A  c; {& e" e0 A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" [- l0 f# P7 _/ }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. A: s9 R; N8 m5 g( S+ f% Y1 s' ?9 V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  b/ G8 R* \3 k8 K1 y/ _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>