【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 i3 I  Y: B9 f! }The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 \7 p8 {+ F1 h9 q/ sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% S3 u1 t  V0 m' D, r7 t: S- Z* SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# L3 B0 Y% W9 h5 Z1 Z$ J1 |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 L9 @3 u9 n  ]3 n( o8 ~' {: uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 L$ s/ d+ E) w1 @& s( {I’m still filled with fear
7 M6 K2 S, E) m9 LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; G+ ?6 q" z: B% L7 L: |I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* N9 X, {" }. `& r" [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 ?5 [8 K, O- p% J! ?5 Z$ sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 W1 `7 e3 Q6 j+ x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% a5 c" O  v2 G$ w' ]; d* u! |* f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: o' T7 f7 s  P% ]5 @( s- w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ [2 j; a. t; F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! s" D; f* E3 J0 x0 g<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( L+ X3 Z  \# L6 K2 U1 T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# Z/ k" A. D! ^1 f$ F; w' S. m( n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! O2 s+ N9 I8 G( d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& t) W) Y+ L& Z% g4 [+ a<P>你无需担心</P>
, x$ w( d3 G" c) |* z) k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# {- B: Y7 D) _6 t( {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: F. K. n, F  K" f- ]3 k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, o; \( Y# N8 N$ z7 b; T$ C0 P# v/ G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  X$ p* q/ P  w6 P& T; }2 @, q8 s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( A& G! P+ p  _5 U% @# Q- `  q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. e- b4 C+ T% p; c$ z2 ]( Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& T# P* h+ q  t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: \3 k, F) N  R4 U<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ u( A! W. r" X: z7 q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 c0 g6 p5 `3 o2 u7 T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. m+ Q2 V8 H5 J( e, J' _8 |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# @' G" O* P" W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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( S" u- |7 o, A" f; ]0 R% B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>