【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- S7 w# s+ T) \/ m' ^4 w歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 K2 z% Q5 r5 P9 A6 d3 dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 b/ ~" h; y7 e7 f1 f, c- s+ OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( c" ~  }- r7 c8 f0 SSeeing the sky content with its love
& g/ {6 v' P% O2 ~1 i  t3 }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 s- v/ p& a; X6 K6 o. K8 S: Z! l9 E& ^9 gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 P7 e$ f0 q' ]/ r0 o% OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( H2 r9 h# E( Z6 m$ |I’m still filled with fear
% }; @/ M6 U" W" e/ v4 Q5 b  P. nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  c4 B% o4 v9 r1 T. U1 aI regret not dying
: L$ y2 ~# k5 k/ Q6 D+ A3 G7 ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! g" w9 D  E7 m+ i5 g8 `With such a tongue as yours,
( ]6 O3 o4 y" R5 ]% l& N& {7 WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' b+ B9 z' m8 s. k8 X: e! tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. v2 ^, s+ q( W: K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. I2 y- L8 W  @/ V( a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. C5 t9 q0 t6 X) [8 [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 S6 Y0 S' G0 G* K$ b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. M7 O! n( N7 a" q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ u# `# @3 L* E: I, x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 v8 x' O) d; Y% Z: X7 w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ l8 h! p) v2 {3 L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 ~6 |9 j; i" r: `# J2 R9 G3 V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ @3 D, I+ x% I% z8 x$ j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ ^* @6 h  Z( t0 y# a) ^! ]% c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' n. O: q. P( h) u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- m  \: I( r6 ~; T. T' E- L( j9 D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! L1 i) K* o8 ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' l8 S3 {" j  m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ I8 U( S, w, X# Q( z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# x5 P: W9 ^; v, p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, X  B# U" r7 m" E5 E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ {- T2 Z) n1 B$ |" C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  P; [# L$ W6 v' e3 x$ }( f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' A: F: n  {: r) t/ V3 N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ K, H  [8 {: f" f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" [! }  ^' C; g; S' u3 Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& ~! r3 b7 J9 m8 y+ d2 K* P/ ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& G  g2 S/ _" @8 w6 b% t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. ^3 G3 i& M6 V7 y! e, _) ]! P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 x5 z7 |# U# ]# l7 K9 n5 f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, V* g+ L" T, {" ]9 Y5 D我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, r1 }# b8 V: j$ k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>