【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% H2 u/ {1 \9 @0 s( E歌词我附在后面。
' U1 [- }3 F; r/ p7 g! NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) M5 m/ w+ e; }1 v7 `$ u: EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- m/ M  H6 }' t, m; zWith the moon kissing it every night
+ s' }5 ~/ u3 cSeeing the sky content with its love
- @2 p2 L7 I' E& o& I; WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% S% F* Q! p* C2 L! T6 |) [You needn’t fear anything
- I5 M0 p* H2 F% Y- N& _. zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' ?. y$ O( s3 p' ~5 v; a4 JEvery other word you utter is love
# x6 Z; \7 y9 E. QI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 [1 {/ ]) O: C- z$ DI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 J2 m! u5 y: ^) D$ T% O- OI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- t( \/ d. E! ~5 l& ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 M; V! q) b% ]* i3 ?3 T/ T4 N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  W$ l! F' e3 ~; h" G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 K. M2 R% C" D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ f/ P: V& V8 g* ]; W& ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. @3 n7 J; {: U( P0 p# v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- M" g& J# @3 R6 ]" P% c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 }- x  _0 T4 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ V" N! L3 p- s4 t% f. W. D# b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. T' {2 Q& f! T  L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ `1 |. F. R% v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 @" C. B- Z' o; l- h7 H+ ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  T4 \3 L7 i4 H; K( D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ F7 H/ |' x) ]( B' a3 T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 M- V: B' K- V# Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 i2 W. K' i/ s" S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, i% y: R# r! c# n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: e$ k1 P" e% I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% t6 n& }$ r) N! b! E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ Z9 ]$ e' O5 i* {2 x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  Q8 I4 L# j. q: T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 _" ]& |  |* h4 Y, B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) ]* e1 w% D) \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 A' c  R! \$ k- q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. a: t) _' {% D0 z4 m# q) z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 |" A- Q' q# J  C( I) |0 T$ Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& B- \: [- z6 E% e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. h8 M4 s$ i0 Y2 k( f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. n& g" L9 M( D6 h4 K' x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>