【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 J1 C5 N& M- B" K3 ^6 n- GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 x3 s7 \& q! ?/ U- oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# c- L8 g# a: M" J- q0 TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  \) }' ~: m/ p7 C& z# j8 sThe sky is happy down to its soul
  M: M8 C  \$ J7 R" yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. G  e6 p( t. c- E3 I3 xYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( r$ J% s  \5 k; O, kEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 O2 _# O- P/ L% ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 C0 A) m5 Y# r( L9 {+ [$ CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 i7 q5 D$ @0 L; y1 VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& v/ J- d4 @  WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) e/ ^- A8 ?' H7 dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 ^: o- R2 B! F8 E* ?% {  WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: C, o* u% W) E) e$ w* X# O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% Y2 d0 E. ]+ `2 A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! Y2 w2 H$ u# N3 _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: a- J( k5 n: {% H5 W' R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 d* d' N$ ]. G9 P  ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 M% b# V! p/ q( C5 j/ l% K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) U  a3 g' p- n1 o! R5 V' D6 W* k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 `/ H3 ?% a1 d/ r. B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 r* T' |. c8 e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! P+ `; e8 L8 e# M) u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 o& G- W( h( I. o( ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 E+ W7 C# _' {0 s1 g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ @/ u" o! @0 g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( A7 s0 {" z3 Q6 }4 g# Y/ ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 n; T: T, S4 |. I2 y# j) n& A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ M1 \2 z' k3 t% \# f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ ^7 C# f: l! X% b& t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! V1 n% o: z* a; ?2 x<P>I regret not dying</P>
  G3 o' r0 ?+ Q) ]9 d8 O: f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; @7 q. n! s# g8 _& z1 T. Y. A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ p! p& I" d+ n8 C) x6 C# _; Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! ^5 r/ R/ `4 D+ k- S6 }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ ~+ Q- p$ }- V+ _( L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; i# y! {- C. B+ ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 ^9 E9 {- [) n9 g8 {+ o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  o- i& Y& f& E! C9 O6 |" ?. T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ I" @. ]$ V) A1 z6 p- A我请你剖开它
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4 w) P# H5 _0 c8 c/ v9 r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>