【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ |% q$ o7 a) l( L  ]. N8 IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( l' {/ P' T1 j' ^# nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' F: o2 M' o$ x7 S4 AThe sky is happy down to its soul
  f4 h1 g1 K7 xWith the moon kissing it every night
- a) O' ?$ ~: mSeeing the sky content with its love
# `: D% e6 |' i/ fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 ?0 }0 }3 _3 t6 v# PNothing can compare to my love
, f2 \0 c! G5 n( @3 GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 u1 D# Q/ {$ L0 f4 jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% r1 {. f  C- ?' XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) F4 v9 ~  j9 Q0 p. ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 ^0 ?# m: q8 |9 p5 _1 e! [5 _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 p! n! H) Y6 i5 }' H& k4 w2 {) q- K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' r: q# X8 X  f' X) g6 a, h0 E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 O  O+ M0 c# |* M& r9 M( e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, L7 K! K2 U+ ~& h7 N, j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 D% n% ^+ _/ Q9 H* N) R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; `# V" \$ A; J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 ]# v4 m! W6 H1 X% U5 Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 b" m: j; x. U$ f; O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 ^+ p( _' G% ?6 j1 S3 t6 h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ s# E  y/ V$ f2 l8 N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ v: \* g+ E3 z5 ]/ w* m! A1 v- s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ ^3 z0 K! c3 r( s/ ?5 j0 @! @0 N" j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 p- q  I% M/ S# a/ f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! D6 P' x7 I- L% q5 X3 I0 N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 P) q2 j4 X: N$ L; Y- f& z% a& n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ z4 v! U& t& z; X" ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 V  y) L. @5 E& a* J( U1 a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 O/ P& j+ g& f$ I, s' F/ ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* ^& Q( k) C& }6 S! G  P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- n+ {9 f! }' v0 o$ @+ M<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 z* n# S8 t2 W- s" Q/ Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( A# ]) M& V- ~" s0 W* }9 K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 S6 x: ^! Q. K# j, i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. S) M0 W- S: \. o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- d: D' `* L* o. ?3 ?4 J/ V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ \% [+ b' W: `5 ^8 N% J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 _( F: J* z( `  m! R3 o6 ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>