【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ @( [0 |  r. e; D, X( P歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- ?7 A8 a) S8 YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! y5 j0 _. F! M0 GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& i7 I; |2 T1 A+ B' \5 N8 xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ u: ^  Y0 i' |5 K2 [/ I) NThe sky is happy down to its soul
) K  e. j6 B$ K! U  _! ~With the moon kissing it every night
$ @6 z/ W9 y; P+ E$ u; @( x* S1 ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, h# M2 P/ K) p" OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. S/ ~# ]3 t5 w0 N8 d+ cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& y' Z8 V0 ~" z2 Z. s: W8 J' u' DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' O- b' ?) X- U) S; z" k  ^; c+ FI’m still filled with fear
% r5 }) I; C$ t2 ^4 s& mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) F2 v8 v4 \7 B* Q( C4 ?& a1 ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' h/ N1 W) W' Y2 f7 K6 U4 q/ n. Y2 `4 o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) u2 v- t3 W- A5 y6 ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- z# B7 u' s) E7 W' ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 v0 K; i/ O% p7 o3 L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- M3 t) b$ J  W9 U4 v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' {) L, g0 ]; m- K7 {  Y& o% R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 g4 S. u4 d) @7 s7 o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* |, z/ v9 O% s# v3 M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ n+ ?5 {! @! }5 p$ v9 g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: s+ k6 t$ p7 b6 E3 F: t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ t! Y3 `7 V' x. x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( L0 P! ?- G8 e$ ^; i. Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! @/ h0 x2 y( @  B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" s1 V  h; N; |7 R7 Z  V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 P3 Q' \$ v/ ~* C. V4 g! R! ?! K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 o5 f& F1 `9 q* M9 y  ~; n: v/ {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" [8 f9 g$ b) H% Z  e: J# B) G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ ^% R6 H9 y5 n; k' Q, C4 N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  v$ K, F) J. c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* Q2 ]2 {8 ]# I2 H9 q: i) t! S3 o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; I4 P: `4 `8 L+ C& |1 k6 l: @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 K! `4 W( @7 N- N" e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- c2 c* Y3 v1 ?, c% }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% Q' r, b% u3 ^% ~& f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

5 |: {% ]/ S( g- Q1 D# s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, u- I" v# J, P" G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>