【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% x, K- I, m! V9 M& A5 ~, ?1 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( G2 d7 B  l7 `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. e  Q. p; O9 q" l$ ?- ^/ E% W( RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( G+ [; d- }+ |7 ]& i* cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 O* ]. }' T; u; O3 Q7 a. m+ WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! a* V5 ^- x6 i- TYou needn’t fear anything
5 g3 z, y! E. W4 u" _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ @+ k4 p4 z! ]# jEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' d" P% d* }8 _7 ?: KI love you I love you with all my heart
, d; m7 w& f: O! R( N$ M# gNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ B' `7 h0 O% j( [5 ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ C$ y+ T+ @  E' y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- E6 `6 v) ]4 z3 M6 |( U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 W- K4 A7 O/ e8 T4 k7 G+ z* `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" D5 M& I/ `- _+ q9 T4 a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 M; o" @$ x- T' K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 \; {6 |1 R- @4 d8 [3 j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  T9 X3 T% s$ {: W8 u" P: r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ W- f0 @. t. v9 E) y% m: A. O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ b0 h/ K! `- P8 w- B. u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; ?. _0 d* p% D, U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: l, l, |& k9 @1 W' F* J9 ~. E- z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 M8 Y% Q" ]6 z, w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 ?  M$ ~# x: M6 @9 h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" w, ]# f$ D8 |5 D0 y9 ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. E' h2 O4 k' u  |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 U) Q+ T$ P" c+ ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! H2 N; x- |# f# B% {2 ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( v( E) X7 f2 q& M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 C3 R8 \# y8 u' d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 t: r  p* m! l$ k) c/ h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% I, _( W9 T( R/ r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: o; k8 l# u$ }6 [: N4 n0 A; `3 b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 w4 g" A( _0 G8 j, ?, |& D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! K# t& z5 l) l' I' i' G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 R! v, S5 ?! E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! g7 j# ~$ b& p$ c; r3 K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ a; I% `+ t% t! _2 |: e1 w. T8 m我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. l7 F3 Q9 q- x3 c) ?) o5 `- e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>