【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 M  s- n' z0 h6 ~歌词我附在后面。
0 R! P5 J& z3 O0 w# k4 }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% ]9 P( T5 Q* _, B% _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 ?; ]. l/ V) r4 yThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( t9 m7 q4 J# ?" f: T" V* C+ v% ESeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- w7 k- N: \: P% M2 R+ l3 PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" n# I% L4 l9 b: \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 J6 I/ E7 ]- {# u( ^5 X+ A8 nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 Y% I" ]9 r$ o1 zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 x7 L9 f7 }- ?4 `7 w) z% PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 I, ^$ V2 A1 U- y2 w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- \. [* I! z7 @8 H1 @8 r! i1 t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ S% r9 t( y, a5 _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 v' `" C- L2 f+ Y6 A- V. @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ w/ W5 F8 c0 v! Y# R) K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% X6 s3 Z2 I8 |9 u. M9 y  h( O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ M9 d2 z7 \9 s  Q! K! e% q8 x! b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& b; |! U% W! m' e. Y( M; I. ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( i" Q" q, k- n& ]$ M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ i. E- W* v/ ]3 p0 U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# z: f5 {- m' _8 Q! U3 h+ L/ i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- \4 l2 N6 r4 b: _" c8 Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! h+ v" Y4 L7 I' T8 t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 y% G2 D! P, ?1 V/ @  Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 Y0 L3 U/ s% R8 R& x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- H3 S: @: n8 q; r# x$ r# R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; L& h1 j. m  u" d4 Q8 H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' t: {7 ]  P( U+ R6 y; X9 v5 z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' f, z1 @. ]" b( S, q( i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 N6 i- K4 C* d" K  K7 ~7 {<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) {. B+ ~1 K9 W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 s8 Y1 ~' B) W& s- ]2 l- G! L- F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, X1 w6 O# `" H: R# Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 m( C3 G4 |  b/ f  ]; E  z. y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 n+ w; |( {4 P7 a( p' [) S7 V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, s: X: @1 e5 `0 R! f, g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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  J( D! O% Y2 D+ r; q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>