【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: G. W- V8 }6 @4 h" C. BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 }. Y! U6 T+ Y* Q, N; h; oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: C- W& R% i, u6 o6 s  `; WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 `1 Z# N2 e8 a9 N, C$ q. Y8 CSeeing the sky content with its love
; h) v4 `5 \1 b$ `' a! @( B$ ~. \6 ^# rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  H7 n/ Q" k5 _/ M: [9 ?9 s- ]1 ^( qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 a0 l  |9 Y5 }& @" bEvery other word you utter is love
2 m% O' H# f( X: K' u! `I really want to know just how much you love me
  R- z" \8 }8 N. C) v; f, `1 x+ gI love you I love you with all my heart
5 B  X+ k& C% O) n, lNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: L1 m, Z0 b0 |! h: N# jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  {. {& D# S- {( T# L' OWith such a tongue as yours,
6 @) A: ?5 Z, t2 M& L7 h' ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& s' i; |4 E6 b  W- J+ p7 YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ y3 C( \1 N( ~7 ]  E; k2 m9 S) CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: u) {/ C0 P8 y; N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! n% E+ e/ W- T4 N8 V4 j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; p6 c4 k/ d4 \. q# ?+ |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, v# z3 x5 x/ o: L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 ?  O0 |5 V* m0 N5 K& {1 B8 v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* [/ r- F% D' \* Z5 \) V9 |" I2 |% a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! a$ v8 b' \0 A9 E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( H* l+ h; W& V% E<P>你无需担心</P>
7 F( {; k7 p8 k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ ~) b) h  n- G; c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* R8 e6 w% R- r5 Z! s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 S/ ~( [& H2 U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ y" b' m# S+ s* T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 }1 g2 h* ~( l/ h; [$ j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 @+ W+ C- X) @" J8 l  Q# j: ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ B  v9 K/ |% j/ W6 s2 J" f3 d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 ]6 s; d0 E  n* s7 _9 A1 S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: p# m. g& ]  u# s) w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! f0 O9 G" T7 b( q4 K! O" L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! J. o& Y+ T/ x) Z+ o/ T1 G# }2 R  B# x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 t# V7 B# p0 [# E( j! S) p<P>I regret not dying</P>
# A" G5 L- b) P  O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ M# J- A# p6 j. E9 Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ W, ^8 }3 F7 T1 D$ Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  [6 B# i+ Y) g3 X  f# l- Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" h. n8 M, t6 }) e3 {  E/ I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ r( `: J8 V( c  D' H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 N: J$ ?6 l) b我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 Y0 b4 I8 a0 s: V' v: T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>