【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ p* F3 t9 y8 f5 }/ Z* `Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" o0 m/ q/ X* o$ \0 `6 j6 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
; [" x1 I! \' U. {, CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( j; J2 X9 v/ L8 s* ?; _2 ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" Y4 x: m4 x; a: u, p: i1 SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 C5 [4 f' B0 I. A" o- tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 n4 x5 s5 G8 H" n/ bI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- ^! S' A( {* y) s- l  y& c& VI’m still filled with fear
3 l4 ~$ L# ?' ^* P1 y" OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( V. C* l; Q" H& V' LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' }3 L9 v5 q( }9 L+ Z' ^. Z4 w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! M" }+ r9 a; s: U( k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 u) m5 m0 y; p8 H9 l( v9 ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 P$ L" ]: ?* P0 |1 C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! N6 Q* ^9 o: i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; h4 F  D4 o& @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) L, ^8 Y( a" [& y9 q* F& w" h3 g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( c3 l/ y* t0 l3 r4 R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- P4 j4 A  E8 _9 R" X7 T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 z- h5 q' M, D# W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' F3 y# Z1 I: q# T1 r2 f/ \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% R  b; M! a7 O7 U7 m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ n7 f5 B" T: x* p% t! |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) q# E4 D% U/ G# j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ |) W2 {  _/ y7 ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" b  t+ S3 r8 q1 L* e& \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ N; w7 o7 z) Q, ~1 S- n, v7 M( \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* R$ e) T! k3 E, n6 c4 N; U2 T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 F. C1 `6 K4 R1 S, G, J3 w% D; ^4 b6 U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 B/ n! y! t) a: e$ A) L$ n  H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 k: l# f0 i$ o) o2 J4 Q1 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ `# X. u5 u! I  a6 }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 M1 ~3 B' n9 b# T# O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, @+ i8 u! [5 [' |' Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( P2 Q: h6 U: s6 u- l0 R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" P/ R# C. Y/ m3 t# z( N4 X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# o: z* U8 }8 z/ }我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>