【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 r0 P8 G: q) @' F2 y8 N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. n# q( p6 w3 H; `6 L" QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' z, U/ q/ R: ?; @  }4 W( S# n. DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 h: A# c0 l4 K, X0 @  T2 i8 ]0 |4 d, wWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 j: s' F3 \' A% w; m- `I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. s$ k/ R2 Z! J* uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  T2 V8 M0 B9 U. {* fI want so much to see inside your heart
8 ~6 |( T9 P0 X- M. X6 oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' z6 I7 w0 T. U8 D; Y. CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( X  K( b7 ^: PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; M& n- l8 L: G, u+ d# D$ TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ {6 G. t! h- S* C1 n/ b3 RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; t& m) S9 j! k" m7 ?9 B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 y9 q, C  t+ Z0 D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# S' H0 V! f+ j6 y+ b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. w- y. J% `3 |- m6 ?& _+ ]6 E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ V6 L5 M  R6 l4 }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 c  D1 g7 f( b1 ~* ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' Z$ f7 M+ [9 _8 d6 b* m, _( K. Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& L; Z- T. X* @' _1 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 a9 C5 m. t3 O8 K  q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; D- [) W5 O* z; I9 E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 ^# m" e2 `8 |% K9 o( a* Z, j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" Q; }9 v- b2 x, C7 V8 _" \- z9 N" E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* Z% v7 ~( G! {/ m+ |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ z/ T" c% k; W, y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) [8 K/ p) O3 K" u$ }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 S9 S' C, s8 [2 _5 G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ u8 P3 U5 m- m6 `5 S( H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ u. ]! W1 q  _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 F; Q$ g; ~$ m7 V8 c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, i8 W' u$ d) _% G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ F% }: ~3 U: u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( `% I  t# y& P0 W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 B! v, d( }1 c& J! S- h) `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 c8 k2 u* C0 C; I# F7 I5 J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# ]2 S/ a% d! v7 [3 a8 @1 p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) d7 u* f. p% J/ H! G4 m% r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) c5 r1 u/ y+ ?7 J) x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>