【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' \. ?- r4 ^) m5 U0 g  p$ xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( n9 V3 w$ n& @- |3 t1 WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 @) r8 B6 z2 g4 V. H/ vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 E+ h: r/ r, `4 M* \: w5 p! R' ~' {With the moon kissing it every night
0 k" B( Z$ C  e0 ?* V& F# _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; O6 Q2 m& q" R2 h5 {$ hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 Z' u% x2 W( p$ V1 wEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  L2 f! H7 D7 n! i0 H+ FI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" q$ a2 L6 B1 hI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 }2 g5 h& u1 Q6 gI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, O! R* ?# W/ _7 SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( n/ K5 j  k( Q6 {& ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 C. k! x6 Q8 \" G4 ]3 g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 f) Y+ y. u4 e8 i. k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, ?/ t! o, r+ L( x9 p( K7 R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; y" n6 _# n' J0 U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* V# v2 g7 I7 N0 X; x. F3 b8 K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: J1 i4 ?5 o. ?/ J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' E1 J0 l1 M/ L; ^" T* n) _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( Y+ M4 D0 l. c) ~1 N( x8 }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ e: B3 V* E2 {* X5 K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 i4 ~' V% q* W0 S  k0 @7 d) X<P>你无需担心</P>
! ~( i1 W6 B! U9 C( l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  x6 E& G& a8 D. C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 U4 K1 E4 c+ @3 P& O. T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 A: P* H/ u3 y2 J1 A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 a' i* B/ f1 u7 |$ c4 W# [% b6 [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) b9 B! g: M6 \. \* c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ }) i9 E& s6 w" `  H  {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ y0 @: F, L9 }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 M, M  N# x( B3 {2 G* x0 H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! {7 Z2 \' X2 ~3 h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 ]* p$ e# g  n( L+ q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ d* V0 W# T0 Z+ i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* i- K: X0 j; `% e# r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 F0 N7 U- b) j. ?5 G4 E2 }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; r! @* h% d  w! c! z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- `- l( A. N- U# i) a) q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* T# e& y; r0 u2 O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>