【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 ^' r$ M3 z4 Y8 Q2 ]歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, r- I* U. |: S  RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 _) s, e2 B4 A9 S" u/ U% S0 _# M! zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  M# \0 B+ k1 P- M  I6 @' i3 NThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 \1 b" Q2 v! [# Q% T3 QWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# ]; u2 D  I" m  k: z0 C, w4 U; cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, ]) P8 d) t: D3 \: b4 ZEvery other word you utter is love
$ i7 f' j' E: @2 _5 k: ?2 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. s, e. |' w, W0 r4 n) JI want so much to see inside your heart
+ ?1 Y5 h0 y& y8 D% r- iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; F. s# I5 J/ }3 b$ Z- ^' \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 V8 z6 U8 X5 X% R. LWith such a tongue as yours,
1 j2 f3 F2 q$ @* n% p! cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" Z) E' L. `, N  K  [* W. dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, D* `( n. }1 w% y. B4 S) f9 R9 rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! Y" q( T* s5 B$ w% i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ E/ z7 |) S0 j. ^2 U* h1 w4 q# V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* G, [1 Q* v6 m' z1 e& M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, {, l4 a5 d' U7 m& u# T; A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 t! {; d, y6 N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: v9 C! h# b$ V% h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 @/ r/ z- X7 p2 L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, ^( `$ b9 `; Y8 x) ^& y; R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ K5 J0 B, A' S) @: D: N, q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( K+ k1 u; f( r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% p6 _9 `9 p2 Z5 V  v$ ^' e9 o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ c! W% W5 p4 N" k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; ~7 l7 A) B: ]6 U% n" v$ y& x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% q4 ?  j! q1 F0 a5 l% B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# l/ K, z3 P$ Y' w5 l2 K& |" S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* D) x  ]1 H  H9 `4 g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; n1 V" t( A8 \! f. r+ ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* G. p  z1 v* A! u<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 ^) d3 K) q% S7 ^4 z$ R) ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 p% R- }, G" O0 i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 l: _8 E% @. C( N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 t. }+ W: J& g5 V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! t9 H- `( _0 c* ]0 R: v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>