【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& p6 ~; D# }. G! ~  @; KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  b# t. X! w- h" UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, G* ?& |* I" S" j; X) }With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& `, [2 Y, S4 o  o1 ]/ OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 x  Y* Z+ x, Y$ T1 sEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& \& M" N2 E5 t) ]" T( v' HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 |# n$ |( k( d; wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 y+ V% j# W/ g! s$ C! I( J% [I want so much to see inside your heart
) ~2 u4 J$ p, F; m, D5 ^) {0 oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& E! I5 u' v8 i  S# SI’m still filled with fear
4 Z) z/ }& x1 |! `1 r& bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 B0 P2 y2 F+ ~I regret not dying
/ x- j' J5 B: A! {- K! yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: D: O$ \' E6 l) [+ r/ gWith such a tongue as yours,
" d" N6 Z3 G. I0 C& w" q1 aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 b& L8 C' m& {0 T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- l0 [! K4 I) @0 B- T9 `$ q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 J* v! ?  Z* m% a$ ^  D7 O: W# g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# y: K  o6 @0 [7 Y: J. J1 p9 j; t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; ~+ i4 b1 ^, g. @* n7 \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' Q! }, e4 v* l2 b$ P9 y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, \( U8 d/ h8 b& }' N+ U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  Z# a6 h7 |  h1 |; q! Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; `+ H" n" M8 G' X0 O<P>你无需担心</P>
( ^6 e' r2 d/ Y4 }1 y% f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 J0 k' P+ f% [7 D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! X1 X" E$ J9 g& l4 P  V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 ~" L, N5 ^  P# I! G% B0 m, e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 ?7 p5 m( N/ U3 g  A& C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 J$ E( ~6 P2 m( |# }8 T- ^" X; R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ {) p  j* u$ j1 U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 ]6 W3 P8 L& Y" P% u3 q& Z1 E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 ^- B7 s, d! z- W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% W# J$ o! d' o0 W3 ^; J# r<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 o  l, r6 B  k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 g9 k8 ]4 R4 K6 P7 j# |0 `6 A9 S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! \0 p6 K: ?1 Q6 G5 G5 Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 Y. e3 j: l  R* x7 d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 m) U& u/ i4 k, q) f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, s) y( j! V. m1 F5 a  Y" `# J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, I8 b+ t- X2 }2 }8 m0 `3 t1 J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. ^3 F& c# a3 e: g" H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>