【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 f" H' A0 z% K6 Z+ V0 Y4 C歌词我附在后面。
/ ^: ]5 ?8 x. V6 T1 OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ {$ g, N7 g6 D+ X6 [Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ N, ]4 [6 E: a8 FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' N" G3 B2 {% k# P3 r( W/ r9 x' c6 bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* ], F) ?- h  _4 mYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. a5 I% i  K# P7 G' zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- i, V& I+ [2 G4 ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. C3 X4 G6 e! y* VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: q* p1 u" ~6 A: u7 ^. ^& V6 YYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ Z+ v: {) i, I# zI regret not dying
  J+ T- i$ y5 _$ \+ U3 E1 [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) r2 }( W+ K6 p- B2 P+ kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 @8 A" D1 K. s& q2 d! R) E* W0 J2 [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& q/ ~$ Q0 r) I" ?" ~8 R! |8 q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- X4 O2 K4 j' Z* T4 [2 |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 N1 Z7 C0 D" }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% @- x7 Y. n4 ]3 n  e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: q! V/ g$ T9 X) A  i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ E% F/ G, \: J9 Z6 Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' W2 |' v( k* M9 Y9 e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. j' Y1 f7 |* ]4 Y/ V- D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! g# F0 v+ e# O# c, M" C0 @2 _<P>你无需担心</P>
; X, {4 z0 Q0 A: I8 p6 I$ L4 C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ @) `( f% p& K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ l. f" h& K8 N, D* @4 j. ~5 y0 {, K6 T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. m7 `" L2 W, d' o! h% |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, L4 c  r& C+ o" L* p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ O+ s( A4 ?+ V3 w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) `+ F2 p; {- Y: Y+ ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ L% J8 A1 y" \0 u6 s0 L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 V, K8 @5 M9 f8 n- N7 I, f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 d1 o. r; L1 b% ~- h9 O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* E7 o" Y) Z, ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, i; S9 J4 G" T# }/ _: J. i/ Y+ q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- x6 b" ~1 }) m, l, X: a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ M! f4 s6 w! v2 `0 X; R6 I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ f, H% t# h. @2 X! z. n  o5 A<P>I regret not dying</P>
: _/ c) s. B& S" M+ a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" A; _& _; R; \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 t' |) o1 @) I& Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& h/ N9 K* Z$ V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( l' m5 V7 S5 q! _1 C5 v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 R4 J1 |) D* [% e1 ?8 M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' {% U1 g( ?  y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>