【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 ~9 c& E$ E/ V5 \& F歌词我附在后面。
. Q, n5 ]5 [4 ?  z" bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 ]3 z+ _+ @, |3 F( b, nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& y! l0 w3 W  c% M! C- ]The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: u: b5 ^3 d' o% S( k6 B- pSeeing the sky content with its love
( M- d! E' @6 R2 \! VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! c6 y1 x3 Q$ M* J$ c, e( f* U; fYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- j3 O& u( g" E% ]$ t- {* P. N) @8 nI love you I love you with all my heart
% K% B7 ?' M- T0 Q& k* B8 pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- v$ u# ?/ ?' ]# t$ JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! @1 W  ]* C" p( g4 C$ gI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& ?1 }2 |% W0 YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 y# x+ ?# T! ~With such a tongue as yours,
4 n/ Q; A+ b! h/ CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) H* T) \- j8 s! f. k. Y. uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 ]. b) s5 B* P0 d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# I; a" g/ C" K4 W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: r2 h( Z4 z/ [6 o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 h$ H: [5 `. S# S* j6 O, W: Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 ^% E3 t- A* @. ^0 r; p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! M0 ?# P, m+ }9 M0 t6 O6 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ X& N7 i& V/ S, F2 O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& G# \$ t. ~1 |2 G& y% Z# |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  j( y7 J' |$ }+ B# K% U3 U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' C' |& y8 x* r7 [4 a( G( U7 F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- N, g9 v; n8 I& r9 D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% R; J0 R2 O( S: Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; u4 j4 ~( `# x; Z% h( w. ^: _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 Y5 d0 Q1 r3 k' h9 N$ F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 {9 n7 V* y+ {! X4 L6 v& a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! e! W$ _( r- A5 e2 V5 ^  x" x' h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  E3 u+ ?0 P* Z9 E& O# Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, ~. S& e1 n( B! Z9 {; q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# \* [3 L3 ?2 m; B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- j; s8 q& w3 Z/ q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( `0 ^5 w  l4 T3 x' \+ F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; ]) {5 i" x' g- U( d* ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 o9 Z% f4 W* y* c4 @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 B# ?* [" \$ A4 n* `3 g: I. l; _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: _/ D! V- ~' z$ f% k9 B1 @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; k6 N2 k! s' z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# F1 c  ?% ?2 ]  @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% A9 L5 V6 ]9 o* ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; S+ @, `  i' @  S6 U9 Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" b# o& E8 Y3 W! d; p, `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
" a* S! \- g' j0 x' Y7 k7 ?
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& u" f; c5 B1 S1 {8 C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>