【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
( G# d, P2 \6 N5 ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( [& T6 x$ t3 N. h4 e# gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ r& d+ s$ t0 t4 S; WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; e: v) X) s* K& Z  `0 N0 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 u  F7 a$ ~% g. ^5 lWith the moon kissing it every night
# f* H2 d8 s3 E8 U0 J) BSeeing the sky content with its love
* z" [6 j( Q; D" wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 Q0 F1 F8 p% XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( J. `+ Q  N9 bEvery other word you utter is love
5 T) g# r" Z0 L7 B- b. s1 vI really want to know just how much you love me
; l; n' Y) e" C% |' v. ]/ TI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% f7 C3 K& n# r) hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- N4 }1 c1 W! x, |  T! uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, U" d; R% o+ p3 @' f8 CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* ]! B( t  T; K0 x4 {/ m2 XWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ w0 S( I, |( p, i) k" v, b2 QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" O$ D' j3 |: C1 M) V) l3 Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 y8 v2 t3 G% A1 w( y  b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" ~* }* l' q- \0 A& X7 a! M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 f6 _5 x  v% |& r# X& K7 Q' `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 b3 q2 {5 g; d3 V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 a$ c+ v% j3 Z% f7 V# A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 B* a4 [8 \- x/ W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 U& E6 v, a1 h6 Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; z8 A7 C, t" D* ]% c* q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 \2 h& q1 f6 i- I$ O* {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, d6 L7 \! q6 A# ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& T" t0 k) B2 i$ r2 Y/ r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 l* \3 x; o, d4 B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' w8 K  F+ b; h/ u2 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) L+ B0 V7 f$ Y. v  a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* Z, ?8 Y( R: u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& \4 I4 s  E# W6 c9 e1 Z7 t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ V& M4 D* R6 D$ ^+ W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# t! q: Z" C) n1 U4 p0 ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  s. a! e9 F; r4 ~% ?5 o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" h6 j# f: s- d% T$ m<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 [2 Q7 g1 x- N7 b5 F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  o. L2 X3 U; _: R& E$ d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& C3 N6 }8 I6 S1 x! Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 Z1 U6 J2 `2 H  a9 f/ z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( k6 m& f1 M5 ^5 [2 Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 X1 X, Z+ l- J- h; [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, @4 I. ~$ P" v- P' j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>