【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 ^9 g% P4 {  s" T( oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% ^+ G, l) W$ h7 ]' TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% S) ?8 ^! U, T% t+ _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 X4 Y! v# n# h* {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& {9 |/ v8 ?! }: ^! `5 Z/ a& IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 v8 j) V! p% O0 o/ VI really want to know just how much you love me
% y( {# O, v( }- HI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! c: X4 j1 }  D; a/ s, LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% A- Y+ z5 e4 L3 J8 ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 L, k2 [7 J1 k4 h+ D% D2 KI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) r) S( v# W  v# z9 AWith such a tongue as yours,
( t, N( n: v- I5 A7 j% V# UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ q' n2 P6 N# |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" C& p1 n* d2 g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 E' q8 A3 n9 ?1 t5 K2 K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 P3 o' y' s$ K% h: |4 ^3 Z# o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, _' b' K, H6 t1 n$ V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  x- j5 [+ Y0 @. g) C2 ^5 n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 V: s9 {% D8 F$ F3 y/ U! J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% w/ z0 v9 e. o- e<P>你无需担心</P>
4 `. d- a; l* a$ X8 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; m' L% M( e. u5 c6 j3 M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% B+ o% p0 f* ~! Q7 L/ W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 Y: T6 {* h( ?. r0 I5 I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) T( N0 }+ u8 V8 {. S! y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 _2 C/ b7 [$ x! J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% B' e7 x* f2 n8 l- S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ a3 b7 P& W1 [, e0 g3 e3 n( z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 }9 n/ G! M* Y' ~& u; L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 X. U% i8 J) X% r* ~- Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" P0 |1 F5 Z: _+ ]/ `1 n/ E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ G: j* }. s5 S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, G8 o  L+ L! X+ d$ Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: n# B6 ?' q& t! j% Y9 c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ G8 W+ `5 {! x3 C% c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) r/ ?8 ]& |* v( ?9 c2 D( p# ]. ~<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  @: d, w' |3 X& F我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 D$ U( x3 T0 X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>