【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 Y7 x- h: D, l4 p1 e歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) f/ K9 V# X9 d; rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- k& m9 u2 w# c( UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) c, V# f( K% sThe sky is happy down to its soul
; [6 Z% n  @( V. B0 K7 {0 nWith the moon kissing it every night
! U6 Y, Q7 F- [0 f3 CSeeing the sky content with its love
8 ?  L& O: W: m2 Q  R0 |; {! X$ WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 Q" S9 [9 u# U2 ?You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 v7 q9 u; C  f8 Q6 O8 V- M& G& ZI really want to know just how much you love me
7 F, r) j# ~1 a/ }- kI love you I love you with all my heart
) i0 _  V# W% w9 K7 x. f3 a4 ?Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! `( J/ ]8 {9 S  ?: l; k& P9 RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. C  R& M" S% Q( I9 K- Q2 GI want so much to see inside your heart
" S& P- l- L2 E9 \( ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: d/ p7 @3 z) m7 D+ [I’m still filled with fear
% ~# C, y9 E, `$ BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. D' d- {" e( f1 G2 _& X7 ?! gI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( r- e4 u) f* z7 z6 j" bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 q3 _+ }- r- ~" J8 P8 O$ Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, ^. q8 n+ ^! Z" }: }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ l" y) i2 R- H6 t' X% P& @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 y, n5 j( d, k( P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 i9 ]: `7 T1 B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 n  t1 {1 Q5 i2 T6 x( h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 d& R9 @+ A, o. J( R# p1 `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 X/ V- n3 r9 ^+ L. h. ?! r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ V* Z0 s$ m4 ]0 l  V  X; n' T0 @/ a1 |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 r1 B7 u: L' @* `% E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. J" a7 Q3 E0 p3 A+ Q  o9 e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! k+ W0 J# a2 O6 E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* ]. |8 n& Z! E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 W5 m8 Q2 r4 W+ b& O& E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" }/ H7 c" |- f  Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 j4 [% ~& I8 V" `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 T5 `$ A1 V  L5 i( ^/ m1 D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" a$ C0 E3 \/ P0 [6 k$ }* h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; G# F+ Y$ e0 O  @' M  T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>