【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: Z8 e7 J" F# j: x4 LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 K) p  ^/ h2 w) K) L, a9 ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! s6 N$ `7 ~1 q2 z' M: c. MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# T. ]2 |9 e+ q  Q  |0 FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 H3 _5 ]: d, _I really want to know just how much you love me
7 Q5 M+ f; }4 G( ^( kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 G' S: X% J3 `: W8 k3 yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' E, b5 v2 M* lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# C3 F, M( ?& _' M) |I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ h7 u  U* J' k, l! X5 jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  w+ W3 e/ T  V& r- ]% k# ?- N9 F/ TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" y3 x4 {$ F& M9 p7 R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; C# B4 Y3 v, l3 \, @3 R/ Q' w4 L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 A& M8 ]8 f* `7 c8 p; ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. H8 ]# }$ B8 ~6 _  _/ l. ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# S( H3 y7 k- [" ^' _% \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. g5 O5 c9 P; ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! g" _" A% t9 M* J: T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. }' Q" G( X2 P<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ @9 Y, _1 j! S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 _5 v& k5 t) m/ H8 u, D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 E8 f+ S  _! I. j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  ^+ L, M# L$ |  ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% j3 E5 D6 l. s1 M  u: ?. K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  U7 B% G2 X: }3 B5 d3 |1 X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 B# g4 A$ s5 o; K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ r- W4 P3 O/ y' M6 m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ I8 |! l* A4 P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ [/ [6 E6 v  R$ h5 R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 m- ~2 V( w8 |6 G6 ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  @+ P  B3 o" `% m& \+ v<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' \0 X: u0 \7 [2 ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 X" S  k9 I) ^' |4 W  @2 o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 W1 @6 m+ s4 e1 o+ v! ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) i4 E( z0 ~8 {6 {# l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: m1 l' W2 B( B8 W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 a- r0 Z) a: g% x- s4 R4 _) F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# |" g1 T4 c' W- d, {我请你剖开它
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% K1 A. c' M1 _6 ?4 C) H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( W: I0 d% R4 X0 Z; j: W, b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>