【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  p' _. u3 b  [6 A" b) TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* x) h- `- o" wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ G# H6 L9 S4 i, h' GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 g: P- |3 v) P7 O7 n+ h# h1 MThe sky is happy down to its soul
; h9 N% [' [# o4 JWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# \" Z- v. \. A  WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 m8 w9 ?# w) \( U% {% wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" T: C, v+ \$ t& M3 P+ vEvery other word you utter is love
, K) u- L, d8 b$ ?* @I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 C# |2 R2 o7 ?# tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% A! B* |4 c$ v& j3 I4 gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 N* A0 S9 S5 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 }+ A  ?8 ]- T' rI’m still filled with fear
  e, F' e2 C3 S- A0 ?2 MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 n  m; ^8 T# A% e, PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: L& I8 R0 k& o/ h9 v3 kWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 {; [/ I$ R! S0 P, XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 j9 y9 U  L. ]- W! z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 s3 i; f' D7 ?8 T9 s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( V! u) ^2 P  e% k4 }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 @/ V6 t5 X( ^- {! V  e" N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: d# @" ]; ~- v7 e7 \; f6 ~- n( C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" R; _" [" S% v# G8 W1 c: _! `% s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( l- S: Y. x& R8 ?4 V3 R# Q- L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 o1 Q; |! a9 [! K& p+ u+ q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, D2 O0 J6 d8 `; S: R& a2 N! n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) h) |. x5 M+ Q  r. k5 U/ q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. W' U, x; t# X0 ?# f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, W* t% }6 N2 B( \/ c  O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ a$ Z+ P' M& p/ N9 c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 |; \6 i* Y' N- p4 c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, Y9 u9 U7 W) u. b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  t4 Z/ d- T  u' d+ O( x* }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% ^- b  U6 z- M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( z; P- @7 W1 r% m! g$ M  _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; S6 T2 v; D" I( T( L: e+ ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' v9 c! D: {; C2 R1 ]9 F8 Q! b% L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( a; c2 L2 F' M* h; L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>