【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! ~; w* k9 m6 VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: `: U/ ^0 l3 m+ k8 g9 l% H5 YThe sky is happy down to its soul
  n( z* `' V- C9 S. z9 V8 MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; V! v: u/ }/ `+ A0 {2 [/ eYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& g$ p  j& m- j- o+ o3 j$ CI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ w$ Q. ^9 u( V. ~* j  M0 |9 \. P8 uNothing can compare to my love
9 L* [$ a6 v, `6 ]8 r2 {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 q. t/ H1 k6 `; sWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ p! Q% a& U+ k' {! OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 a, g/ [5 R! u* ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; M" v3 F2 ?) A* l7 F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. m7 D3 M( x1 K6 A+ T7 t- v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- R0 h, F/ v0 E4 |! T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( q$ N; L3 P9 \; h* E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" _  Z- y) b0 o3 V' o2 Y; f5 A& F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  ^$ J" C# F: f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& O" V& r' ~" K: Z! q, D/ j4 E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 f2 i3 O0 P( ~; j+ w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* A* X8 j7 L' j4 h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ b0 f0 Q" {5 Z  }  B! t) }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" b" a5 W  U) K, J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ I) v" C$ g4 p" U+ H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 m% V- T9 R* r6 I4 x! j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* s# W, m( ~3 b. M1 F6 k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  t6 @2 {6 k$ I4 ~4 O5 c  T' w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% q3 p. r( |0 y" n/ X3 J. [* O) \; m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) Q( [, H4 |: j3 I: w4 D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* k0 |+ y" F0 M* M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 t+ F8 J+ ]0 o% K+ H3 \; D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 n; n) }; i# l# q: g5 b+ l/ m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" Q) q4 \+ Z* p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, V6 j) b' h- m6 L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  @# x0 U4 L7 r$ |2 |, T5 N) v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 V9 M4 E/ n$ ~9 C) K, c6 f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% d& O6 g6 y* d0 P4 V# {2 a: a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ }* \& t$ C# A3 z: J) H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! I( i* {+ t9 S, i: ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 z) V8 J8 P3 I5 _0 V9 G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 [. E5 B& r6 W3 V4 G! d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# f+ g" t$ o4 e, U9 m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; [8 K. D. Y! I) ]: y0 ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ E; `' h; n' ~我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  C. {5 J9 C+ x1 G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>