【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" I/ R# T0 \3 K# P, TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. w2 _% l) J: w2 ]# T3 h$ sWith the moon kissing it every night
* i; s0 Q9 P! y3 k; Q. ^+ OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 S, R/ X& ]+ g5 S& ]  zI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, f  T! T; U5 O6 tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 W, }, }0 D, r' zI want so much to see inside your heart
6 ]- e3 E" Q6 WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 g/ I% ^, b, c$ K; }, L# |I regret not dying
/ y* r5 L3 |% |) S3 TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ L  H2 L# @9 l; d/ DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 F0 j) s: S' f8 A0 RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 v4 C# {/ T; O1 I+ s6 t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 P9 b# r' l( S! s6 C4 x4 `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! W, B4 k/ o/ p$ {+ G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* A% `6 V0 M! _0 Q; y' i: i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( Y* D  ~( s3 B. g% l4 ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& A; V# v7 i, S; G% ~( _: s7 O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) w2 N% C0 N! H3 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 ]" r& q; B( t; ^$ v# \+ I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. g$ ]$ Y3 h9 B8 `: C, q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' Q  q1 Q/ `' ]$ k" I6 ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 S% f" ~; J6 Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! R  c$ s# x* B6 s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, E+ u% n1 Z6 k1 ^9 J8 M/ U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 Z" E5 t/ {% p' D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 @" V) V; F1 T5 Q4 ]" P: V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% l2 Z8 n4 {0 e' j  P( z/ O, k! n1 d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; b; a8 i, a/ x+ {$ R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ U  W% b& m" |; D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 A3 f: \. c3 G* B" \% |: j; ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 K& K# Q+ e0 I5 e( ^6 b4 E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 Z+ [: h0 s1 Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( U! C8 Y( O; c/ c0 J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  x% i  Y0 c" r4 n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( r' M: N% g  z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 z  i4 J( p. ?5 f. p  {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* |! b, N: m+ U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) {3 X; V+ d7 G7 h  Z; G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>