【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
2 K# h# a, s9 v. gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 `5 y8 q8 e7 Z* b0 M0 r. X9 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
) {% v- M  Q1 l) e+ ?& }, SWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 N3 V! ?5 l9 q4 ?) L: b0 x- rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- T- X5 `& \2 {" g/ Z. P0 YEvery other word you utter is love
7 S3 X6 I5 _+ i( n8 lI really want to know just how much you love me
5 ~# G. e9 G$ T& x% XI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' b) O8 E9 ?- XI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 P- r9 ^1 h) [3 q) ^. {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* Y4 m5 u& Z- i0 R' P0 U) TI regret not dying
* h- y' b" I9 E+ b4 k$ J3 hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. |6 ?) P$ ~& {0 K: e. R9 qWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 y! {; G- g8 J. Z  \  h* m! @7 iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) K5 \6 t0 M6 y9 j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ |, W" R; a! e4 v3 s6 e& R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- p, G/ K/ i% ]/ B$ ]  L- x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! h( J1 M* y- D" ^: O) D  g$ k0 G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- u8 i& f/ K: I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) |# ^; g) {3 j; P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- l# g8 N9 @+ H$ u3 S3 x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( n9 i1 }& U  h  }% `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' a+ ~: o. A& ^! ^( Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% U2 |0 N, O% ^- T+ H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ G" m" I  Y: o, G" B1 p4 w5 ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 Z) B' b7 q/ O! m' Y# v( c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* g0 A' Q" l  p3 Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 [8 c& z( T, J1 o4 w! b% u9 {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 O1 M% [2 J9 k* f( a. J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! P& G' o% u$ j: p7 {1 P' B' R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 S, p, y$ S% }0 W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ K+ S4 T/ |3 W$ I* d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 x3 t4 x3 M! H; Q4 M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 |5 E$ Z' S3 t+ c$ y- m: I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; Q! }7 K& r$ v/ Y& I. d8 ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# O5 L. }0 w  }3 M. O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( w1 E# b4 }) f/ l, ^2 H# {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 m7 E7 U& i& F* i; S  e( ^7 n6 x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 m5 N: N- T1 }( [3 P& {: F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# p% k3 e4 F3 R# l, w. z我请你剖开它
( J; x; m, Q8 i
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>