【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 S; o5 s" E- r: b0 s: d2 }歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( H- T# t# T1 VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% i3 B. d8 H' {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 ^3 Y2 u5 n% SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" s( {8 ?1 c* R6 bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! V$ i" d) G% g- ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 X. s, r0 d# v: h8 J; \Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; j% N  a; j! L/ v. }. P, a+ N6 BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( x& c9 C+ Z4 x9 YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" l  b/ n" @% _/ h8 c# o' O' I! ]" LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' X# ?( Q" {% K- ?, mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) a% x  @  N8 l$ y- I5 c/ rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, Q8 t8 {* Y( d3 ~5 C! y1 _' cI regret not dying
' n+ H% n5 z) A* N/ ~  ?. SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. t2 `) Z# ~1 l, m5 S4 i. b' J* D: y! h/ RWith such a tongue as yours,
5 F* L5 Y9 ]7 s0 g  WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! r' V5 t& N& GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: Z4 c% v3 Y$ p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 M. [# j, N+ D8 T& F8 |- e: N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! h& ?) C& }* c( [1 k! d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. S0 K1 ~$ Z- w" Z8 e7 J+ ]# @+ C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, ?: G1 R! m; p/ Z! h5 Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; n. b4 J5 \8 p- i/ N- m  s% @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' z# g) y3 f9 m) l1 _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 N1 n) c/ i+ V! G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 x/ M! r- T9 q- j6 r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' o" Q5 G6 Z. J4 o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 P6 n) b( |9 i! k: k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. l, k. `# D, T$ U& u1 c+ }" s7 w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 S4 d# |. c- m! N1 \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ u- f) h) @* c! l' z' P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# {( U+ u/ d. j% J8 x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' c( z* U( m+ n2 k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- Z7 j- `. w  I" H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 j1 }0 p/ z2 m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: A7 z  G# q# Q( F; j. R. J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ q* [- U( j+ Z1 h1 m9 q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 ?+ F$ f1 l2 _6 d3 Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 h5 V6 [6 g* v9 p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, B: |' u( N8 @  r# e6 w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ i; y+ ]7 f" D! w0 D! e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, J9 H" T8 r& Q( b9 J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 W# p* k! h% q" d( J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 m: r! D' _  v& J8 P. F* B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  Z' g: Z1 k2 z9 A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; h5 m9 K# c7 o9 V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: X  l! S% O* U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 w- W+ ]5 H- L, `+ b1 ?+ y) W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, {9 `, x7 e0 b4 ^6 g5 U  o/ |: l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 ^* M" `$ |1 ^% M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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' g. `0 Z4 v7 p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>