【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
9 T4 ?; b, R5 Q3 U/ }The moonlight is shining brightly,
. X5 f3 o/ W) k3 z7 J& U) k( L. bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ D9 b# d$ y" ?: U3 `& |; jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* q& ?& x  Y4 uThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 s. R6 q  q5 s# I6 y# hWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 k% A. [, |. ]! ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" q/ v" d1 B: g% r6 {. `/ X" S1 tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 V; D( d2 |% E1 fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  c* K* T  A; l) o  {2 U1 F" [1 UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, G* s  ~! [3 m1 N" a) lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; V6 S) O  O9 q8 R1 aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: ]+ y/ X$ a5 z1 N& m. G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; [# _! Q! l$ |. f1 o1 K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" x1 R% ]$ O8 ~$ ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 b, f& c! M- }' G0 H4 f6 S' i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( K4 ~+ Z" S2 @" z9 t' D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  k% m+ M6 `/ E# F5 g3 k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 H+ A" {6 K& l& U9 m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! e/ x5 S$ |8 L( Y' e0 o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# X7 p  a8 {4 P5 w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 O0 O" U, i8 k3 D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 ?) N# ?9 Z7 D$ @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) s6 y9 l8 U9 J* ?. m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' m5 p$ Z2 g4 ~- j6 E9 T2 J* L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 }/ B' R3 S' d4 x& P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 }% t9 Z9 X& B0 z7 ~* I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* c7 w+ J5 H* U( w% q2 p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: ~- u; n  h- m8 ~# _/ ]$ f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. D& O! i& C4 G# l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: K/ ?; S9 [# p, R6 x$ L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 U+ o5 n( @. X" T! T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 l  e# ~. Q' w- v' }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# c, z: O/ ^2 j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' g0 u' b  V# p, ^, ?; X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! s- Z3 q+ [0 @3 ~$ v* ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 s" N5 h1 \6 t& ~: W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ `& ]' [2 s6 {- n* W1 N2 f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 f' }4 ~; O( q+ f! z  Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% F( V5 b$ Y4 x  \* V' Y' m$ a<P>I regret not dying</P>
( _- s  M3 \- _/ }  ^! k6 i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 t! I% Y) v  q% ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 @" U3 \5 j% |3 D% g* j# X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 ]$ Z; X% _8 q; E2 n' t+ d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ R: t4 L# G# E' l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! j1 C% \  I, q! C8 _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ r# @5 x! o  e0 t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! ?2 _4 o' {( z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- W, ^* g4 Y8 o) H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( Q( I# e( o: ]# Y, j+ Y我请你剖开它
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2 ]* ?% l) n0 i! E  b6 [( e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>