【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 g% ]! `+ Z6 E- i! t歌词我附在后面。
9 F& j8 A# V$ e) vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ _" f( B/ w* r  ]* X# \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 |/ Y7 W: X( B; C9 HSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" O' O8 V9 G* OEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% c) ]- C* V9 W, q- k7 `% \I love you I love you with all my heart
* w* a  G$ V. N% T+ JNothing can compare to my love
4 v' l2 ^0 K3 b1 m) p# }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 Z8 n  W, p; o7 t7 S' YI want so much to see inside your heart
# B/ M4 Z; O# x& }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 k  L/ m7 ]( s) o' q) }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 b8 M$ S* h4 }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 d! [& F' y, c6 [, m) P! jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( M5 J( u" h+ O2 V, {9 `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 s! M9 K. ?/ q# B  j* @+ E: z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 q2 d, u, `0 L) O5 }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% g) v5 I5 Y3 z4 X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) Y9 T4 x, c8 r$ q; _- t* r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. ^) C$ f% ^  Z. t: e$ V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 L$ i0 o/ [; a# A0 a3 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 {7 b! p% Q) P0 ]  M+ t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, Y+ \0 ]4 z2 p( F<P>你无需担心</P>
, m6 d. }& n$ ~, t0 `8 K7 G5 [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( q$ d! l- i8 W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- ?& C& g- Z& @7 L. n! E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ s* `5 s/ f: j( L( e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 u- M* c( ^: c7 {% t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( {, y3 C% |% P; a5 r9 R# N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 U$ u- P) ^8 E" H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ o4 {, F. ^* V7 t7 G+ x# B3 ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, u% N+ E; m2 {( p- T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ i- p4 g- |% w3 L, h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) U0 t  _  R7 f. t2 L4 v5 S* k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 H8 I! P3 Y% l% I* [, w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 c& \% H; V% a1 ~% M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 x/ ?2 u; t# Y9 ~' z4 e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) h" H& A$ Q( n- T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* I6 D6 u3 W# v3 `* n1 H. K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" j! X' i1 N" |2 I  C: L$ R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) [' J1 U$ h) G8 Z% f5 `2 Q- v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. {; p- F+ r7 R0 m- Q$ i2 ~& h: Y. U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 n8 c1 F  i" z' m/ |9 O) Z我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>