【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# @5 |  z0 G( v. V, E歌词我附在后面。
. Y- l# ]# J& t/ }The moonlight is shining brightly,
: n# C0 V, @1 J; _0 q2 \7 }3 pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! E( W1 J* A9 ?* `7 `5 tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ E$ z' k! M9 x( U* {. N/ VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 D/ r. E: z. {' j. _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 I' Y4 W& \7 {5 Y$ s5 O. UYou needn’t fear anything
1 |: u) _% K/ l4 N8 i" LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# n! B3 S" a; R& h: Q8 P3 R7 }Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: m" E  ?" ^/ L- V8 m7 A  YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) }5 h& V/ k- C1 ?( j* ?( I/ u  |, \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 I) V; Z1 j. FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 A! \$ E- O1 v; z4 ~" s8 AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: A4 |; ~' D! N0 t/ }2 I  gWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# Z& Y6 G) ]. r) E: i. \4 |; XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 l! ]- f5 c. D6 Y8 X. SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 Y9 `; |' W& H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 {9 G7 ~; r' ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 W9 T: Q0 |& ^& Q* X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; B0 {- R& |7 h" @( |5 A& w; m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( o8 x$ J8 h6 u# S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 y9 H) O3 }/ B2 ~! M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 L* J) A3 L" O' _9 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, U, |& o& r) ]9 Y4 f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% }1 `# t+ m( V% P1 Z% O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& M) r3 N; x) V% A5 d  O9 n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; t* T2 x% H2 f* k$ `' x  T( A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 w) C2 w" h2 S, @1 j) u( P: c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( w" ^' x4 j  ?; A" P  u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% ~( ^" V2 \& {3 S" q6 X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ K, X# u& A/ B0 x( e4 D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 w% i  Y/ c# R. d" ]' M3 R1 A+ p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* |" l. [- I4 J# a# f3 g" X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) q1 F( V) V2 [# [2 Y: x8 N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, k. y9 @* S" x  \3 L* A<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 |; _0 L. O' K& S$ a2 P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# X( {9 B7 ^. L" X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! v* B' c  y) B  m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 q  i6 F8 l. L9 x3 Z5 C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( |' W3 Y4 r' u, ?0 v0 p# L6 }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 @9 Y* e* }1 `! ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 q# A5 r; w- W3 I7 G9 ^# L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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$ T2 U- V+ G& Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>