【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 ]( z" ^7 h- K: |, g歌词我附在后面。
; E: d" X+ v  R2 b0 o. b5 oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 u7 a; d) x3 v/ Q8 zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ {4 f, X/ K% y7 ]# r+ KThe sky is happy down to its soul
- W/ i: D: r% R0 F0 L, r0 sWith the moon kissing it every night
0 {, b8 f8 ~5 _1 h9 ]/ H4 oSeeing the sky content with its love
; @& W* E8 D1 z+ }8 X3 ^6 L& OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% s) l/ P# p( G) {2 D5 iYou needn’t fear anything
% O; [5 U/ k6 AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 m2 k2 v; T# `: m# k  iNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% i, G. P& o) H1 m$ b8 yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 A2 z0 Y& E3 d" v6 z; K6 QWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 o$ ]9 Y8 t* a8 C8 w2 lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 M1 m! p! H$ c/ G0 A; g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ @/ q8 N5 m( ^# R) T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& D( }, t7 a; Y3 |: R" g4 p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: ^" [5 a+ W& e4 q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( V) \0 |- J2 v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' w1 q" f; w6 C- {$ l! f/ x/ Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' j' E4 V( q; z* A: j  y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; Y2 ?' F3 ~1 {" E8 a! X8 l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 u$ q3 x3 D. x2 s& @9 X/ e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: I6 A  l0 U  \! }: l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& _& A) g' y) U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, _% ?' r8 w4 f4 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ Q0 K5 _. r3 D" w. ]9 i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 R3 i7 a- j0 g+ D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 D0 F" m! O+ S3 s7 n* i6 |! a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 k4 ]# y2 }: z# V+ l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 E" s; ]5 v  z* n$ y( `) X- H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 |: }, F8 E3 p. K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# Z2 g' a  K& b; q2 i- c<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 I5 r  ~/ R. L. @/ i/ z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 K! A7 i9 Y0 [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>