【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ t& _' `4 s, q, F  W3 bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 v7 v" P! c% i% SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 H# r0 A- g" Y2 D! }, K: HThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ f. ^! R- W- K8 HWith the moon kissing it every night
! z1 N; u* H* ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. u/ h8 k7 h  z, KYou needn’t fear anything
, f" t$ ^- S1 ?- s) XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 s0 u% R6 F$ p- }5 N, P6 jEvery other word you utter is love
' T$ ~6 d7 r- q& G: B/ v1 YI really want to know just how much you love me
: B: B7 h6 r- X' b2 [9 bI love you I love you with all my heart
3 ^# i2 T( X9 ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; l6 c" [! i  |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: b0 K, \1 K7 ]3 T* zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 S/ Q% a# `( l1 g" r$ }# vI’m still filled with fear
  [& m/ s+ N( AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! b: X2 I: w1 P  T, VI regret not dying
. o+ ~$ \/ a( {6 C1 FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% O( k; s. [8 ~, gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ K' O( R: @$ N. M+ L3 Y5 m- q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' }  b! c2 `/ {% S- s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 G8 G' i' v' c' D) e- X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* y+ ?$ v" u+ H( ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( k7 V; E; F! _* J5 Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 Q; {0 r" B- s6 {$ ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( w& H* r6 E, L' v" P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 c0 `, S/ ^: h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 |$ x" c* i# e. ~: Z+ d" i1 M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- g4 T0 H0 d( B& W& A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 y1 X3 {3 F  g# j4 O! a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' `/ m) U, @* `+ J3 o0 P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# K( {- c8 F+ ^6 {. L7 H" L7 _<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 C9 N+ @% O0 h7 u1 p, r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 D* z7 g' E# ^" m' |: E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; l! I- \2 k& G; s) Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* ?; ?- y. ~! Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 f/ E% j" a7 m' w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# w0 E9 n1 h3 w+ J$ y" ]- w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 Z9 a( U5 z- m; t- D4 q0 m# F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% z/ ^5 U$ s) A9 B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 I. ]& a" h/ T) v! W! ]% P/ c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  z3 H6 H3 @- @& L8 s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 W* L* Q$ ?4 F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 h" d. ]- p% C. w" ?, y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>