【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; Z; @+ S$ u. y& U# _0 w- x歌词我附在后面。
; |( I8 V1 M& B2 W# x* ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ C. X6 M6 S  b8 K3 bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ q) Y6 Q9 s/ I7 v; [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 Z- E9 P2 g/ e3 n/ ^/ _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; j) X6 R0 Y& M: X! T2 _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" ~$ ?& y/ b7 i& B. kSeeing the sky content with its love
- Y4 }- ~7 G7 \* d% J  UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 U& j; o0 I, i, P8 s' PYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' M8 U' G1 T& gI really want to know just how much you love me
2 c' t: H# K% Y' F4 }( h0 {I love you I love you with all my heart
& |1 R9 S2 T7 }" S0 _  k& VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ l" O6 @4 C7 i/ wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; R- p% g) M- K9 NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 |/ W# r1 B; `* k' RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" `- S$ y0 i2 y3 l) o5 z7 h' _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# D* Z9 t% a! D  ^- C7 h- Q1 C% F) z5 D& h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( ^7 e: k1 E3 m; b) e  s. Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 C8 \' n2 X% s2 F9 n- v1 P0 [) B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 ~! i4 Q% u" n4 F9 z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ j; l5 F" s# l* O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 C  d% E3 S0 D+ t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: ~% W. N: `* _* y) j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 Q& h- M+ U1 k) x+ d  F; u9 V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 A% p8 r6 V, ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& G; R: m7 @; Q9 U6 ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 ]2 d1 P9 s" w7 f" }4 K& f( R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 ?3 q: _: e2 o+ O3 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 @- O' `& ?) R; R4 q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- ?. L4 d$ R7 p: O" v# l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 t. z& i+ S& M$ k4 V) n* V2 a1 b, w1 `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; w) a! {5 t/ ?& Y7 r: X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 O6 h3 J+ _  e0 h- `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 E9 H5 _4 n( F5 X: f* }- ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* s8 ]/ p! ?, Z3 Q( v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# ^! ]0 U# j9 ]9 I# c7 o, g' W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* c4 W* D% x6 M% _; _2 A. l. }$ z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" V, W1 v, e) w4 v# l; S* m4 b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ r  [! ~9 s5 I9 a5 O5 ^" }* K# n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 T) I+ y( a" M: I. L3 H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' E+ Y0 \2 ]  x' Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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