【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, P" z5 X# }8 `5 YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; V3 k9 }; [" f; y* M0 XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, Q3 d* m% Y" T" N* F- JThe sky is happy down to its soul
. |# W$ i/ B2 V4 N* c  \0 uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 U9 k& ]- ?7 \9 o: @. rI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' p% y. [9 V" g, C8 b' LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 m, q2 e' |; }5 z7 ~+ eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 M6 A' `. O9 ]8 N+ k7 I) |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 e* J4 c( Y* O% @& S5 \$ G; cI regret not dying
" S' y! y4 j& m5 Y! E: OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! a% V3 u+ J$ r3 @5 `- j) [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 Y) l( w, D( E) Y' f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; [9 ~  M$ c- }& b. ]0 C% y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 a% ]. @+ L( Q* S# m& Y, T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 h, S  T6 X' l% I. _4 a0 g4 X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 ^3 V" Z3 Z! |9 I" c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- z  i7 f1 N  ]) X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 G, [6 `3 Y6 a0 W) Q* |, {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" o2 n6 ?6 J8 v6 _0 _2 l1 \+ h/ H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 _$ q! x- v8 V! Q9 ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ |% S. `$ u2 b2 ~5 d8 `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 z1 W  ?  P( [% q! w+ D8 v4 n: H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 ^5 C7 `  ~7 F" `1 S+ G* C3 T8 o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# n! S6 D; S0 P! d' M9 v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& L8 |6 J2 a, [+ s+ u7 O/ s( d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" j4 [, n  W& i% D7 I4 i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; }  D/ x& Q* S8 o' @& L/ w4 [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' Y+ I% b* u7 S/ ~! `' v我请你剖开它
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/ P1 H4 _3 ^* p1 _" | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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