【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 t8 F) {# J0 z7 ~5 rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 O8 F. ], W# O7 {# Y; eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 v: ?( D6 P. x3 [8 CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 I# T* O, w' _6 a: b8 R2 mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) L# v) a* j8 k8 P  k1 HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ Y9 q4 o$ S5 b5 @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- `2 R0 q+ o6 p- MEvery other word you utter is love
& i) D  |4 H5 T) ?# g+ TI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 s0 u  z) V9 A, ~! o& m6 mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" ]5 u) R5 V4 G: o/ d) R+ X' O/ RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 d* m5 g) P2 i7 X  h4 TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- Y, v. z7 b: k1 w/ nI’m still filled with fear
8 b- `4 \1 p  {. d8 [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ _/ w, M0 N  s. |$ x$ P1 k/ PI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 C* S6 u  B0 N0 |! x: d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ I* T6 Y8 Y! ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  M. t, p5 B1 T- A# x  L1 P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 v" p/ U/ ^% ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- k0 C. [1 g( ?& L( b5 p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 O: R# o' S* n. I& N) B! w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 C3 D- s; U/ `& B/ d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  _: ^+ {6 k& ]$ x' C5 M$ `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 U" }8 g! ^! C  j  ~<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, {$ k5 w9 Z: F# d% k' P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ [* M  S7 |; E# P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 L8 M# H8 w. K4 ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. [; M' A" @, a$ I+ Y7 K  u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( X6 O* U8 d* N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ Q' H; k- M4 U$ Q: l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 k- ]8 r* n/ b' L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ [+ w, W$ f: l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ P# _: z" ]3 W, G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  B; H+ G* ?% D9 l2 s7 B6 A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* R2 z3 Y9 S9 D6 q6 E+ G  ~3 w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; g" z6 T( F8 F9 K8 J8 M2 B1 U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 y- D' T3 h) I9 G; K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 o) R. u+ a7 T- r6 ~8 j' `( C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; E1 F7 q2 A& X- O$ p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# m' o5 I5 ?5 `! g0 S' A2 ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 b, ~2 m6 t( F1 U/ e, Y6 I# L, D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 b4 G8 A$ ?" W- Y. r$ P# F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ Z' f' }$ D3 U& E# e4 S7 a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% M. N$ l" b  q# C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>