【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. I* V$ |! F9 l  ]% J歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, S& c$ T6 H  m9 f0 b, uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 U% y$ m$ Z4 dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 ~( |( \# {+ W9 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ k- `) _3 y0 h! kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' P) n4 N0 d. a9 h2 y' b. VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% w, M5 i; p3 K6 x0 L+ uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" ^( R  B  }0 l8 R' PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( R- h6 g8 d! h: q! w0 F$ L4 t# i' pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 ]& w1 `7 P, f6 ?' \$ A) q- \) R% SI regret not dying
* f8 D3 \6 U7 OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ o6 T5 J) q2 ?/ G( o! oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% `) s8 M! D2 P# c+ l1 tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 v; E; ?# A/ w/ N+ v; D: q9 O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" k, h! }) X9 f" O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" w6 H  q8 c, q/ ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, W) s# T  a: L; s' n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ B4 W  q- z+ L2 a' W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- x+ S5 i+ D# [* d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; o8 ?! Q! V& t% x0 w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 O+ `# G! V9 J6 N: |- p& x$ D! W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 F7 w, o6 ~- f- V4 g2 ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ A5 ], v7 W% f( L, J0 q* s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* z& b; e3 F7 N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 s* W+ {, f% K8 e; o$ n<P>你无需担心</P>
: w+ p9 S1 j/ c. w9 T/ X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. v. k! n, g* z- \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 T8 T3 {# o' w+ z' z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 o* z" S; c. ~* Q4 q1 F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 X4 o- O4 e# c0 X) S1 ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  `8 A5 _8 j( `0 k6 I' k( M8 l" Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* C1 B+ e+ [. X# t- S- U6 N4 k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& P) v( Z0 r/ n6 i7 _4 |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" g5 T- b7 c3 L8 ~6 \  z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" a3 X0 x- x4 }. o4 \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 ]5 V( [0 v9 A" h( {<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 [9 s9 ?- P; _; h" T$ C/ k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 a. _8 r9 r9 O$ w4 `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 }- p" N: h) |1 T! w5 n3 y9 K: X<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ @# Q6 e( z  f8 E* W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# q, L6 M9 @  C3 q( f# w" M: h& {& n* o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 ^9 h4 i0 |4 Q- T7 A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>