【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
' s$ l. m) O4 N# uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. }  J* S8 P9 e5 @# `! ]- \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: p( ]2 w* r% N, y4 C6 gThe sky is happy down to its soul
; y* `' g% g/ h7 Z' iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# ^9 Y0 O6 U9 ^! q9 r9 CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) B3 X& H# L) _) F' T* FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; X) _6 s( c' wEvery other word you utter is love
$ |5 |0 e1 W( C! XI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& v& F; a0 e1 o1 b2 z( ?: u3 FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ m: J2 N1 b' H$ GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 `9 \  f5 I! d2 v. L. M% k' eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 }3 f* c! y" P# rI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; g4 p9 H) n/ yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 n/ n$ y% J6 t, lWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 F' n) L% B$ x. n$ r8 ]3 U( q; ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ q8 J, P5 x! q8 z1 Q' r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- c* b- g# Z& j* v7 U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" h0 |4 \* B( I7 }% L& X) U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 X2 Y& |6 F) y/ u; s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 ~- i9 d5 u* V$ G! R6 |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! x1 _! N8 N+ ~9 r6 S; c% Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 ~! r8 H7 w, `& c3 s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 ~, ^2 ?( T8 U5 x! H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ R4 @1 H& V) S' E: M% A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ m; O2 b& k  W; O) E9 k" B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ Y1 n- V3 I* P/ V7 d7 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 ]( x* D) o- J: x9 Y$ e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% K  @4 q8 \7 s" v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 {$ {/ t/ d" X- d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& L6 {  \% a- Z$ Z& f: x8 q  a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- c! }0 E* }! h<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% a8 k. e  p, ]# I% h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% ^8 {$ T: i! ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 L# _2 [1 w5 I6 }  t4 K$ K. i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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# N( G3 L0 c8 G2 K- s5 p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>