【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ t* l& @* b$ `2 AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 y' ^( t4 Z8 [6 l" f  QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  C( [/ K* A$ B1 j$ dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% M3 D  a: Y: Z5 ]2 p0 FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 t% B1 q# n6 V# l1 c- s, X$ ]The sky is happy down to its soul
' l( K8 j% F' G. _! rWith the moon kissing it every night
7 |2 f/ Z5 y! V: g* zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 S& |- J! w" K- |+ FEvery other word you utter is love
/ N# v/ e8 l: m# n/ q# GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 v' i% T% }5 i5 H3 X: VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& b# h( [9 J( g8 A5 kI want so much to see inside your heart
$ D! O" @3 i1 f% vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( |3 D" U/ O6 T* D% l5 P9 vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 s& D3 G, {0 Z+ JI regret not dying
' }1 M" T- k* QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. B7 ]4 q% C2 g$ |, n8 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  S8 K. H1 w- x+ v  O9 V% [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 Z5 o5 v# S! }' m* U+ R4 }7 o4 D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# W/ K0 r" Q7 l/ t& w# t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 g/ W" `; Q- z$ C" E% [- ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 p" p4 V- S+ Q: z& r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' ]! W* b# B  {+ s. i7 V4 E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. R8 [+ K  p- p! ~5 [- B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# w1 |& l- [; o2 o9 K<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* r' T/ t" a7 B& F8 e1 F7 r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; P- {( U' z+ s: Q1 ~/ g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 K, i# V- p. C( f7 J* f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' H# u- Z; ]# J% s' k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: F. M8 Q% M1 z+ K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 C+ ?# x% k! j* W1 m# O( D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! p, n  O: i4 }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- I9 c( W0 U4 Z" m! w5 ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 F+ \. [0 C4 L# R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. H# X$ E1 e- B% `) ^0 m/ @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 o- u7 K9 `1 H7 d% w3 W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" V$ Q/ G# P. J3 K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* B: _/ b; V. U9 y; f: i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- n+ Q. k, Y9 v0 Z- b$ a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 k* W. B1 |  _. G' I% |5 F: Q8 b/ ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 P) X2 W* F8 q7 P2 |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! R; N/ ?+ p1 B) z4 O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- q: c- S2 ]6 G: ^* l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, k4 A+ U9 J$ W! u& j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, }( w+ T& u; G2 R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* j- m0 d3 U2 n- |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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6 R+ Q( @% e/ x8 {/ d! j% V$ K2 ~3 \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ w7 W- o  t" p. j" Q0 t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>