【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 Y5 t1 Q$ S5 V9 z2 v+ ^歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 |: j4 a: Q9 N6 c9 j3 g5 SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 ?; D( d: A+ @& t  e: mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# w" x) f0 a0 ^5 @Seeing the sky content with its love
; f  i3 {# S6 L! ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 g7 J7 a- d9 R8 R! C; F$ zYou needn’t fear anything
& S% I/ b6 P, U. D% lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ }4 t5 l* O6 |/ OI really want to know just how much you love me
4 P  S7 @, f9 b+ Q( W5 r6 R9 zI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ s9 m- a- Y. d1 b  w! z. II want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ e. g3 N: ~  ^& CI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 A; I+ h# U' V4 ?: HI regret not dying
+ l! U9 t4 H) k: eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( ^0 S$ a6 H/ b* r4 _' K, DWith such a tongue as yours,
: a- r8 c9 N7 O+ eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% F" m$ G6 N# s8 B+ |* @6 CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! G, W+ L* V  Z5 [4 D. Q" K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# j/ G  N; f) w1 S( U+ B6 \" _0 K' F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- N. d6 v0 H# F- x% p7 s: R, B) K/ M. {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 y6 ?! P1 R) ^/ Y+ t' H2 T5 Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; ^9 u, h1 w; S$ T6 k9 ?0 a" l) P' c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 r2 w" Q& P" S& a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ |6 I2 s3 T# m5 n. o% `+ V<P>你无需担心</P>
6 |, W6 w" {1 d) U( m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 Y. H) f7 G  M" E  X5 ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 A. @2 V6 y2 A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 E+ m3 ?# S7 `; e! O0 x4 S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% k0 U! V$ `& v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 J0 F4 b3 Z) m! R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ l; _" P% B& }9 d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ H* @0 m5 B, h/ _) a/ c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) V6 c. C. j- r. Y. G, H2 O9 [; ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 E, o( {6 ?9 P# \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% {0 V# D# \8 e0 y5 Q7 m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' O- Y7 D2 r: K* q) z. e" v4 k( m<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 X4 h6 g2 ?. H- x9 d8 z8 z/ o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& Y; S% r' s+ h2 S3 ?  e! m" F3 u+ z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 F) m7 V6 @' B$ |5 V, G+ @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& e% D8 X1 [! |# M, w: B" O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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8 G  `: ^) W& X1 z# \3 z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; e& j* i0 {% ]4 \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>