【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ u$ L/ R. v9 S$ O: |; X歌词我附在后面。
/ k! o6 B) G$ q9 hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( S0 J' z. b  u% B( N' QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' q* Y) E- T4 l- U& |( c, T9 R4 dWith the moon kissing it every night
: B5 A& i2 H& H6 i, N7 ]Seeing the sky content with its love
& a& n. h" P- [/ YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  S+ a" d1 ]. {& [8 sYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& f, ?; t5 x' c% C# nEvery other word you utter is love
# @8 P, \, K7 F. E4 }I really want to know just how much you love me
8 q/ @9 L- J3 m1 X1 oI love you I love you with all my heart
# j7 f, ]: s7 k6 C* r4 TNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 e: g& E1 b: o, @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, Q! B$ u; [8 I) F3 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' ?2 p- {: [5 J) ?/ \# x, ?4 O) AI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. ~  x8 {1 Z9 E+ L3 G7 t" w6 {0 z7 MI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% h8 [7 U0 u6 K1 d) _With such a tongue as yours,
, z: `5 I; X4 C  x. x3 dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  r( ]2 V' ?- m$ }, RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 Q' D% r2 }- C, p1 R9 q# ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; v  U5 q6 D, U% Q1 B+ O6 _1 e0 k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( a* A9 P/ e2 W  w# ~# Y  @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 w% S( P% D3 R" t5 L4 \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 W# r' I9 k7 ]$ b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 ?! Y% |+ x1 h9 Z* r; ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% O% g5 m7 T2 j' I# ]# |6 o# C: U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 ~" u% J) {' o& P: n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( w* ~3 |8 I. C9 o/ C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! X; y, W8 V' ^+ M" N# m3 U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& V; N. Y7 v' B/ t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 }; n% j7 x4 V5 Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) M% g& |3 X3 [; D& g6 G1 T: N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- [5 ]. ?9 J# O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( o3 W; C$ I' [0 E+ t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- o: e; R7 v% D% Z7 R5 P# ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. n" h, @: e, ~' O& ~4 S8 z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 |' G7 w+ x2 a$ z8 n) B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 ~) a7 C1 G: _( n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# m% a+ }; @* Y; @5 P2 D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 x1 [5 l* h9 ]+ i* Q6 ~  Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( \$ p8 I8 E7 t0 c' o我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 Y2 ?1 o" b5 \% ]! H$ m! U) s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>