【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
9 I5 N! M; [* @& ?6 CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ p8 c$ U( J* O3 b* [! p1 i: F; }* eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 ^/ {0 J1 m; U3 TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, O2 @% t9 Y3 @1 p; K  `$ X, i3 uSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, H2 n8 l2 z; ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. @8 U1 t0 s/ \: M: \# O2 {# f, _I want so much to see inside your heart
0 t' z6 m+ G4 x! \9 ?+ @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ D- c6 V. c; ?5 b" |0 ~) ?& ]I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 d  p, ^# y% [( IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! J" A0 L/ m) [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' e* ?. d2 M6 U7 Q2 L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ k* F4 e. Y( Y# \* z" o8 t  c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: C- a. a" F6 a  x: i9 ^# h5 T; ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) n4 _! \: _7 \4 d5 D# ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 M- J$ p. n/ z* h  d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 [) k, M! b' q/ u; ]6 N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, H) P$ Y) w; ~( i( p* {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  X' U: O* I0 [, U; V! p  Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 E' V& p# ?2 U  _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! l* X# t$ L$ b0 D; {3 E9 ]% d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  \+ ]3 y% Y( n1 p/ `! f3 N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( d  d( J. |9 A& T& l" T& Z1 f3 q7 Q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 n* J& l  f: J; I# p4 F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 K3 y$ h+ k7 U/ i+ K0 L& P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' z) D! f: H( g! \; G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! P! F7 M0 e2 L, ]1 m) f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ O  p" B" Y* Z; O. q+ q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) F/ z/ _. s+ k% X8 `, W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( x: ?( _, t. M, T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 L- R2 f& \  s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! z2 l+ e% O4 C; @<P>I regret not dying</P>
" n, D5 j2 [% X3 N# f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. r5 v+ }4 f2 @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  L! y& `1 D0 E" |$ c1 F, ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, i0 R6 [/ B2 D' [3 r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; c" X& h8 ^1 V) w- X  \/ \- [<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

. N$ `8 F, ?. `& J/ f( Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: w# Y5 @* p) O3 ~& d( F% h& q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>