【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 r7 n, _9 @: J. K  QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ A1 |, o; \& t- iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  ~* m8 a% n( ^3 J2 A0 JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- a3 ^8 V, K7 b4 N, P/ gThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ w# |& q" q( m6 W- B/ I5 ]With the moon kissing it every night
& s' l+ a; ^% l3 Z( u9 q8 i" p8 K' zSeeing the sky content with its love
$ R- Y* b& s! D) t! i% {1 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) D# I) v/ }3 SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  V% W. h6 c& U: S- DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ }. h0 L; a7 n/ `+ B0 AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 Z8 a0 A% Y  J% A: dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& ?5 P% B0 P) ^! w. E7 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! j* B2 Y" G  DWith such a tongue as yours,
6 n  t2 |2 A. B. CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' `. G: X  [( _' Q7 P2 }8 e3 p( Y, rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 J- j$ w. h0 L% ~2 a" R2 G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ H8 {% O0 D" N; X% A2 m  x. i5 `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 D5 d) C2 S' e, i- q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 H2 M- V& g; }" ^3 h9 F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 w* m% L3 [# R* H( ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( e4 W5 r7 M" }7 u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) i0 [# n7 C! g3 m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 H* b& N- ]) N. z+ `! B/ \- S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 s! D! i. m( d2 v6 i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 Q$ D1 g5 v/ A" H; m7 c. V8 n, l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ ]# W- I/ i/ |7 m9 i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" o  C% y: N& a2 t- c. c8 p# p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ t4 R# b/ Y! L' N3 G' O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, ^/ V7 W1 U! o/ O7 G" _5 a7 b9 v4 O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 i7 j7 z: u* M# H3 k4 v/ ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 u3 ^' @4 Q! H5 C/ ^* b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- {. C) P8 @0 }. }5 Z& P, C9 q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 L+ T2 ~9 V# p( I! r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; e4 J* }/ e, T8 v" V  g$ O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 `3 u: @4 m( L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 Y1 y, Y' |! P# `; {1 q; \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ Y$ I% a" [! ^" l<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 S* X0 x0 K7 ]+ m3 X: G- B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' i( y9 x/ `4 ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 K) L8 w/ ^7 [" U1 u3 i' K% d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" l, {3 T0 {4 i! o9 L: V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, v) q/ d' K/ a& M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>