【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 z9 f! m( B5 j% B- q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* r: l. S- Y+ W" A0 eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 W7 m: G+ I/ a/ b( ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' n. A) O6 N& X) l4 R; C8 A: T  ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; p7 [2 I/ {. e0 P. V9 z" M; N, f+ lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& a9 C- G+ U# ?/ c) P' SI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# e  M. k1 R1 p7 B" LNothing can compare to my love
4 e; |: Z- o9 ]) GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  v/ E. u  z4 h+ X, A6 fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 S: e! A/ z8 w0 Y* X1 m0 M* z' D0 gI want so much to see inside your heart
$ P; ~/ o6 Q* @* G# f& xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ W* I; f2 `- \7 M) g' M. MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% ^' @+ O% @$ p' Q" o  r+ [8 wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% t" {( X- m8 j, yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  K6 T, k' X# I0 |' z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* p& W* _( R+ w2 Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 ~& O; e# K- i! h; b; p7 o# L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 ]1 Q$ g% j/ l; @7 N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ {& L3 t/ f* L9 {0 z, s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, U7 N+ L7 ], `4 w0 w# k- f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' p6 [0 _0 [/ W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" D) U0 R" x: f2 P! j! [# s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. F5 M% d& v& f( W0 E0 I' {4 q9 H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! H# H1 M6 ^: n- t# {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; v" w' S# F" K) k( v  S, i. R. w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' Q5 W; p; \/ M/ ]0 d% S  [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 m4 x) h8 V0 A$ _* @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 m# ]8 I8 @5 T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 J& k  O6 N. q2 q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* |6 ]! p/ Q: V, |5 \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 U. X7 ~: d+ @2 f, M8 G  X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; G! ^7 D' m( r1 D$ X  f8 g8 X8 J4 V3 l+ N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 b0 V" a: [( `. `( m  D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% k8 Q2 }6 V& a( K# E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 c. q' `7 x; o5 _: T! O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 |* q, Y& |! J5 U% X' ~8 t1 E<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 r3 z! ]6 _" K6 F3 ]2 N* d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- f1 a- L# z* {* u* D; u8 V3 Z. k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 d3 D/ Z1 N; |$ O9 C: e5 @. ~<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

/ ^9 d  w" f4 p- g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>