【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# A6 v: T" b) W  n; r; l  kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 V% i" Z  @5 L* i+ m0 w8 q6 o; aThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 w. a9 R; a1 I) A: I0 W- p: \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 g5 [, C! {* p- i* BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. e& J8 w7 r. @You needn’t fear anything
: H0 K4 }2 w" \4 _% Q! U# FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 @+ [+ y! i1 y. s+ YI love you I love you with all my heart
! N$ d- F1 N/ A  k/ S6 y! M0 bNothing can compare to my love
3 f. W8 w+ a7 ~. pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. O" A1 e  j( _' \2 K( \) mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. B, G: ?" {, O* ?( dI want so much to see inside your heart
7 C: o4 z0 {- y3 {4 _  k' HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 L2 j7 P3 F4 N5 Y* k% |3 B) XI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- Y  G. T$ ?8 y9 [8 lWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' o! Z3 [: X3 T4 v  I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* M, b! t7 [3 P7 I9 F5 X& d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% \& ]- h% \1 P# j/ M4 m: o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 c0 w8 E9 ~+ ~( `, o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 q: L% E5 t6 y% w$ ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. i, i8 `0 W& Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. b$ k* F* d( @; G3 E3 t& Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. s3 ^" |: p: R0 i# ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, ]- b  ?2 N$ A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; x4 A- `) R7 ^! n0 j) O* s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; }9 T% ?5 [  T6 f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 \3 t9 N  ?( a: t$ p+ ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" m! C% m# \4 }7 k% f5 a3 Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ K0 T, g4 M( K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" R; W/ T" |; [! n5 K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: X! r( f+ Z9 C- S, x& F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 N: R% k7 d$ A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. G) Q# Q3 A/ h- J5 k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 v% w1 `; `7 D4 D' O( P* B9 ]+ T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 S' Z' [! M. p$ h8 q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; c  O5 s' z* M) M- @& ^3 A5 X" x; T<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 a7 T- n& T% B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 `8 z3 e/ \6 x0 y6 K, v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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7 E6 H' p+ f( N) ]' e7 x# D0 v  I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>