【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ c# w' ^0 D: ~* n: eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% v  }5 }6 W2 }$ S: I9 G8 [" @Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 @7 g* V4 H  dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! ]( d# i7 e& k+ c  ZWith the moon kissing it every night
2 w) u+ _( `% P* y" QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 @- z/ t$ Q# l) f! o+ wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  o6 `  E$ U, N% u/ Z4 F" |Every other word you utter is love
, R7 i4 H! K. x9 G8 wI really want to know just how much you love me
. f( O0 g% n/ W7 W$ E' g0 LI love you I love you with all my heart
  c, [9 U7 M' R$ e9 q$ X# qNothing can compare to my love
  T6 p) ]+ ]0 {/ X) K$ a9 A+ tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- s7 g0 Z! w" F$ A8 FI want so much to see inside your heart
/ ~% X# w8 d" M" D& }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" R4 R# |0 w& F" P5 T  UI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. G0 Z/ j- X6 ?With such a tongue as yours,
1 l- m5 r) d# W, a6 i& sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 |) a# u% |1 O/ e0 s  ^2 ?, gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ l7 e) r( x* |' v8 h' iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( `1 T5 Q$ P  T' k  o7 j1 J1 ^+ t8 E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 N7 l  ~. S% ?8 M* d$ b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( b+ p( j1 h$ n) W6 r8 [( B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ W/ s' N4 w* H" e1 \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! J" T6 g. X& x) h" x: \3 P8 r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ C7 X5 X' [0 S, f0 t* F; Z/ h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 I% l2 B1 Z# t8 ^) A3 S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( i; D6 N" |; r3 K, H7 V* i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" q  E: C, y, s" W; a: D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. T. j: @  z* K6 b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& H7 N/ N4 h& h4 B8 S3 w+ z  f$ \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  _$ X  ?- Q/ I; H! _+ p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: A9 f. z& l$ [3 r2 p$ Y. O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 x0 {+ M1 {9 `" Z! N# Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. n9 A: V- n& O0 O$ Y- {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; P' K' w' e1 G8 K7 j/ o  ^  b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, k$ K0 C3 t, q6 P4 a6 x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& c! k3 V% Y/ n. V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. ^( g. ^* o  Z4 \- V% I0 i. J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ E+ [/ z, D# C8 l6 T" Q; w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% s; Y& f5 d$ {7 s- ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 `' ^5 d! ?2 w# N5 r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 T% z6 }, Q8 U. Z9 Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( {/ e8 b) U) r- Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, j3 l# H# R, R5 k5 }我请你剖开它
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' K+ Q* |# h( F7 ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  S. m* B2 p$ {. e' A$ a2 O$ X% A" O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>