【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 y; R3 r+ U  p* J2 v6 b1 W" b歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: T& ]  ^* k3 i4 P  ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
: X# ~) r$ f$ u0 _5 Y. F$ G' z& XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ v+ s; {( u& y7 @, zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! \- i: |2 M( O+ G" X- j0 p0 wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ k2 G4 q+ H* ^, j' `+ ]& C; a; l0 kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 b4 L  p$ M8 t6 U) F1 x, m% {* bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" Z' W. I9 b, u. j1 ~! Q2 {) nEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; Y5 |# E* z6 @0 I. o2 A9 I; B; aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 Q4 d  N+ o: Q2 H% s4 II want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 F$ T/ ^# D5 e+ ]% G" {I regret not dying
+ c  s* x4 B1 n4 A* v0 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- T) c* s, s" @8 rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' S0 h9 Y1 R* U! r9 `3 `- D) F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 x& C) D" M- G9 n* Z( e4 Y8 ^- a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  f! W( {5 k- l" A1 D! {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( z* ]0 g/ P' h* u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 d' x& l2 f, [# \* Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" `1 E$ x& {& q$ p6 X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% p. t( |8 U, H% K; `, q3 _% z$ H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% A0 u/ d9 o0 ]* K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* {+ c' r: z' [% j* G  }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 b" \4 U4 {4 U: Y4 H+ G  z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 t% S% w! \9 f: H8 z# g7 q+ F) e<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# U0 R* [' [+ G6 E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- K4 p4 s3 i; Q& Q; M( [( K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, x& t+ d& e6 i! T) `5 w  L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' O! p4 k1 i' S  o1 y& g% |& z$ E0 d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, P  I' ^. {$ T* [% n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' w5 Y3 M6 Q" m1 A' {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' [- l7 q; O/ t, O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% e. A3 U8 |2 L5 `1 g' t9 k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 F5 B8 L7 o; a0 f3 M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* h) V2 |5 N# Q7 x% t& G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 c' F- i# M3 f" G0 I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; @1 \/ w+ @3 ^( G$ R0 E' _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 N+ x- J4 A- t0 d; F8 @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 }9 F& D0 P/ A6 g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>