【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 o* {/ a/ q9 X$ C/ nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 ?, l! P) j4 @$ f: TWith the moon kissing it every night
$ X2 e8 z3 B5 W, E0 v! hSeeing the sky content with its love
2 J# T& j9 P, Q4 D/ s% BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 u1 B" u; b" k; P, b& LYou needn’t fear anything
( W7 E5 Y. j% U4 WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( L' f' G+ R' g; a0 x0 EI love you I love you with all my heart
# [4 v1 u9 f4 ~6 }6 b7 ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: w- b8 [6 A9 P6 e. r0 B- PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) M+ `* [& H6 S4 m; `With such a tongue as yours,
: ]' t5 k( P$ {, `) Q; f$ \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) c5 n# k1 a7 U5 x: X( TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 d$ |3 d2 E# U, x/ B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! ^: j" |5 g# j- }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 Y- @! J! g! y/ E# R& E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 s. m7 N* O: g7 n3 z4 f6 x; I  H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- J2 B5 i1 |/ ]& V3 {/ R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ N5 v+ H, ]5 J9 v9 i, u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. B6 E/ U, i; \# C+ T8 |9 g! r9 D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 G1 G! a' X0 o( a! m& R* ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 K! F6 f- e& }$ u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 ]6 C% s5 _: y5 Y% J- v$ s& Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ [3 |- n* K9 _; x4 z3 j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! w8 o; N: \! N4 f$ y# m9 K& n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 \! u" P( @3 F; Z; g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 H, _8 d" X. q# K$ t3 g% g& R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. h4 ?5 O6 j5 X. r" l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 ]5 z9 D% _* P1 ]. t/ b. [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 x0 Q  R9 H7 [. Q/ u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  v7 i/ n: v! W1 ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ y5 ?6 F" }0 Y8 R0 c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: l% W: K# }1 D1 W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 v- C( L7 J+ q2 G$ \" P: ?; l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) B" M% D" _" Q( u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% H4 t- O0 n  C1 S' n, C( p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, j# J  O" \8 a; U* o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

( V6 E3 X; b, }+ l; |$ } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>