【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ u; C9 v7 O6 _6 HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 {2 X# G/ O6 O" B: y/ C" L! nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 H4 i, q. Q7 u  v9 v) T, P2 @, nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# ?+ k2 o* h% j; G8 |3 hWith the moon kissing it every night
9 `: v! q5 r+ g2 GSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: P) N" ~8 e( Y3 e2 f. D8 DYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. X$ m( {3 n7 c. W3 Y( s0 `I really want to know just how much you love me
1 \! t* O5 E( R& n. g' SI love you I love you with all my heart
% |0 q' V+ ^$ I. ~5 hNothing can compare to my love
9 m# e8 T6 C- _) A5 T* @9 m1 P) VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: g+ n5 |  E! z  O& B1 s5 r% V; |I want so much to see inside your heart
+ b$ f5 S+ ~) U/ Y; O2 ^$ T' g% K; CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  v; Q2 {$ A) C' O9 WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% \$ B  i" {9 V. g8 G9 o5 zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 Z4 R% C1 Q$ w0 G% HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. q' ^: E. n) y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- Y$ C' f2 [, h# R8 I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! j8 g; E- t& s6 M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( v4 A! @+ \( c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 }& F$ |) j# v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* p1 c  l( T+ |' ~# d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  G) s: M+ e6 T' @$ F8 @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( P' o, ^" W, V0 S! W6 Q3 ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: E( p9 |, t0 U( |( F1 z4 x' Z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 H( r  K* p4 X: N+ W% j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 G- G2 l% z. @5 C. [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 ^( s# `  n% o' X+ W# K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 i3 y/ }6 F& g5 X9 c8 d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 v: }3 l& `; d9 Z( ]" u# W, Q* d: B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: {6 X; e9 L3 E/ v; w* U) F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 {" ~- ?9 Q2 z2 \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 K3 X8 [% Q" X2 \+ w1 @. n2 C  x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ U2 j! @* b0 B& a& U6 N6 q+ y7 K% ^. |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 l+ `7 Z+ n! ]2 I& c5 Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 c. L9 A2 w. q# T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ B9 [! F* I$ g) k7 {& O" l" K8 o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  y7 y: n, E  N" i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! E% w! f7 q6 q. P0 i* N7 ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

: N) K' L) }% q" Y% M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& ^: S' p" C" {. k+ B9 U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>