【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 ^" m, N  I' F# KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' H, j5 v5 S# X0 Y3 [8 \0 iWith the moon kissing it every night
/ Q) o$ [5 `' c% M4 A3 ZSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 ?# L" m2 \" s9 s# G4 j9 m2 D8 f! lYou needn’t fear anything
0 I" D5 W! m5 \$ H5 sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  ]1 b/ e/ f6 ~# @+ I6 }- d3 A! T8 aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 R/ u1 @% A, h. @! ^- WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; t8 E$ x4 h! jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) l; A+ @# d/ ^) |7 W5 `I want so much to see inside your heart
! ^" n. P* s* t9 t- fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. Y$ I- u" i9 y9 m* y0 l1 tI regret not dying
1 j% k; M& `7 ~3 q$ }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 [: q3 ?% N9 U/ S9 Y- y* JWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' x  r) d% G( A7 d+ gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% V5 J' H4 O& V2 ~8 p& }0 \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 U9 y  z( ?9 x  }" v1 z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* E9 @# j8 y' I* y1 J7 E2 h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: ^: x: f9 j$ {; T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 o9 `% W: c+ K* w! h3 f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& D9 O6 @* T6 K, K5 m1 j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: L; Y, I7 K; v( b5 \& x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) A4 B- n" w' A! i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( {0 f: N  B& N8 }# `% y9 u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! u5 b6 A& Y, L# l" G4 S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, R+ C. k8 {; @: N9 @* `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! P; l' N. _7 Q  R9 @' }$ o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 q( g) [# }5 N8 p! |* L9 c0 o; y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# [) R, `& a& X( f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ b% p0 q7 t1 O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" n, V# a) x0 {& c3 U' @0 Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 j) ^; U$ `7 P0 d! A& P# B: w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# c4 z( O' U; e5 G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: [7 y7 n, W+ j; m8 ~9 P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 n1 Q) @" ^! g/ A. b5 C3 e$ E3 X+ K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: e/ S) W" P1 c: v, n& ^: x) |<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 B% ~! X/ g2 d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 w: T) a$ f( F. j5 U4 j! V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; H; g) i  p! ~8 h  }- q3 H9 F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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" ?. R8 q% U, U3 c$ a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; x2 z" S  B! S" e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>