【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 S* q$ H* V" I% |1 ~; K/ T歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 ?  b0 L6 t% Y2 r9 i- o1 `Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 x$ c: W1 K# y% e9 e9 `  KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 R: g! @: i8 B# R2 U2 ?( nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! r# j  f! }* o0 n8 pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 X/ \9 }+ E2 wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# w& y4 A: g0 V9 A  Y7 yYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ a) L* \% s8 MEvery other word you utter is love
* N2 P& i9 c5 Q" I9 X6 i* HI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& [& u5 [2 Y) h" m, @6 u$ ]- ?Nothing can compare to my love
  p, B1 u' C9 }& k, TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& T$ f' N8 o, L- _8 U8 oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 x, \; [6 A. X/ q' p  D% JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 x$ a( o1 U- s6 J/ _- t6 L* QI regret not dying
1 s( b! V- t- H; u$ Z5 m5 \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' t" s: p7 x6 o4 uWith such a tongue as yours,
0 o# b5 ^5 a% z- ?: Q9 P& I7 UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: {, p, H& M. b, b% vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 X) b# D& f* u$ Z1 @% kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ V4 @  K4 Y4 V2 g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ T! q/ D& o4 Z9 R  P5 p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ H" S8 h3 |( G2 ~" P) U( q. L4 s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 X  \- ]4 g8 @3 b- x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ W+ g4 V" q& W+ a# [. N* c1 R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 b2 s) q& l" ^8 j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 }8 R! X8 c. g) b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. l* b, G5 v8 D5 y( [* f$ w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  |; F2 `1 Z: i1 I/ E1 x& R/ t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! G+ C' c3 g' `0 K* e% A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 W& r1 C  Z$ u* V5 _- q. U# l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* m4 n% t/ K* J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* p% T: H& O0 Z0 p1 D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& f7 F% R) r' `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 _- D  }: ?7 k+ k  M% z. H/ g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 ]( E) A7 M! O, M/ ]7 E# Y- m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' f6 v9 C# c  f  K- G/ ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# X& K$ N  \+ W! d" W; [6 f; z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 t! f$ i& ~7 @, q( u6 C5 E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 ^+ [* W( x- x  d2 J2 q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 a7 h) o* H9 x& g+ |  r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- G5 k$ z+ E/ s$ ]5 Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 U% F& \* f. ?$ A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 N2 J4 o- ^! x+ j9 D# z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 D( m6 M3 S$ t! Q5 V0 X+ [. s" X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 p0 y$ R+ ?% E3 M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' X' B9 ^! o/ f& T( s. D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>