【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  I: u8 F9 }4 P* `* y/ U歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" D# Q  k& {- W& S# cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( V% n0 F3 v8 K! v4 g" I6 {$ J4 IWith the moon kissing it every night
3 L1 x0 g- J0 p1 \6 _! VSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 n% \1 ]' f5 J1 h" JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: q" o" k7 `( P+ l: ]/ c" o$ VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' V; X/ d/ o( w$ HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! |/ L1 C% H  BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) e/ B+ V7 O1 d+ ~6 kI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ ?' f4 `, f9 S, H' pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ c/ U# K/ m. g# LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 _! V+ p6 ~* H2 T7 e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 R" ?& T9 a- m* S; H! Z+ q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ n. g* D* G; c% J) k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 l5 G! F) j# a; B; u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 I! X. n! m  T7 Z; p1 E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 ]5 T5 F/ M* G$ |9 c) z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: m- m: e; z" G6 {. u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 |" k( D4 w$ }: o- G5 s& p2 D0 f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 \1 K# J" |$ W% n1 [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) S% ]. F5 k  e+ B( |2 @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& o  J! {. O- G; i8 X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ ^2 c% l  R! h9 |  [' T, j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) r. R# m7 W/ v, n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 e9 H9 Y% M! @8 `' C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ a4 C* @9 Q+ N, v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- c' L; ]9 k) Q5 B; r$ v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 d8 T$ U" n  s1 Q# S; Q! a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' Z6 f+ ?; _- x( D1 r: r7 x7 @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# c% ^+ }6 `7 t7 V9 P2 M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* Q1 O7 I- \- C. Z: f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- y! A! [( e' l6 U% m  C2 P* d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# R$ l- T' s- k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# z. K% A" l  f, [9 g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 L) P0 O. k" I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. V9 S+ ]( t( x) s- Z  o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ L* s, y; F" d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% M) `3 Y: K  V% T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 a. ^* ~+ T" P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

* A5 `% D$ L8 y# r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( t  K% T1 Q* ~7 u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>