【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# N, Z0 ~# ^: `2 d0 o! M5 i1 g歌词我附在后面。
" J" ~& R/ y% u' X: p. NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  ?2 M. g& I3 M8 kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ |4 I$ p& T5 J3 H3 J2 LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% i& Y6 S% c/ AThe sky is happy down to its soul
( c1 G. x, h; H( z- M" ~* U: \7 zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 w8 I6 ?2 h! b4 g! A, M' hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# w" l" P( n5 L: g+ ^You needn’t fear anything
- o, L3 V3 n" _; P% F3 cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- u3 j/ p: O3 c. X$ Q! u9 yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 r, v/ j; K( Q* ~9 o) k% S2 A0 q5 SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# C! g. `2 J" T- V; J, F! ?I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 }: Q! c0 `) `- aI regret not dying
. {  v8 i2 g: t( Q; vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: K; V/ B" D* Z, M7 nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ p- B( [4 `- G& O6 K$ Q) ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- x: Z5 B2 [( S8 G; b; p( O& A1 S) U+ J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 y+ G! D0 Z" ?' B( e- [& h3 P+ l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( \7 W$ v! [* P# I; I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 Q/ i" Q- [8 t6 J8 n) ?' S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 l1 {4 T4 J# h! d# v9 Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( f' c' e0 c) W) s# a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  h" m% f: v4 \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 [) q1 r$ x1 K; a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 J3 D) P& ]. a( T5 \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, F% m0 \& Q! [1 V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  {' v" P6 f+ R  v$ q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& R; Z- l5 ^3 _  Z" d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& D$ f6 W% a2 R0 b<P>你无需担心</P>
( E- p: v- a. S: P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( @* _( Q3 L' u% _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# J! X9 V1 v; s0 ?$ Q2 P' ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# ~! P; L& n; v6 m$ L. |2 o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 ?" k; H5 h( C7 z0 X3 v3 X) W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! K: [9 d6 G' d' u. i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 P9 M* C- W& W3 U% D2 o! O: q6 j5 K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% q1 W: ]$ W- L! V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% w$ e- M* t6 m& c$ s# |  @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, z6 q1 c# I  R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 H$ @) ^4 K' G" M5 m# c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 n2 h7 r3 f1 o" D  S5 @" C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 v5 S% n3 K0 r- v9 K<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ o3 X; t% [* I* D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! I3 E5 ^+ ]" s/ O/ M; F7 B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 Y8 z. P  Z) u! ?" e' D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# T# ]# I! r* P- K2 v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' y. C' I8 W7 t5 W/ u' Q. b<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ I  Q  k3 l6 I. i: z8 ], C9 z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 R" y2 q" [: Y9 ~& N3 g& p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

; R' Q& Q. g' b3 l8 O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>