【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ ~& F$ i9 L% S) t. T$ rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" w' d9 n- p8 x  {5 ^0 L* zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 x; G: [7 r6 r* A) H/ h( i9 YThe sky is happy down to its soul
: H  j3 d4 T8 L4 d* GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 Z# c( O0 q" UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  i3 R& e. T' N7 {  t$ TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! a) j) A. U# U% PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. N  L  F0 X- p0 ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) F- M' j, k7 n8 z- t) [4 SI want so much to see inside your heart
) N! H+ M. t' T4 C% {# P% RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* h* v4 U* r: C- ^1 A* O/ u, OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 K' A& ^4 w+ q- }6 b" n' ?I regret not dying
% O1 y: O8 g" ?+ eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( r4 P3 l  h& s2 dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 A" ]  I; ~' f- T0 C* F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' f& F: A1 p" d7 S. u* `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& O( r9 _7 q/ t* C3 _9 G* ^: Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) L- A$ y3 ?9 k  ^! R5 M6 V. x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! g0 F6 b7 b0 Z3 u7 e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. Q, h: z3 b/ p3 q( ~$ o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% C9 _9 c/ L6 q  Y9 S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 H) B4 Y+ I. u& l# `' ~" V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 U2 z6 |( q/ q) \+ F. K! L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' d" r# U8 Q' j9 {  D4 {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, l5 b& k+ J: U. T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 T( I$ E* ]7 t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  a0 I, K+ w  y1 \4 b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 n+ L% Q8 i4 M2 ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 w8 z% t3 @! r6 b3 q2 {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" j8 V+ K' h: W3 R; d8 o7 ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 B% q+ y. Y: R# F9 n( `* y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' v3 f. I& f& k' x# w<P>I regret not dying</P>
. U+ W4 ]" T4 P. r6 s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 C4 Y" O" Q/ u# h- N) ~- W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; a/ H7 o7 V3 P. |5 W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* C( z- u/ Q; g& l3 u: f( v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 \% h- o, q/ n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( H+ G9 [+ [& w4 ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

, Z2 ?( m1 F  f. u0 p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>