【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 I: a9 J% z( Z" f" _$ t0 Q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 Y  l2 b4 B1 P# o3 M! G9 S  m4 ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" `+ u3 O- T7 J. e! y  a: C* `3 c7 IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 O( h- C# n5 v) O' r4 p8 E! ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 ~' h9 ]7 Y+ Y5 b) r/ C! oI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 N6 w# u/ Q0 j/ C* V/ ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 ^- s# X& s0 o' m6 g6 OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ p( |1 I. `5 ~, m" rI want so much to see inside your heart
: R' X- c7 K, H# Y$ mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 C5 F8 c) \( B1 v' e+ |1 f  E& t$ VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& L" Y& V6 X; ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. r% E) f+ [( y$ ^  W; sWith such a tongue as yours,
5 |2 i" }- F+ F7 a) N2 Y: dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) S  j( H- n8 \% B/ mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& W7 e  Y( b2 D/ `5 W" q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& O4 Y8 K* g8 F" D+ l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. G7 z) p: R9 z+ H6 j, v, V% k' o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# B2 _' w3 e, t5 `8 [; o) j7 P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& L/ [: S4 Q  @3 F, P' {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- K0 S$ y" ~' m0 [: p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 f! {5 ?+ K6 N; K( v& z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) H1 K0 q) j. l% T1 K* h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# A1 e6 H+ y# U: e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  d" l' a" a1 r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% V$ d2 Y, S& u% b% k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 F" N" o0 s  [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. n2 j# [. ]2 J. Z" M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; f+ d  W/ z% O  K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( ~  b* J) o4 v; M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ O( G" c3 T) c2 C2 z$ }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! k' `2 k( z( M" g% |( E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 Z3 d: N9 p# M, C7 m5 L0 i' r5 i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* u! m! ~  O/ R# S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 h4 f5 p2 b( i; b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. g7 e$ U) {) v& b6 V7 ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! E- A- U8 w/ Z/ k+ L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ M! S7 g& H$ W- P, ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# V9 Z2 c/ V. S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- s; @9 n3 A/ {( n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% X9 d: r& u+ R9 k2 }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 R# q; k( i, E5 X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 J2 G4 K" q  T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" t  A. K+ z1 H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 n$ W3 y5 @5 k' ^0 O% M) ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) q6 E  C( a- [1 D3 H) c7 m7 V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>