【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 N1 N9 N, p! A+ [1 [. d歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 U$ `8 V* q" U) ?3 C& h1 X! _: F: KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) G: s. J* R! [+ q4 W% DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 E6 `3 O7 u  J9 p. z4 FThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ H! j* {2 L% @7 |! t4 z) G2 tWith the moon kissing it every night
+ l! W* p. C: C/ F8 @Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 E- V8 m. E0 PYou needn’t fear anything
1 L! }: [4 {( t- ]8 Q6 e) GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& ?* [# l. C8 o* b! K! PI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ `. C% Z- w$ c5 G( _6 lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# C  k, \2 g% ?' `3 j8 t: j, ~- bI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 y. d3 E! k4 b: g! e2 c9 aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! P, @# ], e# i4 f+ I! EWith such a tongue as yours,
0 _2 }; a& W7 Z. @+ cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, {! E9 a  c7 b, h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: H( w$ E: Z" ]! Y- Z- o$ Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' U: F1 s$ M2 h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- a/ B& _  p% s5 {  X, g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; b9 g. j- ^" U8 }  g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' x4 A( @; @# P7 q6 K/ V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* Z' d. Y! f  S6 P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 @3 V6 ?! M  |$ k# G$ _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 M# S- `) M4 h. @. N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 [! t5 y, t( e% O, c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' s7 F3 d( N* F4 D5 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& q) {/ s) D+ i! G+ V- L! d% P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) p/ r; i, D$ k0 y9 N' _6 A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ G( {$ g, p! [6 f1 L' J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# j) [) ?4 X0 v, i0 ]( u6 p( H+ N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( _+ N! c0 g9 I9 ?! d% u2 r- B5 r, K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ x$ k1 U% T6 m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* o: Q! J$ p# I$ ?9 \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 @3 f5 ]1 t' U7 f! Y1 u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 n+ m3 {# N4 d+ [! }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! g) O* Z  v2 G* T8 X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 c8 l1 w0 |4 j' j6 H/ F& g% P* d) c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 R& z# ^5 e" L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ \# p& M) c0 p# M* h  }4 G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" y. m6 y: ?3 q6 `  L/ l6 S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ `% V9 T+ k% S" l: f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 q! H- M% k2 L! C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; B1 v" H6 {7 K8 w: ?  B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: C, n2 H( j$ _& @- U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 H$ B3 a' I* W7 @2 i5 G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

' a! V; M/ O- S" n) {1 z( S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>