【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
" H% D  K- e4 e8 rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  {, H/ B7 _( K; MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& l6 i7 o* v' B0 W+ n; Q0 h9 U0 o9 aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, Y9 o5 }  _7 bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 E- C) @, z# i1 S; u: IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& y% t" Z: b6 J! z8 FEvery other word you utter is love
" z/ X" h6 Y* V0 V4 D2 cI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  {1 x+ s" [" \Nothing can compare to my love
2 z9 M- S  P0 e. M; Y' D5 q- Q' nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" b% x6 U- [$ g( l8 p5 OI want so much to see inside your heart
! J! f; u7 I% @) p0 hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) H4 f+ U8 g: S' X+ Y, kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 g9 b; m# a' {- v, f3 v: B& uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& G: y9 G6 ^5 `- o' Y* VWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ R# {/ w8 o, eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  d, D0 g9 {  t+ T$ Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' n, M# Z$ t! T" I9 j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" o& y" n; J% Z4 k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" P' e! n# _: N9 D/ k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& f* o9 }" t4 k2 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) }! y" p3 ^& h9 I! c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  n8 Y6 v2 z' H# Q- N5 j/ z' \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! ~- U! Z; |0 d# c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- P7 M; E4 |: t, {# d# C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 Y6 F+ }' G  I* F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: g4 I& m8 J8 S" q0 b$ t2 Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 Y6 c- V! w3 b4 E3 c( n1 M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: p' p, R7 T0 p' x# x3 u/ B6 ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, k% D  w2 k/ a1 g' k9 A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  z1 F& x5 a' Z1 s" b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* `1 u7 g( @0 L& I0 x" E; \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 @/ Z( W% z1 f3 {( l, ^) \& N* g2 Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 p5 I/ }- S2 K/ Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% Q+ V7 r4 W: ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 p" R8 q- A6 f, V( r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" L/ U' _8 Y  M: e$ i, m2 a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 I" m4 s9 r% ^4 j' l' U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# }9 K. }' u( z) v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! R. ]# b" }  G8 S1 H/ D& T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ C% B) A5 p# k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 H% ?1 E0 T. p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( @2 |) _0 {) J7 \% Z* T; B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ f, ^  x" {9 [- Q' C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) J) V+ [& E0 ]& X4 r  {  j! B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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