【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
9 v, A. {" f. wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 L/ n; ^# r( Q' \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( w9 K+ d, x' t" \! p/ ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" y( s! d, Y  G9 U/ M* b% zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 @# m' F' @; x0 {+ f6 lEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( p: Z$ x9 l: W# f% Y& [& R+ q) cI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 v* z# O0 R  |1 U" {' eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, I* s" D" u1 l) ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 i7 X) m" _. Y/ R' BI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 J' K# D3 n& \& o2 F$ K) z( }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 V* ?! N6 N  b$ F/ B+ O7 lI regret not dying
2 P" ?' v( X, fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" Z3 x7 q6 ]7 k( w- l- }0 [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' M4 t& y* |0 q* m6 P: [8 S9 CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% H7 N7 `% H4 U$ V  x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 t7 f$ e: `! w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# A# C# y4 q+ ]! f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 d5 V: c. r" @) c& {& l0 |" }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  M- r& M$ V' w- V: D$ r) H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" Y! m) h1 r8 S/ b0 P5 t. C; z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  s9 O( w8 w9 U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' N+ |# T- D$ E2 p6 p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# u! c& m" ^; \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ v5 A6 Z. X9 d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! b4 q+ `9 @9 z) r* D4 v4 S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ {) Z- s/ _0 i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# I, Z3 \; |; r8 {  a/ _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 d+ y+ d, D5 j* C/ D: o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ c- C- v4 g  m+ u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 J, J* L# v# G2 T: F& X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 {8 l+ I- ?; M2 r$ k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  {" Q- A( P$ \8 W1 I1 }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  Z* X! y: m2 w; R- n! Q- L3 s: i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ M: D, r) P8 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 x! _4 e* A6 q6 \3 l! k0 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% W1 a# c) x- s9 D9 M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, b0 [* D/ Z- |. X$ k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* ?$ v1 |7 v7 U! n' z1 C% u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" @# |  Q8 ?% X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 m0 m* o9 o+ Q' K$ B5 a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 B8 k$ q2 y8 e: O: O3 @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 I. M% J) X) F% R8 z2 p( w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: }' p& a% [+ N. w) w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- h* m" a' ~  E0 h* m9 L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, {( N6 Q- s% Y" L* [: n, Z7 G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- V0 Q) ^2 E# J" Z/ u' L* Z) x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 r! B) ^  {8 J- t3 V8 l0 K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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