【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! u7 s$ O- I8 `& t4 k4 ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 f( E9 @7 [6 e1 L5 w9 n  zWith the moon kissing it every night
% u7 A/ d9 X, {% `, _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 h( |3 ]" A8 }  v1 }Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" d) t+ b" G6 uI love you I love you with all my heart
) W  ^) a1 @9 I' C. jNothing can compare to my love
& i1 d& u6 f2 j0 ^) nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; m0 @( r/ h; \  p. c5 RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 I- C8 W  O/ I1 {I regret not dying
3 W0 Z# R) b6 `8 II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 o9 l7 {. ]0 a1 \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ O; _* {  L7 B" f2 nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  k7 G! @! O# b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 Q# C# g! j7 M8 `4 z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 Y3 m- c0 X9 T! W5 z% ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# u$ f$ J* x0 l6 L0 H/ P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 c2 m/ m  ~' ~0 g+ [( }+ j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% e- u7 T: Z! S& V; v) v5 t: w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 B6 I: L- V4 A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ Z; [- N8 }9 u6 y9 \3 D1 G4 F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" j) c+ r/ A2 c& e; W<P>你无需担心</P>
% l$ S+ }1 [- u: y& _7 Z% q! y3 Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 @  H0 z8 @' V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; _3 w0 Z$ Y3 `+ Q! O# E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' j9 a/ F& k8 n3 G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ \: w0 z( U. B" M7 t: \* g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) e0 c% s# [6 b, H8 v; R7 }8 p8 j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: n+ z5 l3 s2 p. i& m( h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 r; Y. w7 D  U( V: s$ n3 m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 ~3 E1 o9 v( p4 C1 |) L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 Z* f* _( @5 u9 u2 F5 Y4 {  U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: w0 `) a5 ^2 V, a  m<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 Y) V% h$ o% O+ }* n1 ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 K2 B0 _6 B( p" w- t3 R; c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& n+ v$ [" j2 Q6 K9 H3 C; m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 Q: i9 A" Y8 u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' v3 H2 C' d, I. `2 X. T) i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. {% ^8 L: K$ W$ w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( R( H- F% C1 _: n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: d1 O( Y& r3 l+ B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" J( L) P, }* X6 F, [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  ]: ]  c: m! P2 m0 L9 s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" @1 Q) P5 f- H9 R  g1 R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>