【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( }+ E# Y9 T/ d# A5 @1 V9 \, nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" t2 a7 K7 x- _& RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 T7 w) r- _+ y9 c3 e, ]6 |8 M/ ]You needn’t fear anything
/ Q5 N1 `. j  T: q: v8 [- Z/ P+ pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 }3 |$ [8 u" O" ?Every other word you utter is love
; A/ w9 n" i1 Y  I5 nI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" b2 b1 W1 u3 _% P* H; _9 yI want so much to see inside your heart
$ _6 T' P/ o4 {* h+ I& `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' w' c$ s/ {% _' G! l1 ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 V. X- o5 M! Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" p5 H; E6 J! }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* d8 p3 k8 F; r" z. `. h' G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 A, X. p% g' r2 y. ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% x. A$ a+ k1 T, n$ m. `+ n6 p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& L8 s" R5 M7 n, N; V& J( _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. c7 t3 |. p5 K0 D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- J7 N8 D9 a$ i0 g* q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- g7 V+ b: q6 o# w; C0 ?<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! n1 B" M) L8 t& a% u# H; l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' L# r6 q+ r2 |9 o$ d5 H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 z* J  J* d) z: O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! G5 M+ t4 x$ P1 p- p) D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* |3 q. J- [  j' T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 M0 B* D# J$ W# M& H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 w  N2 f0 m5 U- v. C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: \. I0 h4 M! R+ z  t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 R9 Y  {) W5 Q9 L, u# e$ R* V7 V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- }% p% @3 o8 a7 A# Q/ f9 e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: U/ @4 }; Y" {; `; I( r: R9 P  u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; g4 l4 W' i: C. L( t% U4 }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% M1 `' t9 Z4 J2 _- G# z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 C8 }. V7 G7 E- Q, z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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, E6 y9 ?9 T: z* W' v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>