【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 t5 J. M6 }# P7 C( G+ k$ G* iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 R. I$ b; p# |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 P: c/ u! j* q5 }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' S3 a& {& T) a- PWith the moon kissing it every night
2 _5 T9 D6 q3 T4 e! wSeeing the sky content with its love
* [. I& D' Q- _  A% a9 H( _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' Y7 h5 a% z* T5 p) WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 u6 v! k( U- h/ n: fEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 X+ C- ?3 |# E$ f' LNothing can compare to my love
) A0 \! h1 i: R* N  I5 u0 ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  B* L( h5 ]! g- a, U% H7 ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% C  R  r% G/ w  x! M8 }+ ?1 bI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 b: E' _& D: \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( ]" K4 A  M% Y( o5 ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' L9 r# \1 c  M2 N& v8 c# t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% s, r0 ]+ B7 a2 G6 @, i! J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; _6 f+ Y( M" m8 P; `# i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ v9 ~- Y2 ?# s4 B7 M! T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: u! [9 b" ^5 Y6 T% o) \4 p; X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 `  T1 c+ C7 u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& b4 D! {+ S# t0 C, E) c; Q! g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 k) I* T6 n# Q' D3 L# g2 i: D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# q  Z1 p/ Y+ Q, m* m  c8 P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 n- Y3 d$ a$ J& C<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 k! Z3 `1 F9 y/ b5 I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' b2 W( _( g8 d% v# \9 J. X+ j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- K0 P+ Y( P, P) E+ f- W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ B+ r; G0 @. W' e9 E% Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. I5 P# g7 K" j0 \  w+ _) D( ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ C9 C9 k. y# t5 P/ V& y) [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ m# Y% s$ m8 [2 Q! K1 _) _5 k3 Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- K; X# v, L: `( J, }- V2 d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  K& |3 M8 j. ~  {<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 R* u' b. M1 e: G+ E$ v* r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. }" O* s( x* Q( ~( M5 K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ s# a' C9 M7 y9 L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. \5 d1 P% T2 R1 O# f% }1 L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 b& M0 E* i. T5 }7 Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 q  Q$ ^; L1 t: r5 {! f* k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  d! y9 U2 a/ Z3 a/ C/ F+ {1 `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* ]" U6 l; e% `1 |$ ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 e3 m/ }* }" j$ j8 s8 J6 y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 O# p- ?" a% y' V/ i/ N4 ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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$ o7 t) F+ t6 {- Q4 p+ j+ _, y6 Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>