【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 W4 s0 {0 s, w7 FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ L; z% l; T2 J7 X$ U, S, PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; j) j0 \# c, Q8 y6 }! }The sky is happy down to its soul
5 ~  k! C  {) c. l4 BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! F4 J2 z" v1 L, I( rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, H* Q+ u, G, Q' U1 SEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 ~2 L7 n; c, ]4 w( I, PI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 R, H: n9 V! g' D$ }* b. k' _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& O. V# i4 V3 a2 j9 cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ P* M& q7 \$ A* S) a- wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% v7 ]- `: b$ J1 u+ o0 S6 T$ r; eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) m: |. `2 l: G' Y2 Y6 ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 a  k2 \$ T% N* k. G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  k1 [* {) T! |5 J1 p! t' C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! ^2 e" H3 \* @+ E/ u$ S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 `! \4 m. X$ {$ x+ R- w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ n" @' P) ?  c+ ]3 I! v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 w; n3 ^; T( n$ }+ J# H; ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 x2 u6 H$ L& n2 n: |' J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& f/ q& b! _9 N( H7 b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ x. g" U9 F0 Q: u* q6 d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; r! E! c: [) l+ L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& g% [% ~! V, W0 D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 v% a7 g2 i8 u. N, ?, _/ \<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. t1 J# R+ e& s+ Z- Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 \4 Q% Y% ?" w# p9 }. k, {& d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% s( {4 M1 Z, f2 y" j9 N' U4 H* c* J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- Q6 ~; V3 n: p5 ], p' S- i* u8 |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! j3 B( @8 z, g; B% }" K1 l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' q! G0 u& S8 U+ [4 ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 A) I# |. Q. K0 H1 O5 c) T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ t9 J1 |# X, n" [+ P& [# z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ S  t0 K! O7 G5 [. \1 a0 R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' A5 ]! k" f% M# M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 ]2 m, n4 z* I4 ^' V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; A! `  n' |, k<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 g+ h3 k+ i0 u! |/ f% p3 N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 t( F, m' G0 V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ w* `- l3 X9 E2 J5 Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ U# D1 \$ o- ]2 u6 T9 b/ @% H1 p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* l% z& M3 }. B3 J' f* C# ~$ O<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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