【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 X" u6 q# v' {歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 \, H3 E; i0 d) Y2 Q! NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ O( C. N: A% |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ [3 P4 F: H6 ^+ P6 ~Seeing the sky content with its love
! [0 W, n# n$ h4 _5 BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 [+ x, I6 f4 F0 Y7 k1 r: z2 pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" e8 Z) \+ ~" `, zI want so much to see inside your heart
" Z' p! d! a. ~& f$ q* G1 aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ M' F+ I/ M1 v5 q& r2 BI’m still filled with fear
  ]# I& s- f- {% [# s7 j( V- LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 D1 |: T) u) ?0 [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' f' b3 T8 F# yWith such a tongue as yours,
  M5 t$ d, K. FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ _; n7 ~+ w' ^/ K2 i+ hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# @# ?- _+ B7 b1 ~) H4 ~) |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! P: H4 b7 p% ~& }* R9 g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( C" f  c0 ~1 q  x9 k1 A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ R3 M3 Z3 _1 i( C. _- D2 [5 {& j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 U' r) s$ B6 e3 v& o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* L2 I; }0 {% {* O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 x' Y; t) i; d' O$ V$ a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ d& n, z2 K" N/ C1 ?7 m, M# j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 A2 O  L- }3 c, S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 T4 {2 s" V7 w! X" m4 B3 g+ w! O$ O& d. l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& Z! \" M: _. ]8 t- p0 G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 z8 A! _2 ^9 M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 I  v  c4 j; B) z2 \7 ^$ N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 i3 S$ w  e- [- C4 M4 n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, q7 W% y- W9 o) u( j( X4 ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 U- {: @9 ?/ y; ]: l& i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. y: U, O9 D* i' l5 @; U) e8 B! `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& {' \; v6 Z  C+ \* c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. V3 y% M# p# F6 G; t: J8 G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 R1 P5 v6 K* j2 Z3 l7 A& h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( a' W$ P* a$ b$ f% T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 G: T+ D/ _' \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' ^. E# w. _5 P6 e4 `5 C' z3 f! m! L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 B3 f( J6 y0 P* j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. ^. B; _2 |) L6 i0 v9 V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! u+ r# A# f8 h2 {2 i3 C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  e! Y4 y: K* L' R# c; b0 G3 z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, E' D# D7 L, ]1 f  W0 h+ q/ r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 e! \1 B8 X% G4 M8 j! P' I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 K2 ^  ~; q" ]8 \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

0 d+ z2 j8 o& V/ z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. m. ~. E. d, R7 s( b) j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>