【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* A( ^, I, U  m# @7 s7 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ p: `. k# O' B5 K) B/ WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) w/ O" B/ A' Z1 R7 M3 l. gWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 D+ @5 n* p6 B! [! q. ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  E, ~; F/ K! V$ I4 o. w% _8 a: vYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ G9 y  U5 s4 O+ @! xNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% Y0 F3 y% [7 U  j, H/ C- U1 hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 Q. S9 P0 j6 q  fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 F+ _* F+ w2 b, q5 eI regret not dying
; g3 n3 {" W( GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 G# o  x' b4 h" x& Z' k! F% J, LWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 X. L. J8 z- L4 _" sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" ~# `8 O, m  A, p9 p7 k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 P% {, d( ]1 r$ l7 o  v& G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: c$ a8 m: m3 Z% ?: r% s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& p. p; ~7 W( C% X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 b4 p) v- Q  v9 A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* B  l, B8 n2 L% O- M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 m: S4 l) m( |" X) V; @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 `' c$ M5 G0 Y; f  V* i: w& e2 F  p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ q# s: ~7 o1 T1 ~- |3 I- o) Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ J* {' Y# I  v% R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: N" E" i2 h5 O4 w) _" y# t! l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 w: K( Y: q' \# N5 Q0 B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" K+ l/ ^" v1 o  s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ B1 a% c+ \! c<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 j0 o0 Y) ^% r% e! }. t$ P! ^" N6 b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ X+ w& C3 }2 ~" w' m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" w1 S2 a, @, y: i$ E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% J: ]# O4 E0 Y; `" F1 ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& ]) O0 D1 W" B) V" s5 E0 g4 |, Y6 N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; Q$ K" h0 j1 G1 {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; l+ \' _1 G* ?! R* }* l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' J$ I7 U. ~+ `2 r3 D1 u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ x  e3 o! {$ Z* }- Z" O! W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: ]2 x8 M1 o2 [( V1 m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 e- v; b  G5 u5 R8 ]8 W: f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 N; k4 v, H1 n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" J/ C; q* x  \- @& _- a! y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( g+ W+ O3 U% P* g# k<P>I regret not dying</P>
- o  n5 a. T( P( m3 _; Y0 {: U, u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 d, }0 M2 v6 Z! ^/ f- o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 a: o: ^( \' S% e7 {& c* A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' \/ r: M! Q* x- k1 J+ p4 O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 Q) M) E. ~' Y+ E7 @. B$ C5 o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# ^3 r; X) W2 }0 D' ~" p3 j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 `' @& c: g4 k5 R! I& w, f$ k5 c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( B1 n$ m6 Y3 A/ L我请你剖开它
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2 m( k- g- f: _. q8 Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>