【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& m# W. R2 I* O1 p6 {6 eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 p0 n6 r! \( o2 i5 v* nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. T- t. s, d6 O; i, nThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 I5 L( T2 u+ N9 y5 p) bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 c$ g! D' V" O/ xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! V( o! @# J8 b  C& XYou needn’t fear anything
; J& P% Y9 |( v+ A+ P- _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 D7 ~9 f2 Q2 V$ h$ `I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( x$ G' N+ N+ G9 Y. i! fNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 x( Z; B; N/ ^* \* ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 |0 T5 c9 F; CI’m still filled with fear
: K$ ^) n  F7 c( u6 k. JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- W) C) K4 K7 e" N$ {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 D1 h# r( o6 [! v4 w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* s% d7 c( i: y2 Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! |1 i4 K) a& `* m* i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' E- T  r' L* N6 S  P6 L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 |$ Q& i; a6 ?% P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 ?/ X! C4 u: K) Z& I& s- l6 [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) ^7 I/ h+ \1 B% ]) q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, f; K- s; l) j<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# y" D9 ]9 L% r& D; p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 ^# h; Z" w0 L' U' n8 Q0 p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; \9 J$ a; ^7 x0 ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 w6 \  Y' V9 @# k3 b' k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% F# y0 `8 Y8 V- O% B! l) x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 `& k8 q9 L% A3 \% G2 ^, m* Y- T2 G- G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, v& P$ d' e3 ?) V1 W' O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# y$ g+ j# g  h* q" ~/ I& m: p4 S! |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" N8 Z+ R& P$ q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) H/ U& m1 W3 c( C9 l3 H9 t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 w$ U. j; y  k( }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! [0 U6 ^( ^2 d) X1 A% t  b! z9 B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' W: F8 K2 P$ u9 e# k* ^( H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ m9 Y) K' D" \, U' H( Y- N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; P& h5 K  k% `7 ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 f5 k5 U% g5 j3 u1 g2 M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' d! t' J' b# U, w9 ]; e# u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 N. L$ Z$ |! M1 P5 |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; k* b' a* \. X3 V/ y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 Z8 {3 b8 p7 h我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>