【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: j& M! K8 J4 z$ X- |9 aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. s2 Q# t" n1 o/ B  P2 J6 [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 X# ^! b& i8 h7 A* y  e- Q* |With the moon kissing it every night
+ ]. H/ E0 `; [; D7 \1 k$ tSeeing the sky content with its love
( P" B+ b2 W5 I0 @8 _. ]+ @0 ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ }5 h0 {# R! v" n' w# K4 {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; h3 D0 a" d* Z) UI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ H# v: A# O$ O4 _7 CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; H3 Z2 a3 x% K" A3 D1 N4 AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* _+ h) }6 X% F4 Z, v  V: v2 w  }0 j1 ]6 xI want so much to see inside your heart
' N* h# r- f4 g3 |4 ~, JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& C( m. n1 A/ F8 H+ A6 @/ z. zWith such a tongue as yours,
$ E1 @- s* H, n- g& G+ \! A1 r+ NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 p. N: f' G) g# B0 uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% k  |5 I  s, n) rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 L# f& F/ ~0 S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. z+ F1 i! i" Z- O4 l- `0 B4 G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% e0 L; Z0 b" o. n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 |, q$ g$ K; U/ [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, E. f7 U, `+ [8 i! V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, v. D) B% `- j( u3 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 D7 q4 i0 \5 K3 \; D& ?2 {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 A% G  J2 }8 s8 Z4 R$ a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* ]! B+ ?# m* F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. g& r2 p& w1 K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- n8 i5 r" I5 Y4 U0 T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) c( H) [7 Y4 f0 \( Q/ a' T% Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& h# Z1 t2 Z7 Y. _0 y2 P9 k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ Q! X: J5 e2 d4 ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* j' ]* p, S$ c' p* L/ ^# w8 Y$ J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 a9 z: e; \& R5 t" J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; |- v+ `+ M5 E7 t, t+ G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 n8 E: b! W1 @  a/ u+ C/ S" \" o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' d* z7 t% H/ z$ O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* |( k. t6 H/ I  P" E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: l$ R/ Z! e; l- ~1 j5 Y; Y  {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ C2 W6 e- q4 w2 [" }3 b  T, W# V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 a5 |  ^! ^" @6 F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) j% k! |3 @4 h: _) Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 B- h4 k% m/ M: j0 ]9 h/ X, t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- I) W! @+ N, y1 D) X. g& K# ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. V# U" c. e, M7 q1 }, X8 _* L% M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ }4 f1 Q! _8 R<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) {* t% m! D) n' U* O! f1 j, E! K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* {8 p7 s# B- ?* d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>