【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ h) ]# V. O8 E; _, [Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 L2 [6 r6 ]0 z- a/ C3 z% hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ U8 m" d7 V  G: m) DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 ]7 T4 {, [* iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( r' B* L0 E1 f& u/ AI really want to know just how much you love me
; v( ^2 m$ l  y0 ~' e' T! RI love you I love you with all my heart
$ C# n6 X2 |8 B6 u0 B! Z  ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 c$ K" D1 q1 d- X! H9 sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 O( \) L3 R" R% o& J% g0 {I’m still filled with fear
" U& w7 ?. _4 @0 N6 C% CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' M5 T+ T% {* ]# i6 KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ A5 [1 E2 p2 K* kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# m" R/ `0 Y/ C8 f' j7 `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 a. g# K3 x+ G" p' [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 w. J4 L. B# T! L& W5 q4 W: F. j# T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ `% k" B; h. @# o2 j1 }  b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' C! V6 d3 [3 m7 F2 [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. e- E! ]- r8 {3 i7 l; a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 U* K* W: U8 Q0 D3 L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 z. i6 t& v( P' z( o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" \( Q* p/ I8 ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% e3 y. k3 k8 s" |( ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- r4 S$ m/ F7 a0 u# Z4 h( ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ p, m( E& S7 U$ k0 w/ `. B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 j; K( W+ R5 C( R) ~! L6 |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" G! w4 c$ }% U* v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' R; B, V; G# S2 K+ k  q& U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ ~  w; e) X( B" k, t4 N; X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ @. w) O4 v9 \+ q0 I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: E) J0 r% N; ^1 B" V  a% `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, i. D3 U' O  E3 Z! t( d* d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 n1 R8 F( e/ b/ T  {) f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% {1 G( f: ^* Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) W, n" Y9 I5 w8 n/ W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
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<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 q, q6 h: K' m" D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# c; u' ]# z- T) V0 @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& X% _5 O  w0 V2 a1 [& D( F% i- p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>