【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) _' C; f2 i' x' ]  HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 Q4 r8 m$ }9 EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  ]* j% Q1 V' s/ ^3 G$ g% q( ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 x& W& R" o- S0 ?2 o8 Z& S' m& Z! oEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# A) P$ f4 J1 u" n1 D. BI love you I love you with all my heart
( X& T0 A  a- Z/ `! T3 m- ], m# ONothing can compare to my love
: j- [1 R) w# ~/ ?5 Z, ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ v* j0 J; w2 _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" X" M5 Q9 d, [$ s" K9 }% dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# s  O1 I8 R4 m2 L* `. M5 \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: e: R% K* [# _) F2 l% f/ EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- V: k0 Y0 L/ e# FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; ~5 h8 j. N/ E  S1 e' E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! p9 J; N! C6 N, |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 ]3 a/ i' c+ C& v) L; L! p0 T7 q4 F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! a0 M: i) O9 p  y0 p4 P4 ?' n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 `# u$ M. c; Q9 O5 E1 C5 t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# A5 E; d. e6 |" ?4 s0 r- h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 x. h! l' g' z; {3 P# v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 k# V0 I9 v4 V6 `2 x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 t+ X* Q/ S3 e" O- F<P>你无需担心</P>
5 S5 K# c  D- E2 T0 m+ w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) s  a: c/ p4 {/ T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 Q* N: d( g  f) J5 o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* S/ N& i- Z/ n0 T: E: m8 Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 \' ~2 I; Q/ P9 E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( O9 ~5 A' T  C# n9 i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& B" Z( ?. P& s' z) g5 e/ U& i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) g/ O- W+ m1 e: q* e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  K/ [+ D: i, U, X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. t4 U3 F& y1 A2 i2 ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 n) f* C. B5 Z' A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 A# n0 R+ Q* X8 L  r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  k; e. E+ S/ B  b8 W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ a6 M7 ^( K; J7 k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; a( O: i4 o, R- y) r9 n2 N, Q1 P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* }' B. b8 A7 I8 D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: G* O9 D1 i1 e4 Q1 Z我请你剖开它
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6 Z0 y4 k+ K" P- M; ]3 e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& o& H# d" D2 Y( n0 v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>