【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: }2 {" z7 w: V& r( M# V歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" r: w6 c+ L2 y- I& tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 x. p* g9 \. y3 h3 W2 IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- e7 U" O$ g! Y+ aEvery other word you utter is love
0 T' k( R& @+ FI really want to know just how much you love me
* x$ x- [, W# i3 C  M9 \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: e3 v! D2 p. |- o4 W  W# r9 KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 {( L! ?4 m% Y. m. @6 B8 bI want so much to see inside your heart
; ?' o, H0 H! d! BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) T: h& M/ S7 U, t& ?I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 U, r5 r/ O# V4 _$ C4 Z  }. SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ C& a8 o3 |5 ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 a9 r6 J2 }) Y+ i3 e3 z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 m1 I5 B3 P6 e; Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% {' ^$ P1 Q/ M+ m9 b8 q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ `. p" Y) G+ m, g) J) C$ T% g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 m& k" R" i, u. _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; y/ i( m7 _/ ?# L# @0 x- ^' |  k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# ]/ ~" I: J: ?: K* m: m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" s. A1 \7 @& ^0 i1 m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ p/ Y) B/ u. J4 C  s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' U" R/ \& ?5 h8 z; I# K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 N$ L3 C  A9 h3 s' J" a  V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* a5 a7 `  _6 o) Y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, h# ^, V: }; n6 }, x8 Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: f7 I6 a4 f; o! D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- K  Q- A5 a8 J6 B9 i# s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( W: J5 Z! r. e2 k- X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! H- N6 t' D( G8 M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% `, L7 _; g5 `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, @' S9 M7 z! t1 j0 s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" f% E5 E: v  _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ i" `; m" s* Q: C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 t9 Q# `% f) ~! ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; q' {( ~8 G' \* S<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) L. W* E: Q; ]8 i0 E$ }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  w% l4 A2 S4 s# k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* y3 t2 f6 ]( `0 [& i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 q% J% B6 Q+ H" Z+ a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' o6 _, t" `, ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# ^" }  c1 n/ D. t; I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ T; G+ J9 _1 H) ?' m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>