【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; ~7 r* p9 E  N3 v! KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ K# ?0 V4 b$ C. BThe sky is happy down to its soul
! W8 U5 H. E0 Y3 P4 e+ W- }; X0 h0 iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 f" X5 l2 K# A! p& e7 q  JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ ]! r% R' R) Q) v: v, bEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* w. D# G; V& s- z( t( |9 T. j2 PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  g# b# q! D, x! }7 M3 p; _3 MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; `8 E% ]3 W! O8 r# m1 xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 |  L' ^* s, N7 M7 y2 @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 s3 q% y/ t2 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  |: s# R% z( A2 x) P1 V, y& aWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* _' ?4 }) d; n+ qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ j3 z3 Y0 U8 d6 N+ \$ z. C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( ?, N. r5 k" p6 g; B- Z0 t9 b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' i* l3 f' |5 Q& p( P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 \# F1 v. J3 T) E* y) X$ k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 _6 l6 g6 _) b1 j" u8 N# |" D2 R5 z" K, S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 D8 r/ Q5 ~0 ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 G' U7 c: e* o5 d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  S; W, h3 Z$ I& a( u# E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 K7 V, m( R& z1 O" m5 K( C0 s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& j) C9 Z- U5 u; h; |4 J2 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 Z6 _* [2 ~' E- Y8 I2 f- T: R- w5 }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 C+ f4 Y' U; D9 n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ L. X) h/ S' P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" _! [5 G' p/ Y. Q, C: b+ H; O+ V5 m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) d4 i  C& W  @7 f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 ~, o8 {  n$ G. O: X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 P4 S+ U7 K* a7 O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 F  g9 R( N: A& X' j6 j7 J8 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" y7 `% k5 g) l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; T6 T4 \. E3 {6 p. \* H9 A5 c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 y) o1 s& m7 n" Y2 Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% U; \% B6 j* A  h; l9 g+ g2 @<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 {* L" C, L* n+ a+ f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. F2 S: G. \! D' ]4 _- f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 r0 a$ a! |1 k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 O' t9 c8 \2 I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! V+ y! }6 K( \9 f) b" V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# S, @9 ?+ Q- S. ^! T# d. i, m& S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 U* m# v+ B8 V* u! ^5 Y' R8 k9 {) X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

% F: X8 z/ P! h3 z) c1 ^4 H/ s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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