【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( M, [% T0 _# d; \. R- ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 Y" S9 E! _1 g. F, [% S4 s6 oWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 j, Y; N8 z& |# j; u; VYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ P  X; e& k0 |* K- y; DNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. L+ k" Z  J: k% E6 l! NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* B9 v# l% a; D! Z, z5 H5 GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, V) x8 W6 x. {6 {6 \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 T9 s1 x* G/ U3 K5 n  B2 t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 r3 e- h, w. E' G8 D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; P# h" K! T5 \6 E' Q2 s6 ~; J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* U' C+ l3 V* b/ D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! M( P" u# s/ x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. L; E* J0 e, w. W) j<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* q  ]5 a+ I( g/ D/ _' I  a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 G0 {% x  i6 ?9 p3 |5 N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 {1 i) T9 P5 z# \4 o1 P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, F; ^# W; H9 F/ ~3 C' c6 q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- A! Z! j/ g3 X: S, q2 K( Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! C  U7 B# n, k  B6 X3 B$ g' k  W! v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 G# n+ i0 E4 W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: |$ R* k) }% I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% r+ M; G5 Q( l5 c" t0 I. A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- r1 M0 A0 X$ U$ l. b6 f# v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& `8 y$ V& c6 |6 ?# T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- S$ s0 x/ C& n) f- X2 g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 H" w, y& ^6 c# i1 J3 p) ]7 f: u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# F- r( F0 I5 @* E6 O& ?; Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 H" g- C  T& R$ X. `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& A1 T- X7 R! L! _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 J  g- m; J: h% N  g; o5 w, C+ S9 C<P>I regret not dying</P>
. B& W$ k. b8 Z0 X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
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<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
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. I. z* o% ]( f2 ^/ [6 K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; z" J' z: M" h" R5 A/ k2 g. B; J1 {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# n1 H( w$ j# y  ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 E+ q$ Z4 F5 X! O: Y# r% p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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# z0 D8 W( D( ~5 v% a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>