【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
* E8 L5 ]+ [$ g7 i3 N3 |8 kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 {; q$ `( b. L8 x5 LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 t. U9 Z0 w+ s* lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; s; {+ @* P& A* X( bEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 W: l4 K! o& A, E' d7 Z4 iI love you I love you with all my heart
9 ]  f3 U1 I3 c! r0 V2 T% kNothing can compare to my love
% Y4 Y% V! i' \" \  w4 bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, b0 b6 P1 J6 X) K$ r* cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. y$ `5 Y' I2 S+ QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& K; d5 D2 ]/ g% J" d& s4 t8 AWith such a tongue as yours,
8 Q/ r& A9 l1 e* ?; ?1 c6 ~% sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* b5 R0 S# E: N1 ?/ I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. E5 H. ]# e" H5 ~7 q$ Y4 K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' L1 l+ \3 E8 a  ?7 d( `3 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 W8 i2 T; u9 v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 K' z9 p/ K& E- ^4 D6 T9 W) y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) x0 M1 h; x, Z' r+ W( y2 m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 y' f4 T! d$ s/ e$ P3 i. Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. b3 x. S0 e  N" O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* R( P' Q( s* M$ k5 Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ o- j% M; s0 R% ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ ~. w6 ]3 g# K5 Y& k, W- \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ g' ^3 |  s8 `: S3 t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, `+ o9 U) |; \; t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( d7 p5 J5 h: J; H' n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 A5 o0 Q8 @) g+ a" Z3 {1 P% q: R3 U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: H; ?! g+ B0 v# u  I( G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ r2 o8 k  h2 C! o1 ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: S. d8 e2 I2 _! F8 P) H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) V" Q& _- k  v* q" b1 z' B3 _% d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* x; z4 u# T+ R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 Z0 _1 t+ N+ ]" ~3 [: a& Y6 ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 _. t4 N8 A1 k6 Y( ?1 E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 i4 K/ A% b  l/ S: n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 ?% T7 q0 G% h' s! w# z1 o' g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 V' v* {' i* Q. A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 m/ S5 e- K$ f8 j! a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 D! W; x+ r1 G/ I; C$ x8 x1 N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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! e  ^- u# q, k& f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>