【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 n, H' X; d, x; O# a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ J0 b- f+ X& N; G2 u. rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- W/ C  S+ @% UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- J, t! L; n1 Z5 }. s6 R% KThe sky is happy down to its soul
) `' H4 A' O0 G7 qWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; Z* a, t( l8 _7 r7 CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. s& c  W# C5 c( w# J: SEvery other word you utter is love
( h, ^7 f6 I) b( }1 q9 iI really want to know just how much you love me
# e2 H& ~6 p) |% k3 n1 HI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  w' z3 F2 m* O! t+ C) Z$ xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 l" y5 W" B9 K% M; ?! AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& {& C; _) ^3 a; E1 i9 v  {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: Q' O. \7 l: k" H% Z% h8 LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: ~  G& v4 c8 c/ H# c6 Y  zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, W0 H- L9 T. ?! q5 k" t& E, fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# B* _9 ?3 g5 c- B' z2 |5 ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( O4 L! j  ^" R4 ^5 C+ F. g5 ?1 U! j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ R8 I* U$ n5 t2 }$ n2 ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& J+ [) }1 O- k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 _: z8 H' x5 `( R2 E; L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! \9 [& g; S. r* ^, C4 I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 q: {2 \1 k( n  d0 t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, s8 z/ |3 J  t0 j7 n' c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 a  K* Y) q& {9 M" t' ^: i8 {4 x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  d) Z) W/ j) S4 q, v- z- H6 @8 ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 X% R4 ^: z4 c  Q) S4 f; S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 C7 P4 N! n: i" h& G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ z0 [$ S# ^+ S  y( R) {( K<P>你无需担心</P>
5 H; u& G  `0 b2 R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" x9 _+ F, @2 t: f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* t8 Y- ?4 m. i+ T+ v; M6 e2 n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 ~9 l& n7 T# b) _2 i: S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. W2 U  O4 @! B) c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  o5 C. y, w: p: A<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- T5 E: R5 K7 |- }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- Z5 w0 D# ]8 s/ P3 J, }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 y6 l# v2 |* F5 [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 k9 V; {# e. S0 y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 p5 |. s( x0 y/ c7 ~9 j) l, p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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0 V5 K( A! l0 d8 |# n3 Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 S/ S6 Z6 \2 M9 H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 W5 v9 @1 j8 A4 a) p7 n! m1 x  `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 M& |! L- T' r! b2 {) Q; R3 `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" Y1 ]: D* o9 M0 }* C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) v; f+ W- M( u& G( ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 B! Z; X5 E0 A+ [6 I6 S) R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 K7 q% n7 |: d3 }' f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 G7 W6 k* Z7 K2 O8 r) a- h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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  W1 k6 y7 H* f7 s6 \! ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( x2 G- h; ]5 e) {; F2 M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>