【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ r" I5 C* u0 Q% A: ^歌词我附在后面。
" R9 F% {& {6 H( b! P1 cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& a- P  `; h+ c7 l3 b# ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: B: q/ k: s3 `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# G1 C; [. Z6 f2 J$ E. HNothing can compare to my love
4 n/ Q& f+ x5 @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& f, L' o8 q* F/ QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ F- Q/ J6 a2 o1 hI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ k, O# }! t7 \& yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 s- H, H2 N: y5 ~With such a tongue as yours,
2 y& r! W2 J  O% V$ OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! h# r! n/ e# y- R* `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. ]0 \  d0 s' q# O$ W( u1 d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 i' z* @: R+ G) _. E: j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* I- ~4 ~" w7 Y6 w/ _  e) \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 c. W( R+ H6 z* T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# ~' O" F4 b! B$ a# Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* V2 O2 t. K6 J. e- E' e1 v( x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- h! J' _7 V" k( e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- N! Q& [: P# o5 k4 M4 i- y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) B" K0 N7 O% U0 {, K3 ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: s  x( M& c0 {# _* V4 }  ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! F  e5 C, c: m0 e+ U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  A* b# E( d5 l! ]% k& ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, l" A$ h0 q0 o6 a" X<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ ?) q/ ?% k" Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 r" }# \# y& r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 j( z4 E1 e7 c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 ?; G! @$ S+ y$ O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 W3 C3 d( l* E( q/ n7 a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( z: t% E! H! |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; Q$ y8 q0 h2 Y) p1 f& J, B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: [: _4 m, }3 W# @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ u$ {+ _! ]  x" O6 r/ ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% [- m, c& e" D4 `- d, P- [8 V  J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' @4 T% E) D) g% G) S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 r# }/ \" Y" G8 W: g4 L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  {- ?, E; |1 N% s2 S3 H# B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% s  u! W3 k6 i, V( k$ s8 f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, T6 K+ w: T/ U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 t  P# `7 P5 V! X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 c4 G* R/ y5 b1 e0 W# t* b. q& Q" F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 p5 q+ {" x; F. Q6 ?( ]- l, z- f  ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  G; I" G! F( f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& F* j2 G, k/ j" m0 }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- g7 B' a, ~% o- i8 N8 d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! [# p/ V2 ^1 W5 X6 f+ s6 r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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* b% b. F% C4 L/ ~+ u8 h: {2 z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) N* X3 s' F% l0 m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>