【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; e, V/ |5 G4 {, w7 sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. ?/ @% x6 h& v1 U. }% N; u! i4 tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 ^' I) ]8 P! i/ h: [! oWith the moon kissing it every night
" }  ~- |9 K  n; [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ G3 B* k+ R- a1 A$ ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  B  s+ `) |4 F( W, u5 sI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) Q; o# r7 {1 B! vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: C& Y; a* {% d: w* n. H' zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% v6 f9 A- ^  v2 C9 a: v5 [2 mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 R  r$ B0 O4 Q$ W0 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) f& @! f; O- c! H, G: p* IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- S  E, q4 ^( V; \9 S; Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  q) c3 e0 y! O/ w2 G9 g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' [* ?9 B; Z0 t7 n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 ~' t1 q% L9 A  \* ?; `0 A+ ^' W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' x# v2 N9 Q" f1 r6 o' h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 B; z+ u& [. w" `3 c% X+ Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 S7 r2 k2 s' t9 _+ o8 r- _& H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- C1 g9 w6 a+ {+ I. ^2 @& n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# F. A0 o9 H: H- O# u8 V/ [' ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: I% w/ f' N3 d! c0 Z9 g6 I7 z' N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# Q. g2 o, M" k3 U0 n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: B/ o8 t. q, J/ \2 h' B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ E: Y4 B( N) m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- q7 X7 S9 O# p( s& s3 s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& q7 N% u4 d; `  b4 Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 [4 C, @9 h: }$ m  B+ ]; L9 f+ z9 i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* P/ q( w8 l( H. S# p3 ?2 V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. \1 D& i3 [, Y+ j9 K1 \7 o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; t% j" p% G# y  y, G& S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: u+ t- j6 k8 Z; x. G4 g  k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ p( U  A0 K4 P  N9 a" H- d2 ]2 ]* ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' C# ?% A+ M4 ~- }. K& n% Q5 Z5 M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% ]; I$ e  }- a! H, o5 j- @- x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 S1 w, @- Q$ C' Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
  M+ V4 I! J1 K$ S7 W' g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" q0 K7 _& C- f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' J; j, T4 H1 I, {: P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- l. J$ U4 @/ b# d- W8 d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ L) V6 d  D' _5 [3 o9 X  |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ ]7 p1 T3 ~9 l; h6 q1 a6 i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. z; J; ]4 w  b* g: q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 l* h- E3 y' {1 c1 @( x' x; L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 X" f; x6 H4 \) E! {0 Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>