【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ X, V7 |* r" h5 h歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- ^% z1 G( C: \0 J9 sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ K, J$ }( \' T) @( eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. k% r; [! W& [0 q+ p# Z/ zWith the moon kissing it every night
, P5 M- F' n. ^7 H7 o7 R9 u1 }* SSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. Y! ^: \8 l/ B  w+ k# BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& e" V5 o3 {. o1 EEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* O$ W! |, W6 cI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! W1 b, l- n; }9 \; ^6 ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# q# s5 {8 F' X' a) ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& X6 @* U* ]4 s' _) tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" e2 B  z/ J+ RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- b6 g* h+ _' Y* `' uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, h% s# R5 N# f1 A) S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" r; F  u% S; T8 V5 n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& V7 [2 H' D& \9 E- M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ x- Z2 S$ b1 m7 A# W& w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 D7 T0 O1 k* ~/ L9 T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# f4 |4 N) X% l4 `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 C$ o5 j1 l4 l, f- l+ I+ g5 T( h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% q9 o" d2 V# t; S; P+ {4 _0 E1 M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 T/ p; d$ K" A( E9 ~% w% F8 r: W/ N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) L: X9 y( m7 e" A2 b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! W2 K1 E* U8 {& t# h: ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- V9 Z0 H9 m! @: K8 S% a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 t7 C' n6 P1 ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 ], @+ V. o3 f7 _" C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* M5 K5 b" C1 d* F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 t5 F# i% d5 J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* i' s( F4 ~5 y2 y- a9 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. \: c3 }2 V$ o. n7 l% k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. l, W: j1 y: Z) V! ^0 [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. n9 [" S7 j* Y( C. }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* I& _! f* P8 G  g5 v' ^: {<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 s" i0 K& I6 `4 E$ y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- Q) g# w) h9 S* t. Q6 |, ^) b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% e% y8 p* [7 m6 g- m5 J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. h$ T1 v( V7 t2 ^3 W8 q) A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! h, \9 I8 E* K7 o/ c% w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 e3 {. e9 A' t, O( F- \) B我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% ~$ k& p' c- n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>