【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ F4 y6 x, a, Z+ @6 Z  F% m3 @& aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ j; |2 c" a+ ~# q; Q. OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) L5 v6 e1 M- Q# V# wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  Y% f8 l) _+ s/ ?, `/ ?8 v! W) Y0 `8 RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' ?3 n- C# l6 M8 S$ O' UYou needn’t fear anything
2 U0 \4 [/ a% z5 K$ @6 JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ v' H. G- w4 b! [. |I really want to know just how much you love me
2 T6 N% {" f  r: @. HI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ e! ~+ W2 P3 Y/ |) vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# }! I  Y, K! N% b+ ]* zI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  C9 [, T7 [$ j. x$ |9 v; S+ KI’m still filled with fear
5 u) ^- B( w. i. U0 B/ OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) p" ~6 r) T, X+ Z% TI regret not dying
! s  \' W0 B" W7 \: t& E- ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 y" H% d/ ]' x6 FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) t" y, l5 q' \4 z# ~/ xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# l! g# Z0 Q% `3 HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* A$ m: t1 P* X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& F( V7 N' X( S8 K7 G. t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 w  W5 W1 W6 [, Q- D( O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. k# ^- P: `# G: i$ K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 U" K) M5 g4 ?% K# ^' q1 {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) _1 z% `. y5 S* f' h. ^; U1 Y7 c. o( P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 X: u6 W$ |0 G. V7 V, f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" C' s- t' J( U; R" o! C& o% |% h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 t& M' h0 l, H" `) @+ j- a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; f- U( b; N8 y: U4 n. k. y$ s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) G+ Q3 K* g: Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' \. q2 M/ G: E9 L* o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ p4 S& I( M6 Z* P, b<P>你无需担心</P>
; i4 i3 V" Q: }3 ?3 q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 c. o8 D( \" ^. H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& X$ Q8 [! N, S% o, R) h; F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 Y" ]4 r# [; y7 D" d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 c; p! l/ A0 l4 K: T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, s+ s2 c# O3 D5 u& @2 v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 m1 O4 s6 K) g2 _* s: p<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" M0 J/ [1 Z9 h% `/ d5 I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  f# v  N- ?0 |7 @, m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 e0 a' u+ q) E1 D" b& M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 E$ ]! C' N+ I1 C4 i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 a/ @+ D; t$ Z; y$ c1 r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: S' k' p  m  m+ y8 O2 c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# ^, C# {+ V6 U* i, ?0 W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 n* Q& o  u, x" ^8 X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, \: n2 t% w3 ]+ @; d! ^7 I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 `6 c# N- B# N& M- E+ {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 R; [6 O& P$ ?+ a& V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) @* R  A. ^: v% C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! t! k7 C; t6 m- P& g( R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) m% y9 F+ O& j/ b, |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# [- P* D/ k7 O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* R' S) J. n5 f6 H& \  ^  }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  [& x" A. b+ v, H0 u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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0 O! K& h. s& N7 r& n! e: S" F2 c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>