【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
% Q& u3 r! u) l, `; W3 f5 mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 \6 k+ G! j8 T  ~. k5 C8 ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; b  m2 u: x4 z% m3 f/ gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( C" W( P% w- U2 N) L  W6 YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' @4 A/ h; ~" ^$ pSeeing the sky content with its love
6 m  b0 J8 i6 IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ H( H! D+ I: rYou needn’t fear anything
: B( F+ H2 d. C) c2 p6 V' zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 a7 @) U% {! ~$ F3 XEvery other word you utter is love
3 E5 E, j' [$ o/ v: b6 A: DI really want to know just how much you love me
' k0 z+ @# e' w) [* cI love you I love you with all my heart
1 c; C8 H9 i( F( ^% w  {5 n* INothing can compare to my love
# G. C4 }7 S9 o8 ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% ?9 R& W1 B* {9 a8 Z. XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  L+ L9 o; B# ^I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 m, s# }7 }3 P, I& }. k" BI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 i  S6 c3 a. `! M) dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 [" q7 N& k/ {$ o' R8 S% v! kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 B6 D" z1 V* U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* z; c  [+ f$ B) i' ~8 k+ g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  g. I; i8 j# V5 e! M: n( l* |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* n# ]/ `1 ?1 e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ t9 C! ~1 U! |% g  F  G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 _5 o1 F4 \2 O: K( o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; G) o5 s  t0 T6 f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% Z7 V  m2 a  j& W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& Y1 X3 i4 s2 p% H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! _* i2 P- p% x* A0 c" e$ @& z% @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 A; B" a9 J" E4 E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' y, a: X6 q) [, ^+ Z5 x8 k7 j& f1 J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" K; U% L3 r7 S1 J4 [0 H8 M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% Z, `) ^( {( G) F( E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# O" B" w& |! ]. P" C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: e6 T2 X- B. g& x6 C$ q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  F* I5 E* Q5 q' ?, D# v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. u% U2 D: d# m, D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# Y, o% O: h5 C" t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: v8 B1 [$ L  d% m3 S9 Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ n; e! T% a9 x1 W( e3 Z3 c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  _4 @; B9 y9 T* s8 g. u$ E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" E, Z# t$ }; `; w0 y6 h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! Q, _& s* K* M; L$ Z  y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 g& a0 s* S+ `! g( E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, _$ g  r) k1 X1 f8 s2 }  t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>