【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ r6 t4 Q, d# k歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# u1 N( |9 u1 R, [& QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) p* [# c, A: S9 \' kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) g9 `' n! X1 V' }, M2 W' pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 Y: O9 t( s5 D2 B4 O& M4 o8 rSeeing the sky content with its love
$ d5 W1 Y% ^- GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! @# n/ M! ^# q! R9 gEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: d; Q* y  |6 I! Z9 @I love you I love you with all my heart
8 B! R6 ?! ?1 d# W6 t: m$ h5 K: hNothing can compare to my love
' H) ]! Y' e( t& m; {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. x# v% J( M2 L, S0 M+ \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% r0 A* R+ ~! U( f: |2 WI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% r* f6 J: a( H8 F) Z0 p: cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& o% v' K0 _& m8 jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ e9 Z8 V; ?6 S$ \* d& U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ \$ @6 U0 y* u; A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' g0 H5 K8 J0 _5 X$ {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 Y. G& D. [, ]% `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. w( s6 k* a+ P2 }  \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& U" q( R8 l3 D! `# j; U2 p& U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 F1 H8 ~) C( K& q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 B2 j8 f8 K- _" ]; }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ B8 V8 j( R3 t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& v5 B2 r8 n6 a6 q' z) Y) S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ x8 u& P! s8 V! {9 O* b1 H<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! ]' N2 A! t/ Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) h$ |+ }/ K" n) I) S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  _# g5 |9 o- O# X* h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% Z- W- E' Y* j2 Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' k( ~3 u& V: z" S0 j' d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! r& S2 m, K4 _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- ~2 D9 ?5 u( B) q6 Y( w( j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- J1 }% j8 r6 H! ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- S( H" i5 b; }, ^0 g2 z5 ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; C* k/ O5 M5 M4 D/ y8 ]1 V<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 E; a1 B! [( `3 W/ T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. I, m/ j6 l/ T# `# N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ |: @% Y' |7 f* q& E3 a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ \$ ^5 {' i, W4 E$ c  {+ j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 C* }* a1 r4 \( x4 Q# d- T! ?; W% ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ T6 w4 w8 ?& p, M, d7 }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 M: c2 t, }0 ?; T4 B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ t7 e0 I# V, r2 w! n! o% F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 y1 E- J2 A( O( v, [: l5 w6 M/ \+ ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>