【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! D: e" B; L, ?/ g" z! P0 j1 z; sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 W. l% d4 ~/ Y- x' `" j7 PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 t- Q1 G0 H. p5 L1 E, CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. x& ]& o" p% p% M# P! \With the moon kissing it every night
8 n6 P* m' v6 e1 p4 V4 [4 CSeeing the sky content with its love
! }0 [" n! i* y' W4 O+ x5 \/ O& q+ uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 h. B; b4 v" D% w3 l3 ^- r4 ^You needn’t fear anything
: [8 S8 F+ a6 \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  P. [& j3 ~+ H0 q+ bI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, O% ^- p: [4 G9 R8 u$ l2 W2 h9 LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' j1 s. D- T$ F# }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! [4 Q& [, \, b& yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. T* Y8 X. _# K6 ^" x4 S4 uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. \$ Q5 i, w( qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) n% ~( h+ N. Y6 \3 @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, B6 w2 Q6 p! y9 Y/ d- h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! u8 w3 o3 A; t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ R9 q3 _( ^) V( V+ D. R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! {2 ~& F- \. E; q) z3 C) v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' d  b. G) w- F: T$ \1 b6 C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 @" T6 A6 y. ^% x$ w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# m: Z5 u5 f0 A1 a<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 t. Z. p- r6 J4 J2 o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 {  O& U& W! x( B: H# z0 E$ _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 R7 i( [1 s2 }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 v1 h2 u! R9 o: d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 `6 S2 _9 A4 [- P- @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( n7 V* Q0 G- ^& g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  W  i6 K, Z1 z* B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; R" N3 k1 I, f  x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 Q3 a# l7 Z, P6 l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ o0 v" ]7 n5 f* z& `* |: U; e1 d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- T: E/ f5 E% O+ ]' ?( Z7 \9 y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# m$ t% r3 G1 w) U8 [- D6 U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: l! }& |0 V9 C0 t9 ]- G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) i( n! t( C0 J4 r1 g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 ]6 s5 {- p7 W% _, b: x( _3 E( B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) m7 L9 R$ H9 a2 S) X0 O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( p- P- S' c$ c1 V) j$ {, j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 S) u( a6 c: d3 Q+ L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>