【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& D& H9 N" Q9 y7 U4 s3 R/ n" D. e% D歌词我附在后面。
  U2 a7 S+ |! ?( {The moonlight is shining brightly,
' k3 X6 r5 e. PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. M7 }  o  o, B( _6 QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 O1 o% v7 F) ^4 uThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ s' }! A, s+ d1 q6 G% h' TWith the moon kissing it every night
4 I; Y6 ?' @% CSeeing the sky content with its love
( c" c( x1 G, [$ MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" u, q6 R% B" J. o# |You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 z5 C! ?# T8 Y  o  T5 cI love you I love you with all my heart
0 @2 L' N* O- p1 z6 e9 kNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 v* w3 A. E! _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 i3 w' O0 w+ lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: K1 _8 S  \/ t' R; ^I regret not dying
+ N4 x4 I1 i. {0 PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 @' |! f3 m7 z$ M# T5 {With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& R# G: D1 |$ ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' A/ _3 q9 ?3 C1 q6 @" o$ NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: F5 H6 T# X% @8 V2 y  Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# c" n- l3 o' u0 M; u, \$ Q1 a2 x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* Z+ q4 C/ K# E! @0 G7 V6 b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" N2 ^7 @& H  J' |- Q- `: j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, Z( r! q4 P9 w# Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 B3 O* w6 ?7 F0 k3 E1 Y* b% t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: P  Q6 ^! W! P8 B- F+ ~' f- X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- Q. Y: Y6 J. J) M( W! E: l<P>你无需担心</P>
. @  P6 x* T4 s& J# j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 \9 Q0 X, y# ], V* P7 L& h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 e- F3 i0 b# m, G# c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 O/ ?* x7 t; T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 H  G$ D4 k4 U) L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' \! Z- F. N6 ]% {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ [6 l& M6 ~8 G9 c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 K& U7 ]2 K7 A6 O# F1 \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 q; G+ R7 J+ E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  [2 U3 |. R) q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 p3 D# g, w4 Z6 e' T% S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 @  G- ?/ y. c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. @7 _5 T2 i4 w$ Z  Z% a* W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 j  u/ G! b: V3 ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ x7 e3 t$ o* ?/ P( G" B! z- u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 n2 j! Y4 X3 ~% n7 Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' U8 g; ]7 X2 e6 |! C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  _. u# e: J1 f5 k2 x( l我请你剖开它
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- S8 F& \1 z% W; N5 {7 t$ b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& M. D. @- T6 i1 b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>