【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ G. n) T% o( V+ y: L% zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 y5 J' R6 Z3 ^% z, ^+ S' HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 ]  \  P* ~8 |* y0 A# z6 \- G, YThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 g- A8 [& @& Z$ q, t4 D/ S' iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 e9 V5 _5 P: N' `Nothing can compare to my love
, T# b# j7 {& n( m+ v6 o  S9 lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 [  U% x% L* X2 A; H! Y3 a" Y! {. {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 N# o: y% Z6 M3 l5 F, n5 Q! X  TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( ^4 i" }: w& W; x; E; XI regret not dying
9 C5 Z2 w1 @8 rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ y/ a: Z! S/ h% LWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- a; x$ b! T: C" l" a6 ?& h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! i  W: H6 Z+ R! y3 p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) [% w1 y0 n7 O' d+ g/ A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 s+ |$ U: P& t: B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, L* |. j0 [8 @: u8 X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- S- ?* l* e( Y# }; a9 p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' q, a6 H8 \- d7 @6 |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 B8 R. F$ A3 u/ b$ F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* ?2 L1 f: g& U<P>你无需担心</P>
! h* a" a! T( G2 j7 I1 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# z: G% p% Q( G/ A$ Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 o' G, E' Q* V2 t- ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: J3 }( M. v3 k" J, O1 t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( L$ }, O. `+ y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ g) X/ S) o2 r3 {2 H; U. X2 N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 I5 ~: ]  `' M$ [<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- X. K+ c5 A9 ?0 A% h9 X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 T: b+ F- w: h7 y2 C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 e; j% Z1 C  x1 J0 Y2 s: \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 g" m" _  ?" p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ H5 k. d" R6 d7 N# y, k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 q/ [1 G& m9 a# u5 Z" f! [$ M9 }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 m# d( E1 ^" L8 \- P! W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 Z% O6 }, Z1 {! i/ p$ t9 O5 G  d9 ?% ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ G+ g% Y/ L$ K; l9 @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ z: J/ m; y- z1 Q) ^9 u) s. |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" g; S- ?" S, @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" Y; G! q8 }; {  |" m' `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>