【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. c) ]2 a& n7 Z, R% n1 v1 r) \歌词我附在后面。
0 k% d* n+ v% \3 XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! G) t: ~( I8 O) GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ @/ W( b; s5 E% T6 JThe sky is happy down to its soul
( _) f8 q1 g3 p& IWith the moon kissing it every night
/ w  Z+ _& B2 B8 g: U# n0 NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! X+ f6 `/ w% W2 Z, [) lI want so much to see inside your heart
5 l: j7 [* A: X7 eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; _0 h0 i8 m+ |% A; zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; ]+ S8 ]" |, g# [3 j) N  e) Q: wWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& b6 T, R+ k3 j9 @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 \( l  r6 ^- F$ ?& g- S: B$ |& _; P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ i1 ^% E! ?3 n! Z0 T1 o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- v- i! O8 c' n+ @: M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. O0 Y0 F3 N5 B0 c0 t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  R: |# \; V5 `- L' H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% j+ ~9 s( L- f( u, n! j& p2 i! @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ s. W, m; B+ J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 Q" ]! e3 n: \, d# o9 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 W( B9 H8 G4 l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' ?1 l; ^- L! ^: g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ U; w  {$ n% @  q0 L) Y! h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 P' m  E$ u  @" ?0 W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 m; u5 u" X8 V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. B$ \, E) [6 N+ F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, d& I+ u7 ]' W% H% G: N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 j# j: d) c* Q: t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% J& f2 O- c  M* @( l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" o( S, g8 B3 Z9 R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 l* H  n1 G. ^; ^9 y4 L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, B9 t- M# ?5 a; V; O% L; a  u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 Y; u9 Z' B6 Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) _. w5 Y/ V- o( y3 B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( @3 s3 o$ k+ q, }- J2 l$ |: k. f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% d" T* Q7 X( Z% I- N% B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; K4 V4 T9 y$ S1 y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! Q0 r7 q' \5 l0 x' A, ]9 H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" v0 A& m# x0 O& k0 T7 e我请你剖开它

# ^$ Z! ~* B- t- t; L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>