【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  e* q/ E& k( o/ vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% m. e- b# E$ }2 B' B8 FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 C" z& |+ R/ C2 t9 ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, e3 B- |4 a4 A! {+ G6 OSeeing the sky content with its love
1 w- b$ B/ [5 a7 HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* @. ^$ c& _$ o2 @, m- b0 a6 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" F& M0 i8 m9 a3 s8 LEvery other word you utter is love
  U' ^* [: b4 LI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: d2 C$ [, g8 r: K$ N% Q8 n$ T  LNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 T# p' A3 J1 S7 p2 BI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* v" a, w& B9 |6 II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% ?0 }% f, T! X$ EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 N! \: w- M) w. L1 L1 l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' |  ~/ x' Y& K& w9 r( D1 @( a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 K! s* ~  R+ c7 G, B( \  o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* m6 ^( J4 p& \3 B4 K) V1 Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: R) \8 B" y. \- k9 q& I' o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' |& ~" {# u. b- s& H" Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ ^8 h% ~- d1 a" [# F( N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. w; U* B0 m' P  j9 F1 {) A' T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! C" @5 T/ a, V% Q2 K7 Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ j8 }; c: H/ y- B( W1 q9 \( b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ _% Q; H6 B3 h; O6 \<P>你无需担心</P>
; p; a7 e6 T7 X( P7 s4 D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 z6 g' C# V3 M; U9 _; s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' E; l! T5 D7 R4 |9 P* N( K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) V4 ^. o+ W9 N  T' W: i. r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 C# p7 W; `4 J" M" x, I; [<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' n/ `8 N+ e7 W1 C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ S; b5 g7 F  n7 @3 F$ ^. `/ S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 c( d. a- p: ?) X, v7 ]; {. @, Y1 U- |3 l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' r* ?# _! m; R- S, }! H& W# O<P>I regret not dying</P>
% }( |1 Y9 l3 [  [9 e, o' t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 y$ R& ~& O. n2 b# @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 B8 ~( j8 O8 q- x' `: w  x. N7 n9 F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* y: J' W0 \, m7 u0 a5 L" Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ U" |' D/ A( [( G% e& S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( P" W7 I% W2 T, l2 r- |: P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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