【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 [- h! Q: m% o- t% w1 M5 H, r歌词我附在后面。
7 p$ r$ y5 h& y# N  C- _" xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# R! b( s; r2 ]4 S* g  |/ q% p3 mWith the moon kissing it every night
  F( y' ~1 L- W( `3 sSeeing the sky content with its love
- d) ]* ]6 X6 a& C# m8 RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* n! r1 `8 o( V$ SYou needn’t fear anything
6 @& q0 _% u; Z! N" `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& n* b" ?; L4 b7 t" D; LI love you I love you with all my heart
5 Y: ]) F7 u! \5 QNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ O3 K" M0 E. hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* A/ P  I' j2 r8 r* d( V# x: U. h) @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. D8 w, [& i: l- h4 ^3 k( o4 QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' \2 v4 N& ?; }6 @* x' }  xI regret not dying
  a. B5 M! B( i# `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 a# Y* u( T8 bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( S. @6 q' V, \6 c; D7 |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- o, s! I( ?9 C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- L: n  y3 q1 k$ D) q1 ]; t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* a0 u5 w4 j: b6 o0 _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* k8 o- i* A) P! i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ O' ]- q8 K8 x# e7 R, {9 m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 q0 h* W3 V' u" V; D. t3 H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 `2 w+ l  T& O6 ~# a) D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 r3 O) y, S; I% v' B, m: t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) L/ W# t+ N# u; T; H# I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% c' \! `1 e& g$ g7 P: i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 B7 b% b0 k, \- j6 ?' P: I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 x% V/ E) |# w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ ]+ ~/ m  Y7 y  n5 Y2 o( L) C# N  A5 }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# l  ]/ E% {! |/ v) U. W0 }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& @! N2 x& o% m, q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% O% _7 k' J% D, C; e* U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 F. v' l/ l3 q7 Z! j. b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 C. G+ Q8 v% @2 h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; k+ \$ ^% X( \- V$ n3 J) J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 O4 \9 ^4 S; o: ?9 k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>