【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) ?0 Y: D$ F3 V3 j4 V; p歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 p& ]3 v9 Z( C. I8 M3 J- ?" f! \( ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 d* u/ j+ u, N- [2 @) DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) y5 H0 S! g7 nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ {* }4 X4 y1 t3 b) bThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 A1 G) g" ?- U. xWith the moon kissing it every night
* k. l4 n+ y5 m; Z# |/ qSeeing the sky content with its love
  y, u8 {% x( y' {3 I: U) g/ H1 mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 `4 z% Y  q6 GYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  V! C% [4 ]* x2 p+ zEvery other word you utter is love
, Q* n( P5 D8 QI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. r: q, U( g8 Q) X$ Z# _; |& ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 d+ z4 K, {! w6 `% \5 e* i6 GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; _9 Y: V! k' W# }2 }I want so much to see inside your heart
" ~! T& B- ?7 c' |- \2 X. |, oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; p/ E  ?2 _4 ]/ y8 bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 u8 ~  g0 z# d3 M- r. VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ V( N9 z- w% ^9 ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ c1 h; P' N+ F) kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ P- Y! i. \+ \8 v$ y1 T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 y) [* q/ z1 V2 j& A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 I  f8 A  ]# G1 _& s& K- g- z2 m/ y4 U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. m1 W0 i6 y7 s& H. o% g9 p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& U, F4 A0 _, m' w  m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ D) |. |' Y. R8 m4 G7 {) @) w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, j% Y4 T: n7 n1 z5 `- e2 o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: C3 m3 \! M6 j+ W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 m: @# R9 I$ V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" z8 o8 `  b0 Z0 \( ?8 j0 t<P>你无需担心</P>
+ q& b- J6 D4 r" B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 x  u+ c3 O) B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 V& i$ j; q/ h% B- A: s, z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, I1 @) R; f" L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) |/ J5 J5 j# Q1 k+ Y) N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% y3 Y( D- p; L8 A% ?! X$ W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; j& L4 y. b1 I7 J+ _/ q" c0 F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- P1 X4 F3 V1 \6 K) s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; \8 g9 P6 |+ u2 Q1 w, h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 g: K- r" c( T: F- x3 `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( h. F5 ]8 L  _<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ x# S) ]" E3 [0 e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 N2 Z9 ?2 q0 q; q) \" B$ t4 H* \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 u2 k3 r5 E" x; N+ s" u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ Z2 Y* _" g3 Z6 K' }7 Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 z; b& P8 ]0 H; r. _# C8 ~( G+ P) H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 o4 l  m3 F* \5 I! l8 ?" P我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& R* v! v( g( I5 k" {6 \3 r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>