【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. V  |& L4 F2 l9 ~  k) p; \' h) k歌词我附在后面。
/ T' f7 m$ H* Q( F& S, ]1 IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 s0 g$ W! [! p4 V, w7 NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ ?$ I* f; K7 n% ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. Q0 N- `4 \2 RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ y( z- A+ j+ S4 R0 oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 \& a* p: I; A- R) l# GI love you I love you with all my heart
! u& o( K* O3 v- gNothing can compare to my love
( c6 U4 I$ A' f" nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 I: f1 A; N; ~$ M/ fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* {- `6 }6 L* B" g4 nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 D* Z1 J6 \! q/ |: x" \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 X8 z) B8 G: L$ o* B. }6 JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) u- x1 Q6 h& e/ |# Q% ~  pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ z9 v) R. S. P' @. _  w, @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: |7 a& Z4 u% C( O/ h! R. p$ j7 j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ g7 h' ~4 @5 E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( y2 @/ c% K; h# `  U! K1 S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 J. V8 y. p' \* U0 [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: T7 y& P& t! n$ K& V3 `5 @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* e9 @  T; Z3 K+ A+ J# b5 U. c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 X, A5 A4 {& z; a9 F& c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  l/ y' B: t6 e$ I* h, W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! w: p; `0 r4 |( z$ p9 ~$ ]0 J' U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 @/ w) H6 ~8 ^( p. k2 v: |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 ~0 Y1 }5 j9 ~0 ~6 Q8 g  D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" ^1 o) {$ Y2 \) U( N+ M6 G2 l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 ~( P6 |, J8 E; h: z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: h+ b' Q( Y7 F) r0 u1 a5 P1 k, t* \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ w+ N* {; p' d. w2 f; B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% _$ X* B) x$ z! j' C) ?7 v# s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 @5 J3 j8 Z+ I( X: n7 F' |5 `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ s0 G1 M# j: |7 s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ F  e0 _" O# z4 ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# J2 u' ~( q. w# P7 @6 \# Q$ n) T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& L- ?: V3 L; D! ~# V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" e) o  t+ R" W" G/ W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* `0 K7 J9 _* x+ L3 i# U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 ~7 [( f% P1 B0 W4 j* W! t  C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 ^  u) j3 S6 ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 ^6 [+ e* k: q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( e! S3 z( Q: S+ W我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ l) v) i/ b( Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>