【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 p8 y0 m: n& ~8 UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  w+ u" J) e4 t: Z5 z' nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: e- F% l6 C5 s# A* e0 y3 tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' v1 `* r0 c* @* k, GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 B- G  W  m9 X0 J' ^+ W  G, J* GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# {  W# e  C/ a4 [- QSeeing the sky content with its love
+ W1 C' w0 I4 DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ r# X/ V! k+ g0 A0 N# s( u  ~I really want to know just how much you love me
) M* T1 C' I8 ]( kI love you I love you with all my heart
7 L; C- a7 k4 S! hNothing can compare to my love
$ y' i! a+ g6 m0 A  T8 _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* r1 b1 }. w' J" G4 V0 jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 V2 L3 U; d' JI want so much to see inside your heart
* K/ j8 e! U8 M% {! O) Z+ JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% _; f1 w1 z/ [  \% u) |I regret not dying
9 f5 i; B- S4 a3 |) QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: W/ j' l2 ^( v- X% s  _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 @$ F& Z! y, `; Z1 y* z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 z. K9 b5 c' m! q, V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 W* q& B5 n$ S1 E! Y; s1 Z9 e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 F' C$ Y6 f" D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: L- P& u7 {9 U2 i+ W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 R4 K+ r1 J. v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; q% n$ g  R2 C, \/ a7 @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 q% U# z% v3 x1 K# D4 t1 o9 d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# t) S" d/ S2 |  K1 `2 b! C1 o  ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& ], \1 F6 S, @. n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( K. o+ L* I5 A9 ?5 S7 l<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 i0 A2 ]7 P8 l2 o: E7 W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 Z2 N+ N1 U$ K; ?" o! H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% }4 U2 {' f( G. O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- f; n0 H4 L4 j: E8 o. N& X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ K" k$ E# t" x+ a* b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 i- F; s: i# P  u% t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  X2 s6 |* J( N! k$ Q4 H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% s: L5 Y! q1 O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- _' [& o# A7 l! a: g& D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 l. z' n8 |8 ^7 e1 t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 ~, U( F* E$ P& G. h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& @  k! g, t! L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ J# T% c- |1 s) ?' `4 b2 j$ U- S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 l/ g* j+ V3 y5 p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, |0 }5 w  t1 u+ S& P: b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, I% u7 w& m- s+ ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 r- e% z2 j* ]: x% j6 m% S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, H7 y  r5 Y  l$ p5 q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ v3 m- S& S0 R) v# `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>