【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
! L. }( O' q1 B" |  S0 J3 j' yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ q. g7 o! A- |5 M; |) ]$ o! CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- O# h% f, I  WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& u) K& @% ?8 D, `The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, A  ]1 o/ ^* N; w- z+ [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 K5 [. _& U, f. b7 I" U- vYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, ]  q8 Q: I( G- r, _+ sEvery other word you utter is love
. y5 M/ b6 J3 T- c. v. b% BI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 o6 T' j* Q- l4 p' |7 e/ p; EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% q% u) r. N( Q4 \: I$ W8 R- w! ]I regret not dying
# D9 y- V$ C% R) Y5 rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- T6 p) A% n' `7 L" M7 ^. KWith such a tongue as yours,
4 p3 y& I6 b  M/ ~6 ?- sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- U+ |- p5 X" z4 C- t: fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) B( J- z! G& k  [( @# `: P* L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: J' A* W6 }, }' `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% Q/ b. [+ R6 I, p& I1 [. M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& @$ G1 d1 }" O( b9 G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 Q# I7 b8 i! m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 @$ K1 w5 k4 A8 {6 E! p( ?- l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: d6 u! Y+ _2 o0 U3 ?- d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 m( X& ~4 v" A<P>你无需担心</P>
/ K1 \2 [" u& x2 i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" X. k. x1 D3 q7 l7 N" h& w  Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 }. @$ {6 {9 ~2 ?* p; y, w8 b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ ^) ~5 N& B; z7 Z! M! B4 A5 `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ \" K9 J) Z7 |4 ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! \% c: R9 s! Y/ F+ T/ N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. ?0 O8 b& i1 q7 r! ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 c& ?# E- Z* g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. H/ Y8 V; n1 f' J: d' o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  J3 m  X" {, c1 @8 g0 z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* _* y0 k* @0 L2 f# C4 Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  J! m& p' W3 j# x$ k' n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. Z  R6 C9 [- R7 {7 Z2 Z3 [: L8 K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* s+ d* Y' f  O. a, }. y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 J  e9 S5 _: G9 _7 S  Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) N4 O1 s5 L8 u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 o; A7 @: D3 h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 T4 g# E7 U  I3 r9 b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 v' G/ a. l6 j+ b! k  o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, _+ t+ [4 U. g; R7 H$ ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! O% d* I; M8 e' |6 M2 ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! R  Y: R/ A7 ~% G" B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- J1 w+ q8 s8 h7 R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 j) v* ^; m' `% p# Z9 G  Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  u- G  @( ~  _' |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>