【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) t( }  K. z0 N0 o' ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 l8 Q; X8 s0 l" m% k2 \Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ n) l0 U1 `! A0 m) }1 D5 x8 sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 B  m$ Y! |. Y: b/ jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! O/ ^7 N; b; A0 z, d) vThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ ?) ^# b# }. E" U! Z' }4 {. fWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* @/ r" |! T# C  ]; `" NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' X+ t" Q' ?! S8 q$ t6 o9 zYou needn’t fear anything
/ u/ i' P* \+ c" q1 }3 h$ eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- ^7 T( Z( F* a2 P& ~- }2 n' UEvery other word you utter is love
. G& Y5 ]1 W; I1 `8 [0 d+ _" xI really want to know just how much you love me
2 l, x+ Q+ H. K! M' aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 ]6 T2 a" p7 P7 C1 x# f% uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 D+ j. x8 m8 w5 m- @) ~4 YI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 ?% F( s, r, k% UI’m still filled with fear
9 ]! v8 X& |" d7 M6 q0 |6 ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ Q  F: c, o6 {, F( g4 I4 IWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# F6 s+ A* @% s, o+ G8 jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 F$ z- i# u- f2 E+ y# F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# F1 e6 N" ?. w5 ]' c6 D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- Y, S/ k6 t- J$ v& a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 C. W2 D# v. c- b4 o7 r3 h5 R( K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& p* W$ c* s) b& S) g( |- S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ ]0 S3 ]& T( P) u. t5 \% c0 E6 g7 F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, m) k3 n2 y  @( k2 F% O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 O" N: w  M' E9 w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 z4 Z+ x. o, m* U3 }7 L5 g& F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, V" D2 O; l: I+ s0 j$ a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, D9 O% m8 ?+ F2 l) H: K2 e( [& q. Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* u% Y0 O  j5 n% M& M2 w: u# ~$ g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ M0 |0 j5 K% F, Q9 Q) C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 J  H+ v& o0 X6 P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& U' Z3 `" b+ |3 X  i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 _0 D+ h2 i# w0 D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# @/ A0 W% W6 B: [9 s$ J9 F2 T1 k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. t, v$ ]0 Y/ Y4 e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, g3 e/ S9 o0 r( b& j( `- a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" H4 N5 @3 z  i$ r8 ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 @& K4 i) C. F/ {7 h% u- }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) [- H- i, X) s% j<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ [3 M# D9 B) {* T- p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" V" d2 a" ~* v1 ^& i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- r5 O4 _2 J3 j* F7 W; ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 J4 Q2 W0 ]9 B8 K" }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>