【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 A! E; k# @5 F& j& F0 U歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 l( P2 }  e# {# L/ ?# Q# A, yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 O  J0 w7 D8 p; S- {' WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, q6 m% G$ M  Z1 ~: HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) a; V6 M0 L, a. C7 G0 F% R5 S& \6 q+ dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 H: [6 ^( C; qEvery other word you utter is love
, @/ w( q" {3 Z* {" D8 ^I really want to know just how much you love me
+ C! l! c) u$ n8 `+ q) GI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& l) y. ~4 c0 W! S) ]8 J/ o7 T! }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 z' E( I- O0 a  x4 |1 f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: a! z9 G$ o/ x) N: e7 O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' s& b3 \* o$ u, I7 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  u$ p( }* l# q; {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( Q0 ]1 }. O4 s* C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 Q& ~, {4 V1 j6 H# g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- N. ?$ o$ }- f# w4 n# @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) n! {& ~0 m1 ?, {5 C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 ^) u, M9 h( S$ B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 i4 P6 K  d! y3 b0 b) X7 K! N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ R1 O8 U: B: q5 t1 O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* |7 u+ y. G6 H7 _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% d4 o* t4 j; }- s2 X& ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 l8 @# R$ B+ U7 c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 `' ~) p7 }7 J6 Y% I0 E% Y& s5 o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 Y" g* ]$ {- R! t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- U7 N+ C' G+ m1 H9 P4 H' `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" ?' p) d+ v  [9 n* D! t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ \! m# H+ k1 }, Q" t9 J) E/ _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% t0 h- j+ T, n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ w' K* O( @3 {" }! u: }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# S; ]9 Z5 x, H7 p/ \. o" N6 r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ X4 m8 w& j. ~2 Q6 U' \* b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% |# w9 t3 n! z3 p8 A+ K% k3 S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 ^0 {. V% y5 M6 w  B+ U3 r. Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 x4 K" g$ G9 k- y* o9 ^; @8 ^( j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ Q/ m: W5 \6 W  X% o$ m2 r/ {7 t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 O2 z8 z+ L$ i% o. S! q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ K( Y3 u3 z2 p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>