【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  g& I6 v5 X: z3 A2 [The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: r+ H: f: p: h' iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( |0 t/ r. X6 G! N% D# \' v5 ^The sky is happy down to its soul
) w3 P- D. a. Y8 ]# S( UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 V& v0 c$ q4 Z6 ^( D5 ^( Q, SYou needn’t fear anything
' h: g* W8 d' TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; Y  K9 V" a1 S- m9 [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) C) B  S3 _& cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) Y7 r- D) ~0 t4 q$ nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: Z' M( \' i  B% f! d4 pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 r1 T0 {6 W1 b$ G' q4 J1 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  g- R8 R6 \3 e. J$ n3 {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" s8 C, T6 U  [, ^7 P  x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ Q0 V" \7 S9 V" K3 G$ d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 E6 J9 J0 ?" V$ M) v9 s$ I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 i7 c% I( |% h5 q  \5 T  j3 B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ J- e; N! B, `  f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 h6 }- R& H" u% v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: s* s$ c) h$ L3 U6 [$ O$ l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  n+ _+ \7 _5 X7 i( O  ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 F& C- L1 T  l; F+ W) H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 y8 ^! Y$ G& d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 e' t* h( z! I9 W8 {7 V# p' B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 B/ y5 s% p5 Z4 f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ ^( i  I8 j6 a! n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 D2 d6 q4 \3 y* }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 w9 S# _) P) K# w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- H1 R/ @8 J4 q& Q' m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 c' K7 k& c! h/ W0 Z) i0 K9 L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: k2 L( a+ t) n<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# d4 }0 \( x  i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: ~$ p/ O, l+ [! H! K0 P5 r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# x1 D- `3 V. r2 @, j) T- B% B$ q; u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>