【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
! ~5 \& c( ^  \1 M  XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ E: V& N! a! V; |# {& X- uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ M. L& O, B8 t7 j* ~: V. pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% j. o# h0 f4 r4 N( O3 p$ `The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. f7 m/ D0 g, x* DSeeing the sky content with its love
. B" y, Y4 [0 y- b2 s0 h5 w7 f9 AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ B1 t5 d( V) Q; i% q" A6 `I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ _! b6 ~7 S0 {) N$ j' B9 W, o5 eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 b! D2 H& o3 c" cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 }5 k. M3 h$ r& c1 F# m. CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 n6 v: _. F/ ?) VWith such a tongue as yours,
5 \( }) F& I* l- m5 jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' Q9 ]/ T8 x. o- Q* N* OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 g; i! }  L# z: }* y, iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. y7 y6 ~. H! S5 @# ?6 `, F. a- L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" C- `$ g; A1 z6 v0 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& G% e3 p, H: n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 F+ m* L0 V' i0 U0 ^, R: z; ~6 f  i+ }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 R) d, w& u: g' B6 Y+ [: R: j8 G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 `* I$ S$ P% Y' g$ r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 ]/ ^2 [  i+ q7 b- ]( ]% Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 O' M3 k& @6 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 F9 i, O, @" z  [" n8 W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  W4 F3 i  t6 c/ N" p9 x2 Q  u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, w0 V5 ?' X- Z* F% b% s; q" ~% o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ h/ B+ _! O( J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 r' K1 b9 `5 H' k: q1 F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# n+ E. @" R) S' o( r/ C9 Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  I$ F1 L1 k+ }3 H. _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 |  M$ s8 c" F* w8 Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* v7 _4 w/ I, Z* r$ n# f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ A& ?/ x* j4 @5 c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 v" C8 N8 d, {. E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ d' v' k5 K8 m, L+ {# _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* o8 o' i+ t9 A* B' u0 q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 C5 T* e, i: z8 L1 y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' ?- f$ B7 C( O* B0 D<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. J4 d* I( K+ H- V% j, o9 K1 M( Q; k, c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 f$ ~) N& Q, b; c4 ^+ M5 e/ u, h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 G. e6 ?- u  I  Q/ ~5 t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ f2 W9 v0 l/ u1 G0 y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) Y6 q0 @* g5 e5 h6 M. O1 X+ W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* E1 h( j; g7 ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>