【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& U# V0 _- i# C歌词我附在后面。
! D: Y; _9 ?* n3 T, YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 |3 z) g3 \  @6 {Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) @% g  R; f3 L7 EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  l+ G( a+ h* F. u& bThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 _4 H* ^8 l( _With the moon kissing it every night
8 w. p( Y) f9 m9 Z& ^( gSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 Z( ~) \6 b# F3 q3 P! y( I% [3 iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 c& X& m8 D1 j# f  _, T  iI really want to know just how much you love me
0 P+ m  o; t# h' J, zI love you I love you with all my heart
2 p9 W2 }9 b' M! A* |Nothing can compare to my love
+ F5 g8 w5 N. Y3 @! zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ h2 Y8 i; d  M3 T0 j. a. ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 r$ c* }9 M4 d' k2 i6 LI want so much to see inside your heart
, `( N2 T( W* `' j1 \% aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% L8 ~  G6 O/ }$ {3 t$ iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! l  G+ {! H/ E. t) X- mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 n# T6 |( N* k' NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 \( \+ _$ N1 i4 m1 ?. C) o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& q* z0 B) y" x' V* f. j- D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ o* Q' G* R2 U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* T8 {0 [" n$ z+ f" t$ X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: l* I) L, q* b* Q# I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 U' Q5 p2 s# T6 }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' h# N: b4 T. g- l<P>你无需担心</P>
6 r7 c/ l; T  K, v; Q& L+ D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& p9 `. K/ ^0 ~, s1 ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( q9 m) {# d: @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. A5 H; O# H* C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% `2 M" i3 e( d& I7 _2 i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. Z; Y, e1 e+ t+ d, ^" ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' R- p" |( W, F$ M7 N% `  M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 R% _. @, Q* N8 u  U/ u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ D0 f% `& ?* D3 i6 p6 c" [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' N- q+ }- ^  T% B( @5 l/ D! o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ Z9 l& J" ?" K5 ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 o+ e: X9 q% w  l/ n* v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 T( z9 F) o6 y; g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ x5 e( o; f' Q( X6 V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ r  k' l0 I- S. ^2 A: {. G9 e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( m8 a' O8 B& ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 v( r2 d' b' {5 g& J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- D3 n& |/ A% C# k7 w: ?6 T0 F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 Z, y& H+ I0 `$ _9 g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 @( R2 w9 E& W8 |: [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 m( P' x" Q7 k4 O0 D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 k7 ?0 w* A  q5 i# Y2 W. p) [<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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; o4 F9 a- d8 A) e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# V2 p) k! A1 t- i; b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>