【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  O' W7 g4 n- WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 n. X. k7 K* _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% W8 X- D( `  ]" a- G" cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- `1 f7 F. l" E  h$ R7 y$ yThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 `3 d2 p% h0 {1 g- r; JSeeing the sky content with its love
9 D" r) ?# ]  G# O0 WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 E4 Y3 N7 V/ F, w! M. SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' f' \8 Q' Q6 G8 S+ A, d1 Z! VI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  m$ b$ y6 P* B! y1 e! FNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 I  P- M! d, ~6 J3 F/ SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' h3 X) U% p5 t/ |% C! KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: G8 s- E: E7 J5 V+ F- S9 w2 E+ a3 g& aI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* K3 p& U, h0 f& Q0 k8 a+ b0 SWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# C& D0 w! A1 f6 A. h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  F" i3 }. f4 |' `. N9 b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 K. s1 J* v9 |' }1 s0 X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 v% t$ e, u# }% `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ a" c5 {- {2 B# y/ T- _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% {7 W: R, y+ O$ M4 X4 f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ p5 d1 d% U. U1 y; }7 Y* s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, o, g: {: Q( _  `# R; X: e9 {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% D+ V$ E3 Z; Z8 {, b+ s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. m3 p9 X: `2 L! s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, a% K3 X; C0 Y2 G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; M" D- n) o, H& X. w; L. X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( y& [9 I& s2 ^' f2 q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ l- E; u! e( ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 U$ L3 H/ c, ]& U; Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, \9 d7 L+ ^- y9 i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 n( ^+ ?4 o" e) _: R7 U' l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 t3 t+ ]8 [8 Q# B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- B" ?6 z5 e" F6 w. e8 Q% H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" S, i! e- m# V7 M6 g* {; G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 N+ {: P! Z6 @3 _/ I' P! q: C8 n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- s$ B. z$ l7 D; w& a0 b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' Z! Z: F5 K/ H+ z. E8 x<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ A1 i" r3 T7 _- g  l7 n2 y) V5 h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 J% X) Y9 Q4 J2 Y% A2 F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 X  B; i5 f4 b+ R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 d/ W. N% \7 w: Q! x# e. ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# D$ a# v7 b8 ^( ^5 e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 w" ?) x0 e- m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 Y5 s2 _( s( J; E3 P  i; T4 L5 z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 |9 |0 S) S9 y0 a/ P* z7 F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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- x" t: B, a1 {$ M' q# N* p$ W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>