【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& p& ^/ o( I& m  v7 B& D" J歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* Q" b+ y, n6 g% c8 N7 G7 Z7 @: qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ |; Q/ V+ ?' S$ C! ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 i/ @0 U2 `: }- {3 l+ q2 RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" F( C7 d" n3 L( B. PThe sky is happy down to its soul
) O- W# B1 _& l1 ^& kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" H) j  U3 t/ J  P3 {! HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 m# ^" Q6 O0 P8 M) d$ `I really want to know just how much you love me
( w& P  l4 d- V- oI love you I love you with all my heart
( l' G. j+ l. ~7 g+ n) XNothing can compare to my love
( J# ^6 T% M% b( mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% w. g8 [" ?  E' }2 z7 t* kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 w7 e  A8 ?  X& t: @3 R* BI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 b) v/ F/ I- Q' j% h2 iI’m still filled with fear
5 H4 i9 s* o! S( r/ C4 `, \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% t, A* |  L0 lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; D' ^2 M1 x$ A' ^# QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; Q* m; w" z3 Q/ V' ^2 |. c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* U; x% ^) E  W1 u3 \% V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% Y# A( a0 M- `, m3 b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  [' l% F4 h# d( d8 X! o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ K5 L3 Y- W2 g2 O4 i+ }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ U/ f: S1 T( r! y9 J6 j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 `$ T  d8 O4 X9 s5 W" C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. p  H6 ]$ s) p6 ~  x8 J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 @$ D9 M3 H2 q8 Z: `5 _2 U2 u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 f. L. ~& y! }: _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  \* w9 d: l! v/ O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% }$ r, W9 |7 ]) A; @& |( Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 `; y# |# R7 T* ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; w) L7 }- f; I- p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 v+ R7 X, _( n8 ^0 ]: H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; x1 ~  U' K8 a/ U% {9 V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 @/ w& }9 B" h% V, G6 U2 d0 d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; Q* r2 ?% ?2 h# a0 ~4 D1 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 _/ [( u7 h, z6 g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 b9 z5 L# ]3 i8 V2 h  ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; K9 k+ u' V5 D/ u) |* _; Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 C8 G- j& H+ I$ ]" g, _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 J0 i  J/ c( f5 Y8 m7 r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# M. N) P, `% s3 P+ Z" Y# x" g" w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- D$ x$ `( R- r+ k# A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, p$ ?  D  K1 }0 y7 b; F6 m" q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 j& E$ H' U0 _! L% x9 y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>