【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 Q1 c1 q# V% M( J& L: k; A% PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 a& l) B$ C2 WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: i( ?; H* M# c" bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 f: D; B* g* n9 j! qEvery other word you utter is love
6 N6 n# U) r2 I# dI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% R) b3 Q) B& z1 R1 E( ]+ ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; E0 P0 T2 N6 X$ ~3 J. VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 N' G2 T: w+ _( B3 M. PI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  b1 h- C+ o, g, D8 g* @$ g3 i9 cI’m still filled with fear
* ~  q" q2 t% m% ~! S( s5 eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 r8 y* p. G; sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. @1 y# ^* B) v: X" C  ]With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. e8 Z1 ^8 d: d6 X& P; JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) ?, R4 R# w5 L# ]4 c1 b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! ~7 o8 f8 C9 l* o$ r! t' Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- g2 o1 d7 M3 {  X7 W; Y- I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) C# Z' e5 K# G- H  i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* [( [0 c/ n# [. Q% J: t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, h# B6 ]% d/ O5 R4 K9 o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 k+ R, s+ ]" ^5 u" z) j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 i& e( R$ q7 ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 A! V" q( |: E( G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# o* f/ q2 C  B" V4 |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% T9 ~0 V# w4 @' m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& R: q0 {# Z) s  h, W$ Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- v# l% m; n, c1 H4 t6 k; ]6 `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: z( G- d' Z/ w8 [5 ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% |7 A0 T9 }4 v8 @: I1 z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) H& Z$ s! X0 w# U$ H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& W8 w9 X; e. z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* c; ^) H. i5 G. X! o1 S( m6 _<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 f+ x( i: G; M+ ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 J0 y( S/ v# N0 w9 z7 x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 x6 @( R* |9 p3 \! {  G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. p. |- y/ M4 p2 ~3 S& Y5 v4 \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# Q8 |/ T6 L: F) s. d2 [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 M( z0 m" j$ f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% K8 @" O0 F( J8 m) d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

) O6 s* C. c4 k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; W+ [0 z' T# G6 k- l$ Y" w2 ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>