【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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( |& b. E/ U/ @7 a: R/ b歌词我附在后面。
, F) T( S" s, pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- r2 I/ P- T! o+ L! y$ ?, xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; I$ }1 ?# K% fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, ?  i+ k3 }7 w$ C8 ~8 vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; H& M7 a( }" X1 n2 cYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( Z$ l& z$ |7 A; p3 zEvery other word you utter is love
3 ^- J5 Q2 h/ L9 C. Y6 ?: ^1 UI really want to know just how much you love me
/ _3 D. R. F) f* }. SI love you I love you with all my heart
! z2 f9 B0 [( z, r' QNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ p4 V1 E( J& f, H& {7 {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ p6 K5 b- @5 F/ z  CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ L1 o9 I% v' J8 u, {1 O& WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( \0 T% r. X/ N5 d$ C: |With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 e1 I* C1 y* l, x8 t: RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) W- [+ r+ ?1 w7 g; N0 U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# X/ W8 s% J. R; l& G3 z# u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- `4 @4 i% \, ]$ d2 f2 g0 i# v6 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: [% s& c0 H; a: Q7 g& z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) t* E, q$ o1 {3 C+ E/ Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  N( ?! k: }: g8 t6 }" ]6 D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 K- [, U8 f$ B) C5 q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 m( N  X- v: _; z, S( w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! ~) X# B& J4 z7 q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 c5 n( [( b/ E2 @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% y8 u# P1 e: ~6 P6 d! h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" p% D8 W" i$ F7 s8 @+ U( @8 D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 ~7 v1 A4 M6 O" \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* a7 H1 L  A* ^3 d3 n4 B8 x; b: E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% \% i. n! T* E: d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( V! A+ ]9 n' `6 c  D9 x- h+ U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, R, d0 b) m9 s: o% q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  S8 c, \; P( X5 \3 N& d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ [9 l% o) j6 z. O# A- Y+ T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ E6 f9 k* m! x' q' Q7 H9 d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; J7 h1 f4 |/ @, d: N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 e( b# K# M9 L0 r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' Z6 |! @0 {' P) o# G8 D+ B/ w7 j0 r2 ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
& i8 X, D! b  b, l4 ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 x6 L( h, r6 R6 O& d6 j* _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 ]0 U/ g0 H7 @; H5 _! [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 {* V  f: ]% l. f4 L) \% Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- ^0 U- t0 x: [% ]& X; F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, _& J8 c1 t, {: f* U7 f, ]3 g4 |我请你剖开它
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7 N9 z, n! q" C3 o  U5 [& N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 m# H. \0 I0 t" t6 u6 \1 R* P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>