【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 u* r0 q2 }' d% B, ^  W歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 `5 R4 z+ h9 H! u4 BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 g1 Q9 X& [% E$ _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' b( I  O* J% H4 ?* y5 t9 sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 S6 s. l2 k/ F* }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- _+ Y7 T+ q( q$ R. mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 X4 ~6 W8 m" l- z8 S2 i5 HNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 k* M" n- r+ R* n0 G% nI’m still filled with fear
/ {/ H& M) P$ E4 }* }/ L' aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 l% T0 f( ?" r$ j( KI regret not dying
9 R$ N3 a4 c/ a9 U5 C( [3 r6 uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ X& h, ]) M: ?, WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 @3 Z6 \  x8 n& [, m( o* DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 A4 Q$ S2 x# r- i8 x+ t: l' m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: A* V. O! j: G  v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 {" d) y9 w' Z* ]. u- [% H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 s3 o" h; M( A5 ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 f* e1 k) W( W( [% o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 u+ g; X- h0 {! y/ D( ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 q, }# s0 l2 V) Q0 Z2 F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: e' n; s/ ~; i. {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% a5 r/ E8 b+ f1 Q4 j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" b: L" |( f* d7 p. W) J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& `$ A0 p& ?, C  Y/ k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) z" U; c; l6 Z4 l* [- q0 |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" I" ^* Q6 }0 u0 N- l: j7 a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" T- c, f7 ]' G6 R/ N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' }2 }, b5 {: q" {8 E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ a" ?# g7 c2 T% {3 `) X! q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. R; \  D# X% L0 a- A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- O& {0 m, e8 m- o& u6 P" N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! n. V: X, M) A( X( K1 _3 l# U- t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 B' w5 c% _! N9 j. N! `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 T! v8 G' b" r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) I% y1 H7 y; n% F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& a1 w* c4 c2 ^9 ~- W8 Q8 @1 X% z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  U9 A3 c; K) D+ l' p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! K4 b$ o: ~( d: j0 c我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! j5 C! n1 @9 Z( V6 S+ ~2 |. Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>