【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( \% K3 O' n* eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' |1 h1 M3 V+ z. A! {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# h, M0 t2 K0 HYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 S! b8 G2 G8 c( R( PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 d( g9 J$ j9 u% p' \5 nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ c" y; H9 k1 f; I. II regret not dying
8 G) {( s, J: a/ j/ C9 xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, g8 f* T) ^% D8 e( d7 a* ]: H$ TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 d" C2 f  V+ H' q; BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ E! n. P% J- v  E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) S8 W. `) x( P- U& F% ^, _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# n5 S: P' I  ?" O# o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! E, ^+ n& Q$ Y, N8 v. y: l& B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# I/ d2 U4 b( X6 a  w  W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& I' `  j+ P' g' m3 s) j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 C* q6 L% J, ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 T& i. @5 k7 C. m' D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; [! J6 I; V8 p5 U  W) u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 f  T( |$ \: @9 D5 Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ w: W) x/ m4 P/ X1 j<P>你无需担心</P>
5 O; [4 k( e* p0 E4 P9 a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' ^8 e% K% g# T; f4 M& M* @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: x4 o1 T* r9 ]" F3 J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 {' B2 @$ Y7 E2 _; z. v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 y2 b/ p6 v% C' ~9 }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  l! I" X( L. R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 t6 L0 r5 i8 i9 b2 g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- Z. g$ H& n9 _' Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' L- ]0 a- `0 w" {% A$ O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ q7 l6 {8 v) D2 t, Z0 d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 T: n8 p  f4 F; F0 Z" X; `3 l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: S; M  u! j: `<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; Y0 }- T! u& p+ Y' W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 r2 O" h# Y  d4 \- ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 I' h3 g. a, ]9 N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# N/ S0 N+ z& Z- V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) B: H5 m7 Y4 m9 m  ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 s2 ]9 u0 j* i# L7 A  @3 J( b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* x8 _1 T# m) a2 [, @$ }$ t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; k8 d6 Z. z% I  E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>