【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" y: y) D4 q& C4 W3 d  M歌词我附在后面。
0 E# F: X! `1 }# g. rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ s: r( _& y$ N; Q9 R( UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ h; h; \. m4 wWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% T/ n0 F% h' X$ q+ BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ ^8 B, v' X, F: ]0 d/ sYou needn’t fear anything
1 s! D  q! }/ T, WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" q6 A  m) }! n$ @Every other word you utter is love
4 ^& E0 s$ ]8 uI really want to know just how much you love me
; I/ v) T0 i( }9 x1 E7 ]9 R, PI love you I love you with all my heart
& e% ?( \3 [7 s) K+ k4 B1 l% ?5 rNothing can compare to my love
3 Z1 j+ _/ w; r  P8 w+ B2 nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 R. X; T0 }1 w2 k0 @6 \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" ?' o8 N" j- XI regret not dying
  g# D% ^% L$ b+ G% m+ A7 yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! z9 d4 [0 v3 P8 g0 xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: K$ ?! I" ?& T: g% j- a7 h& CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ Z. J9 m4 i# S# z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 r$ Z2 M. Y4 `: l% M0 m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) y. q" P6 n4 T7 L& v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: c6 p( I+ F, n/ x8 P: [) d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! S3 K3 `; G6 x6 M, E" Z% @5 o0 x5 M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 V* s+ _0 x- N$ S4 g  d: `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 f  @5 r* D" a+ d: B  R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% |' u& p$ _. y4 y# O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 w; x; X: |' ?6 |8 f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 U+ r* V7 o7 c+ J- E+ x# x<P>你无需担心</P>
( l$ |- p! I; r! H" T+ S; A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: C) H+ Y% }/ Y- G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  |( ~7 D5 e! ~' J) `& ~$ Q- O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. m9 p/ L' h! E, f! T3 y( w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, S3 e1 e9 _- Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( J2 }' E# h; U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- }4 U) ]) c" m8 x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( [7 [; {" K5 N, q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 ^  V0 V8 ~2 B  l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( E$ [0 x5 ], s2 H6 w6 F7 P& k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' x" v0 K) P  L3 }3 Y" {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 X* s5 x. b+ H8 ^  E<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 n9 r8 C" l( g) t- d' u" I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 y9 N0 ?8 ]! k# Y! s9 t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 o1 R% b! ^+ Q; S0 T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, H. U# A- @% m) n: {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 N6 S, n) V) R* b<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 A5 ^4 d7 a1 j' ]" V. P6 H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 h( W4 Z0 V' @7 S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) `( w0 Q4 G9 p; I1 E  Q! A% `! }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" O& V7 R" j' J4 M# G& G<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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* w- t6 d5 O/ J4 z6 Y2 Z) |! ?7 Y# M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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