【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, Z0 d, T% I4 z! VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* G# X( G+ T7 D$ K( BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 {2 c0 p# r7 sSeeing the sky content with its love
9 j! [9 N; Z8 ~4 \. g. {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 l, j1 W( @0 c0 |3 YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  y% g0 s5 s( t6 v2 {Nothing can compare to my love
& b& V& C* h+ O# g/ L* Y# PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! x# r+ v6 V2 \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 u# N% K4 z' y" _1 VI’m still filled with fear
$ {8 N" j4 R6 G3 Q0 yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  w: w5 S! \# |) _* tI regret not dying
& n3 K; u1 E( nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: \* |" T+ h3 B0 i" eWith such a tongue as yours,
9 F9 @# A! q& w: r& YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, d2 M/ W* A# B+ k2 OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 i$ `& _4 b( {7 ?* d: s2 W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  W! A  \- G* Z4 E# Z+ x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. d, W$ S0 T6 q) c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( p: W3 l% |+ f8 u& t9 }5 l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 K4 i9 k) m7 z7 A- e% M. p* l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% i$ J4 e0 X6 @7 V* V: Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" X/ _1 E: C8 B" b0 v+ k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ {% L3 G( Z" y! @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 c! ^+ J$ S& c+ K3 N2 f# c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 @/ C( i7 i; [. Y6 y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 X6 X$ ]9 B) X* Z6 N2 t8 n, ]" Z: M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, g" z) Q7 t! p3 X% o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! ]8 ?! }9 u* Q4 ~: w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 ~8 n" X4 s) x: {0 H* k: V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ i" q( k' z' O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 ?+ J: g# d; K# v1 X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# h! w( Z5 O: k' ^* V3 C* C2 h) |9 f9 Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 l* Z; d( t+ B& |/ d3 H$ m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, C& r. H! x5 j* s2 e- K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# V$ }/ c8 L, l" y! w! L' ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ {2 t% g6 T# V6 }. t4 g9 Y# h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 }- t* F6 a& X9 m4 z# M+ d/ b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! K0 z  o# M: j, h  ~! V1 y0 t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" E+ [6 b. W( M& b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% U1 U# Q5 m+ r. T1 y8 A' o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. ]! Z( y( F! p: d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 s2 B6 @9 e% l' w* V( q- O, i. }7 H4 P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>