【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 L, j7 o2 G0 `$ g* U歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* q& @' I+ _' Y+ n6 u4 KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# C/ m2 R& S# c8 @3 G+ z6 bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 a" P0 A6 M+ z8 v  qSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 s; i$ l1 {% B/ A: L% l2 L. |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 s0 G/ P8 F& A5 n' `9 n/ GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ U8 x% G8 A% k7 OI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 I' I4 X; K# [0 {+ C8 ?9 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* H+ [1 x& D1 q. PWith such a tongue as yours,
/ n- E& U9 U4 w* ^; B: LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: P+ N2 h! A  EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' H% t$ n9 E$ \3 LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) v; C6 w. t& c  z2 l+ t; d& f+ Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! ?* ~6 o" @& O# D/ v2 N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 S. e+ [$ J8 L$ ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ f, P9 n. m- v' _0 f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  m  C7 Y2 A# }/ x( n/ ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* W' f. S0 r/ Z2 W8 q- r! [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( V' K2 y' W. E) d6 D6 ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ o% T& F, ~: @4 y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 Y8 x3 R" Q; L) Y- c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 B4 G+ B5 @) h" m: M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 C9 c. C2 Y  g+ Y" I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! Q0 t9 K# Y* h, i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 a( y. T7 V) d% q3 H" C. ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- i4 O1 q7 E" I1 ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) s+ I3 `5 z; l+ |/ }2 M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 v' l4 t4 P# U; A- N4 E# T8 W7 t5 F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. e9 e& F" q# K9 J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! @+ z' @7 v; ?& K; J/ ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% @! k4 t' N5 J( a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 u$ z- s1 [9 a2 r0 t3 E. L' [9 B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 a' B& _$ p  L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 b- `4 u5 `, ?3 J1 z+ J* n我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 c1 }# s. V! N" K  c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>