【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 v# R1 v, z8 V0 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- p& d8 I8 ?; N: R1 o- O" kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: i" {, y, e  N* x, v' B( C2 sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 h# w+ H# A0 G6 iSeeing the sky content with its love
6 O& f* o6 Y5 Q( p7 e+ a( d/ EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) d7 d! r+ K# t! @0 OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; x4 S" {$ e- ~7 J- [4 \8 u9 }9 d# yI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ x5 U! F$ G& T5 k! X7 L. `% I; E2 ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 D$ C* l" o, A, II want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ T, K( m9 B' N- p8 LWith such a tongue as yours,
& [4 d/ [  a9 d9 ?5 h# OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ f7 E# a1 f3 Q  B& ?0 {+ ]6 uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 s1 D- @) J2 I! URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& z0 j# B! E8 z" g+ W( ?. y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 _  S% T. n" i5 h7 l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, y$ K: A4 N5 Z1 L! r* S' ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* @* P( k" z# u$ ^0 o& ?  K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! X6 d" x) y2 {# `: q% P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 I. \  M* M  V! g0 z6 G) _- y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 J: |  h- K! a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& M! T; V% H3 ^6 [1 v2 l9 S- ~1 [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. K; U: w5 C& [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 p- O3 J8 j! \4 i$ T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# b/ P: F  s  \6 p5 o( Y! J$ ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  _1 g# d0 B0 Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& }9 t  ^+ {  X+ n7 c0 P* J/ x$ M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 l5 z8 Y# g' v5 i5 t' X/ q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( [- S2 M( I3 ~: @; ~. w( {: D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 P( F: @$ q9 D' X+ Z% k7 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 S9 b; m) {- M' J9 w& |6 Y! e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 t% A& [: O3 ?. B. M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ u! U' a  l8 h+ i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( k4 s* [9 W2 i/ F' E6 {& M<P>I regret not dying</P>
% ?" V) M/ C0 l4 T/ {8 m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& _# t% a( N; ]* R7 {, P5 Y+ F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; N1 O( }5 o4 j) B5 s7 _  C, r8 y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 a& f6 U  k! D! p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! \, f: E0 z! i& X7 i0 M1 {% g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ h0 Y# I+ d* ]% H& @我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, u, q8 T) j( y, o9 ^; ~' U0 h: _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>