【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
, d) J1 n! F% x, F" i% NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ O; @$ r: h8 O7 W; `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" h" ?: L+ f! j. m0 ~8 LSeeing the sky content with its love
0 \, A7 F# \4 MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* M2 H: ^, W5 s  X0 |1 C' F( ^1 ^9 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* S2 ?8 Q; t1 q  j2 W; w: XEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 H2 f$ V/ s: H6 ?& dI love you I love you with all my heart
* s8 d( ^& f/ t, fNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* y, i2 i! R; k$ S. A* z! x* dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& X( y9 L" y' N# sI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ X! X" f( M# i1 C/ J, {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 p+ U/ a$ ~9 W8 e7 t- s+ fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ r3 I( H# R9 t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, Y0 G5 O" l* m1 j9 q. @3 a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 g0 ?* J5 e( g8 i+ O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ h4 q' m* {7 t8 m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. m+ c( t  F1 X/ o# w# N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% F- A5 k& O/ S% u% m0 r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 |) X2 u+ H, G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! n. @( [; I6 F- [+ N6 R3 m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) D: K. i6 t% F) S  G( B1 {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, D" \( ]; J% a<P>你无需担心</P>
% X. V! ~/ T$ ?) Y0 U+ O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ p7 U' {/ s- ]: w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% N) Z; j9 O+ a% j" b6 e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& p' [+ v: b+ b; _1 a9 S5 T/ O, a6 `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ }$ |7 u  A9 Y7 O* w! h, V- g; j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 M; e5 Q: c7 ?8 h6 _- r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 d0 A5 i( H# X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 {4 A; q8 L5 m2 F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ x1 Z  ?" E' k5 R( T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 \: ?% s4 s6 M( N  M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) S" l" m4 s( U1 R0 y0 H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ D, ^' ~# |) p( d# Z) i, A) S& g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 N# W% y! z9 D5 K+ W9 d/ M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& a# R0 c; ?0 M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% c- s0 {) P( s3 q9 ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! {3 N; W( E6 B3 Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( M2 G5 K, r. b* B我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>