【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ X; Z( v% N6 j; i歌词我附在后面。
$ \  {7 z. h( ]* K- f$ ?1 fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  r) x1 j1 a3 {, XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" D7 v, ^6 B9 D8 GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 L* Q* ^5 e+ r1 E8 lThe sky is happy down to its soul
: y1 `, k5 b$ g, C- n% A& BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: R' w" s& f+ r2 v7 MEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 _! k- |% N2 m! M& oI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ Y' @) _9 _) B" E( r/ H) T& l9 @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 }2 E$ x( @( k9 h' Z5 DI want so much to see inside your heart
1 J# L0 y8 a; V! `! Y$ b1 `) Z/ h7 ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ H& Z1 ~5 I3 }, @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- x8 I1 o) v8 y4 E/ ^( `5 OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& B3 T& \2 ?/ w, f& I- O4 UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ ]4 O2 J% T/ x/ X+ X0 s& u0 c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 z, H' @9 `0 v6 A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 X# z( _! h% Y- w; W1 P3 I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. t  f& J6 w! [- \- o- p& A6 H% P" K; O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 L! A( {! A/ {/ I, D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: j7 r( Q( L/ d0 ~: n. w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 |5 }* t6 o$ b! F* {1 x' Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* [7 D+ l) U) Z% M4 T/ o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& R5 [: v& x2 n7 T/ E) J2 s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' l+ N7 D$ ?. c3 E* s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ U; \) ?1 Z) ]( c! p3 E- Z- i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 _5 W7 t- N4 q/ W% {% c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 G& `( W; S% }  d& r: n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ @. h+ W- z- a9 q! {" h# F, U; j, u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ l2 J. T, l5 j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 a: L* m, [& ~- q: M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 X, m1 ~& C8 n( C/ p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 g& Y1 ~' b( R# b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% F8 n+ _' ~  y0 k4 D; f9 @/ w# w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* }8 T6 y  o8 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" e" n+ u+ V& J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# H8 d' P! b% H. P+ ]1 j2 x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 a. C/ g9 T- ?& A1 E9 e$ [7 i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& L1 ^# e7 p$ g8 {( t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( U& z1 W  H  @<P>I regret not dying</P>
) C- t/ W& P  P: W8 v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) p& B4 i8 O+ y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' C& u  y" s5 m, l% Y6 |# Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 \3 \& U4 X& I1 L  ~  u+ e0 O. Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( F1 ?3 F8 V  [' C. c( H% i1 Q$ x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 W% @0 E: i6 L2 g% a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! j7 K/ H  \9 z6 |( v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 H' X5 j+ ^8 z  ~1 k3 A& v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
2 o# \5 p+ Q7 s# P0 \; E0 S. J% z* d
我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>