【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
* Z6 x0 h* m# v8 v4 L4 pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- P  u- P2 x4 k( J) t1 U* K0 rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 {" E1 S' V7 Z" tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  \+ W$ J9 x' n& s- O" ~. bThe sky is happy down to its soul
. }  `" p$ d: ^, |( c2 I9 C5 |7 @With the moon kissing it every night
/ k9 _* p" X+ Q. }  c  ^' a9 \& YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; C% _  w9 n# W8 mYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) R7 j) W( y# P+ P  N$ S7 u0 |& }Nothing can compare to my love
, N8 G2 T# {- t# PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 t& d$ }) c# S6 o+ z5 EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ Q: k  W: r" h/ N% {/ f2 J6 NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: t1 A5 C8 {0 T8 c& V: ^0 oWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ r# o* w: J0 x3 O3 N. U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# a: L" k: \" S" b4 H( X' I+ D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' b9 F3 U& t0 D( S" r5 f8 t3 z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( d0 d; R% _# b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; A8 P! }5 D  b1 G" w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 N2 ]+ `9 z  M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- i% H( m8 e, p" O) d" V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. o1 s7 F3 R2 b: Q9 T9 `. Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' ~* `/ H" j# D2 x: }2 G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. z6 |. j5 r/ j2 ^5 X0 f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 I, V7 O7 u1 S/ V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 y$ b$ R0 r! B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ i: f% e" S5 ?$ c+ b; W( g, s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! R& T0 |3 F/ t+ Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 b" H9 n; n1 v( @& `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& Y3 i2 P4 ?6 e# M4 n  R: b5 y- S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 n( @5 h2 `# B' K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ ^& J# k2 F: o! [0 x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( Z6 Y2 {6 ]8 K3 K+ ?7 D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 C) O$ p- L3 {) g! r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ ], M* \' E4 W& e; x! g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 Q- c1 Y& ?0 x4 n. P: r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, e6 C9 y+ W6 B3 ^/ h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 M" c. E' I0 p3 b. z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# ^# ]4 ?& `1 ^8 C' W3 @6 h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>