【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 W+ G" R  M. zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# \& G$ O* q& I4 LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( k# [/ Q$ m3 Q  _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 h& A0 G4 ~+ v' BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) I+ `4 W5 T+ W+ [7 B3 w, xYou needn’t fear anything
6 c7 o: D9 I4 mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; |* _$ S1 R, xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" f" b4 n: b: I, M: q0 x0 ~- r7 qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) r' S+ a3 c. j8 I- xI want so much to see inside your heart
8 t5 ?8 r+ i0 d% m( fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 D& E% t: @7 \) k$ b9 VI’m still filled with fear
. i, K$ R7 ?1 W% }- g5 j* zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: R3 A5 O) q! ]9 u: v4 Y' I9 jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% A; y. G, B! k; `6 uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: p  q! p# A1 I: d3 d$ S5 OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- u+ _  x- r! M6 X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. f$ r8 C( E3 a8 V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 f. I+ H' S6 j* ]- l, {; R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; p8 A  ~' J% V: k9 n$ L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ X" m! i7 K* x& [  ?3 z* @$ r. I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" Z/ b# z% b! r1 x2 ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' E" O6 J/ Z& C3 a4 p! [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 }! E% ]! |- \. j6 I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, E( p1 [  Z. I8 O1 V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 K! j& o! N; g1 |$ S. h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- E# M, n1 L9 U- R( p- o3 s1 q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 b; |. b8 B9 y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 T9 q; ]) i6 c/ K  i3 @7 S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 x& v- x8 u. S6 z4 i9 S$ E<P>你无需担心</P>
: u$ A- m* G+ ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 ^% L- F- H. m4 F7 {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& I+ D3 @9 m) i: E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 ~/ V2 S0 j, S; w" d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: f3 k7 E7 C, P& @9 Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' k2 ]1 K% K- ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) m& r' x; f" j2 D+ i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 U! {+ s2 \; Z, [<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 e& y% R- v; y, b: M% Y, f% \- n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 Z, j+ X! o+ z8 ~* T( M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) e- n8 W4 C( h" e& Q+ F1 u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# g- U; h- \. K) M0 u  G+ {3 V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* V0 l9 \% I, Q3 W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; \# Z/ P3 Q9 H5 G3 T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 T+ \$ l" c2 f5 {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% s; c: t0 D% ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 i. v& q  p9 `: F9 d) U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, a  n4 ]9 S1 I/ K4 ~1 o; u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 ?5 G7 x& C/ _' }3 M2 L! I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: F/ V) f# z5 u. G3 Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. d+ Q( S/ }8 D2 R! u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

# ^3 M$ G- `: [0 V7 O/ a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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