【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ ]  ?& Z3 D& p+ c, l+ X% _The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ A( M9 L0 |1 [: s+ HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% t8 Z/ q$ }( r6 }0 w; U% Y+ kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 A' z0 m% N4 N$ T+ K; wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( Q( @! G8 X$ d+ c& C* ]% E+ j$ fWith the moon kissing it every night
# ?& w7 Q- D& O+ P7 `& B7 r* ~Seeing the sky content with its love
4 t. y. W1 y3 E8 N7 g4 ]" fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) T( M0 S7 _9 |5 ^& TYou needn’t fear anything
1 O7 M5 C; P5 v$ V! I" x' q9 s2 jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" s! N9 L' A. t; b( K9 nEvery other word you utter is love
1 e% w* Y9 F9 T1 h0 EI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ J" x4 a8 M; y" M% h  xNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. z. ]1 J6 v8 z% F, ]0 {& b! P  C  p" sI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& p: V* f( d8 x0 d, }% `- bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 i* O5 @  ~, U1 a0 E. O' pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ j6 e; [# y! c0 ^6 |0 aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 `6 t, o- B* ^& m$ N9 g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 Q! u: v4 M5 S! i* Q6 K/ Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 @* Y7 K+ ]& E' N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 F, z0 B, ]6 h5 T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 h+ i* t1 v; t% y+ ]/ D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 F/ h( i% G! O, s4 ?: X<P>你无需担心</P>
2 k$ R9 D, _5 f6 I1 e% o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' f2 w: b5 n# w- N+ g! b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 Y8 W1 e  V8 o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& _+ t$ c1 `7 ]7 J/ Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 m2 Z6 Y5 D* V8 D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  t% j, I4 i) z/ a; j. g  d# |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ q7 ]# V9 K% r  n9 p; O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ I# J5 s; _6 W' D+ e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 l6 Q/ v$ R# U- I6 b7 `& u: B- O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: I' ~& A2 a4 n' h* P. ^' S6 G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 Z) Y! [. ]9 f- U, u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ R. D) v/ D0 u7 Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( f6 f+ k. ~9 _9 @# s  A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 c: ~! E; J% Z1 }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# s% h' v5 Q! O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 M  c: R3 B; L5 Y: {' L" w3 p4 |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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