【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. x5 j5 N: s. ]! G) e5 S( b0 o" fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 D  f; q) [6 u6 cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; h$ `  y1 F& zThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ a5 C; |; O& E  v8 ?5 J7 nWith the moon kissing it every night
( j5 U% z; G+ U5 I, V0 a$ V- T: ZSeeing the sky content with its love
4 G5 h3 t& U! O  _; M9 h# {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 x, E! y4 I; {+ `) f4 \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ J. z3 g/ h. [0 dEvery other word you utter is love
# Q9 g! K9 w0 ^I really want to know just how much you love me
  }2 @! D* X3 x8 D- J8 _4 kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ g3 E6 L, s- p0 BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ j1 P8 s+ p: G8 qI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ |4 s0 ~) T9 H0 t& b6 EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ O" V5 u2 Q/ uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ _; B0 H' `/ ^- \- Q$ }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* B5 m! M4 e+ }5 D8 u' u( b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! K6 O6 c( e9 s9 `2 g; D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 ^- H6 u  j& N8 L# [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ A" P' K; O  ^( Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! S7 ], c0 ^# s  T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 M+ e) i8 B$ b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, N6 T' k) b! c% G/ w. M3 w& l$ ~" {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' m' f3 _- |8 _% p3 e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ y# G) j+ ^/ Y% g+ a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# T" ]: Z) W7 r: `7 s5 a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 I# f  D/ b0 B7 E5 b: V/ Q! s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 R% g4 F# B/ U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ s) n/ g& S$ V8 d6 w: X6 X- g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 K" @) R' M2 ^0 h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 ?/ z& _& K0 b& U) @9 d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, g/ Z" q! E  p6 |- x% G4 m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 ^+ J- K- F, E; ~# d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! G+ c3 L9 h, V3 f; y: {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) P( q$ [  ?/ e" O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& @0 ~& S& P8 w6 B# x  E8 V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 w" u. x5 ~3 H0 A/ E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ I9 \( F# w# C) j& B% N3 }0 p8 D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; [: f" |  K8 z$ K/ w1 y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 a: {) p/ I' ^6 ~5 t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 f8 \4 E! X$ q0 F0 c" v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& L( r6 m9 D0 f7 k/ i# K; z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ i  Z' S0 z! B; J# ^2 U. d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 ~, S' s# `+ U8 [( _6 j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 B+ ^/ P  K5 I! m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* f0 F0 m# p1 r0 G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>