【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& u" v! `' g; zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% k* K* M, H7 e$ E3 x+ jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. j6 H( l6 [  _. }. `- Q+ }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& b" q0 M( z5 p! k) L$ MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ \' I6 n8 a0 U0 R" R) l1 x' RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ J; `* o! R7 W+ ~; c  O% {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) g( s# [3 w& r, ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' ~8 J% Q! ]+ W( B, Z+ QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 A9 ~4 ]1 O& Q8 m% R4 y1 `5 m) gI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. e3 H+ G( i' a: j. q4 n/ fI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 e1 q& v- g& }) h3 xI regret not dying
/ p; x5 q6 W; t# d( ]$ DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 W& h0 H, x! r( l7 BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: [- v$ U! ~" c! W& R3 z6 V1 n9 wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 Z, P. H, _$ k$ l. B! @& VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 \5 U  p4 Y# ^4 J' Q+ K! L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% x% t; w" e9 {1 `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 a6 p' F4 v# L  p- O/ z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) y2 G  K% X' J9 H' `0 I0 _+ ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- L' e5 c9 E# {8 a; F! D3 l1 \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 j. @9 M" `- a, Y3 f* U5 G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 Y; E' F" [1 m: X' z" ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 R  [# o5 ?1 L! W9 ^% g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: O1 l% D+ X- J9 l" S9 K4 Z& d" ^<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ N/ k9 [2 d5 z# J) U5 J* u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" W2 h8 t2 b5 W) X* W& L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( R$ [" w4 w4 I; f* k: o0 @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; a9 f! e- y+ y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ F' C; q* G& |2 i! D1 W" w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: L0 j" b! n6 T0 K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 b0 E. {" [6 s+ @1 V- E4 t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ Y  f/ |" L, g0 ~4 ~( N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  w" W2 x% x* |+ q. e: w3 |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 m9 _+ N6 b1 M& T$ b- Q0 L7 L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 V) R2 i- E2 c. o. i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' ]5 s, a+ L5 n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- I2 S  L: D% z5 @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 I5 @6 y6 }# R2 N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) w- |0 S8 [3 P9 |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# f* Y& J2 t  h* }6 b我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>