【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 j* p6 C' `/ i4 q歌词我附在后面。
" l2 A1 }. ]( a7 ^! ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 c1 F6 N: q5 X0 r9 [$ r% wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. |$ s- h0 e. f2 @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# f+ |% a1 _4 _% XThe sky is happy down to its soul
) j9 y. B& Z, ]+ _With the moon kissing it every night
# c: F& m# D. n& C3 wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' Q; u! w) F5 v* FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 M4 ~+ _) B4 YI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  {' s' V" b/ SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 p8 r0 `- E5 \! G( P* z( ?I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 Q% a5 n/ ]7 oI regret not dying
) Y' k1 Q0 r4 t  u- t  O; II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 K  H! Y) p- ^8 w' f. HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' ?( o7 ]$ H) f5 W: A7 B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" q5 f8 J' x9 a2 Z* N5 j$ ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 R4 I, L, R3 S' s  @# v! D9 C# p  C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 v8 I% t1 W! N+ z% p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% `: k& E7 x" m1 T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 s, [4 q' I9 e, ]7 y( K0 f$ n5 U* d& V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 `$ L4 B9 \% x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 a+ S' {" z, k) U4 G1 y( z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 R' Y( I9 {  _" O$ @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 U% ^) v4 d2 ?2 Z( h8 I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 }) B0 e: a) ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 O* {" U3 Q/ X8 ~( N; y) v' a4 I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! R9 o6 w3 N7 m& i0 m; J6 {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 e1 x4 p% K: F- r$ F8 Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 W) r* W8 l9 C" j9 C" r: j4 M; d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. p) ~$ |/ B# K1 E& h- H+ I( Y3 i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ W: h) L2 n3 f. n0 C: Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, y# z/ {1 r( P. t: a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- h4 h; [6 a$ C( b' f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 _+ W+ [& T3 d: U3 Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& [* X) x  E$ k" i. U# J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, Y. g- p4 s, c2 D- C0 x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* U4 `; N! y8 G6 H. j' K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 D2 R, L! r8 E; H<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* q: E4 ?$ J8 n6 Y2 P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 r. Z# f1 I7 u  r- u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 u( }$ a4 e; s2 j' A* b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- \1 v1 P! W% B" O0 ?+ g2 ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! n7 q) k, D# R( D" f- S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 y5 ~* h) H$ W) ~* M& o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, z/ |' A8 K  T5 X$ F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 O+ E7 ~: T; h9 t. Y" |% L# \; O<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! H" ?" g6 z8 I2 ^$ c' A我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>