【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 L' ^9 o4 U5 H5 A: jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ x/ X- {, q2 G+ T5 _4 _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" ?9 Q* y* U0 ^8 n4 v/ U8 [The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ d1 N* M" \. Y$ R% f- o' ^You needn’t fear anything
, R( b/ B( Q0 L# b) ~0 JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! p& E- X* B; ?, |" j4 G( |I really want to know just how much you love me
9 {0 p+ C+ X6 B7 `% {I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 L9 s; ~* ^# eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( r+ [- S3 y/ x# g) eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% K1 _: N7 L8 k2 G1 JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 g  s; C0 o* y0 DI regret not dying
/ X7 D4 a+ h  w, o5 _8 qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 U' [) }9 _$ \7 d9 X: zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* b! Q& G. B0 q, Y8 f2 j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; `! I# }, w/ \3 w. u' `) a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 `. A. w9 x# b( s* g. \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ Z5 }* ?: x2 O. }* V* \" y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 {% F! e7 f& u5 [* Q9 U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: L. Z. p0 Q  e2 B# V. W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% }* y& H+ L. d" w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! H- s: P+ ?" [' F0 a$ l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 _, b0 M# }" f( M  {# a4 w: F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" z% ?$ V/ B7 W9 ?# w( m7 T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ f+ @4 t& S4 g: ~2 Q+ u- W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) B+ o4 v2 r: s$ O9 e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: Q( ^, o( A' D" z( N9 Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 }( \2 U. g' ^- W0 B  g4 N8 F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' a- w) j1 I( i) a, G% \7 C; X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  W/ u$ e0 Y/ ~9 N4 @/ c0 Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 k7 }. f( s) D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ b4 P7 V9 }+ T3 k$ U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" K( b5 _9 [0 H6 |) L4 `<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 n4 y# P7 X5 H, C( H: w/ G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: B0 A( K0 W: M% y: l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- B$ i- }8 i2 K, \$ P( x$ b; n7 e; V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  f3 t. Y: w( c6 H* `) p( C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 f" X. S# x0 q& Y" w" h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; q' O# G6 W3 k: r, B% U% q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 |% u4 H# q- B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" ]( O. x' m' Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ U0 `5 J5 x: z3 V) w% k2 U我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ b2 }; {) ~" j6 z) H+ Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>