【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 G2 k7 j0 O, ~8 ]7 i" a. _/ iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! h4 b: T  [1 d& M) ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 f! H" ^( p2 K  tThe sky is happy down to its soul
* A  Z! A  ~! b/ E: h3 XWith the moon kissing it every night
# `0 R- Y& b) RSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 e" P2 i1 k3 _* l+ h* HI really want to know just how much you love me
$ F1 z! E  k6 nI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 d  ]6 ]$ k4 x' d4 x  f1 T' sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& e2 V! A" A+ ?+ M, j' Y5 X7 pI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 n) j: I. j( ]7 s5 `8 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
* T* W& S* K2 ?# n: SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 ]( u9 i& @: Z& e  B9 vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 c- B& R& S7 `8 F' U6 T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: ^! j8 H* Z0 w/ V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' `, o- s( ~" G; o5 k: v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" [" `$ B2 f. t* `& b- l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. B; g1 }& b$ s" Q5 l$ R8 _; `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( u$ z6 c. X+ h7 j3 K% z. i6 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 M* z! W0 y: G1 D6 N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, }5 o4 G: o. O- l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 A& R, B; P7 i! a/ {5 T* ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& i& K* Z0 M2 z( n8 m9 `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 H5 [  i# W* O! Z8 O( G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ f# E" P5 Y6 Y$ u" P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: o( U2 w& ?# Y& w" n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 C" B0 o; h' _& g5 k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ Y1 a/ r6 j" E7 Z8 M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  H) M( K9 G# {+ U" q+ f/ N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ K6 d; G0 A7 E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 `3 l3 Z) `1 L5 c. e0 ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; D2 E& ~4 ?+ h$ u* }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# p7 o% q7 t" A2 o我请你剖开它
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, w" ?7 o+ J' D+ e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ G5 T& y  R8 z6 b3 v2 R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>