【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' |8 D8 Q& v, E6 J1 }# S0 x3 @& BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# o! ]" q. T/ V6 F% Y9 T- mWith the moon kissing it every night
* }5 O) S1 s  k0 t: ?Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. g+ v& G2 S, s: k  f+ _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( P1 s' y7 d- O8 d9 h/ t; VI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. T4 O) H! h2 r4 ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% {  ?! T- `4 W0 kI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 m* c; E5 J# w" q8 i, R! O- H; qWith such a tongue as yours,
) j8 h7 M" x) x5 E% d  |' a8 dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 F1 ]$ y+ n: E. [! AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' b1 e* W8 Z/ f% K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, @# [1 g, D" B/ r# o+ Z; x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 B. X$ ?- B. U- r4 N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. D# I* n# C; o) u# o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" e$ x  M. l8 F, j6 h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' K2 m& h  ]  I4 {) T+ u( ~3 j* {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 Y9 n9 I4 R* d- k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 m3 A* M; M7 l3 l! _3 f9 s8 X0 D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: b* d" W7 B+ }3 i" r' C7 k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' y2 e0 G" {( s# S9 P. g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. o% W: a9 L- M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 J# c4 J8 T2 U% X8 Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) f- [% A, o+ s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( `2 l& z6 Z( h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 K; z9 P" M7 I3 M# ]* ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% f: s. |6 u! W0 B; N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) X9 I3 i6 l# e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, H+ }+ O2 L  N( _/ o2 U6 l2 A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; v  i5 f7 }$ q* m3 ]1 Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 B7 C& P/ P$ h2 [8 r5 x+ U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 Y# y3 A% O6 N6 ^; t+ T2 _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 T% n& [8 ?& N, {8 e4 ]8 R4 A* C, _- N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* ~9 M$ }% x% j; P: y. o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 x- u, x( ^- z5 h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 D! ]+ I) R+ }- C' M7 W' G我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>