【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! c( V$ l4 l2 F歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 ~& Q; E4 [$ [  Y6 j) wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) A% z: J4 M2 \  w2 p1 O8 G  y' b( xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# ?; a6 m, l' d4 D5 {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 k, r6 S2 T, a  K% ?) X* KSeeing the sky content with its love
3 L7 ~6 N2 M. X, {  }9 @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 R& W2 [+ N& G  x3 R9 LYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ m. O9 S+ X. b& F  K+ T' YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 E, H' Q& h3 D9 g: @8 TI love you I love you with all my heart
/ b, k! X; f. u- z- Y: Z8 LNothing can compare to my love
/ [8 u+ s' R* x- d# z8 P3 mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) }' Y  b( B& _8 I$ t9 |1 b1 M/ hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 r* N# t  B* q, l! Z8 a1 }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% P6 ?/ l, o+ s/ \- r2 t: dI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 `  |& \0 z" A3 o( P2 ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 N+ a) @2 ^2 M8 |, h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 _: G# g5 [0 _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 R  m/ r6 |4 \# I1 {; D/ y; v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) d4 l' U+ g; ~1 w: I  W% s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 [& `1 A+ g' d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) F0 ?0 G: q2 p1 O2 h0 T7 i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 @' h  A" A& z' _0 Z0 k; a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ N% p+ D$ H7 J2 [2 m1 J; r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ j1 n: }" q1 O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: Q) O8 q3 y. F( F% H$ N4 N+ P) i' v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ N, S$ C. n# D7 l. `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 ?. x; Z' ?  n6 r5 f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- e, Q; x: s. o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 m" R, y' q2 P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 K) j( H, L' s: C8 s: Z5 T. I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 a. _5 |$ `4 V  p& Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! f& Q- Z5 r- K+ o& S; \: g) l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' M) `3 C& ?! G, K' s6 G! B$ D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# d8 ~1 g  ^8 p2 H<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 \. A3 p8 ]: d# h- n4 X* a, {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 u2 V$ D: A% o& Z  a* |" J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' K" n5 M7 \" Q6 W6 P7 d& C0 E1 O8 T+ z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 e! L1 O  C( y  M6 k" U3 t$ d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( F! p  O$ C% l* z: K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 q5 q5 r, G8 L5 l9 }( b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- L5 n; _0 i) U0 H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# y/ i. b+ c4 O5 F  K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 b5 v3 W7 v* E1 [<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ W- _% O( a) y& C我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>