【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ F0 X6 |! A# q  b歌词我附在后面。
# c9 c/ P) b* T8 l4 bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 |2 L6 d) b+ k9 {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ ~+ M: Y, z  u  K; D8 n; hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 o  L  L; I" ^* y' }The sky is happy down to its soul
, [3 q6 p& Y6 W1 \* Z- YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  I% L6 V1 r) B6 [; e. ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 t: i8 a/ F8 x/ F( INothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ \) x4 T) X8 w0 X7 V9 k  v( BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 o- p% R% `. u5 n! H; gI want so much to see inside your heart
* B$ E. i0 \' c2 z& j+ D' `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- J1 T- T, `/ g2 k. o$ D4 D, D7 O+ g( `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 D6 X" d8 ]1 @# N/ |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' g5 z: \4 ~0 h$ c! U+ wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 M9 x3 |' }  s( K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  W6 f2 G" t, c$ d) A0 u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- f6 ~- s% F# M! g- j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 t7 P5 b8 D1 ]# u4 D  c$ o9 T# s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ \9 X, x( B' h7 x7 y3 h$ p1 q2 q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: ?5 D. f* B: q8 o- x: S( {+ f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* z. O- H5 M, v3 `, L6 l* v/ A& D# ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  @5 F8 m# a- D. g, S; @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' v# W9 d3 \- v  i( D% i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 {2 a; r% Y8 R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# o6 n: \% r8 n5 U* J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 }* _5 r; v* q, l3 Q& y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 M; r. g1 k; L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) Q" H9 P1 t) A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 u* A4 S6 E( U- s! t& \. S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, c: r+ \" H! E( G1 H9 L' ?4 L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 e8 c/ h+ h  N- j! D# e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, O* d. ?9 y+ w  ^" A* v* {9 f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 m5 w' o& ]6 P, ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" v7 k) f9 O6 I  T& S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ x# l2 Q+ [$ o$ ~1 o2 Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  |$ b2 }4 W* v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 v; ~. R! ^3 Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 a& s9 i. }2 I( K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ c7 g: b* H$ t8 d3 ?9 {9 [+ i0 S我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# }3 P# \' a# q8 _: Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>