【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 M6 K3 C- E$ E% p8 q9 G* O1 L3 BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 z7 g3 y1 }$ S( o, @; X; }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( L5 a( t9 v7 E6 a3 |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( [2 D5 p# F/ O7 TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 K, y- C3 E" H4 p$ i8 x' HYou needn’t fear anything
& _1 S2 n8 M2 J) T1 VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- ]7 @3 b6 e7 ]% N& nEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, k7 B% X7 @6 w) ?9 j2 dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: |2 C( `5 D9 a0 QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# D8 Z! }2 O2 J. d3 q  @8 f9 y7 KI’m still filled with fear
" l' z+ w" O$ A, cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: y- i! A6 j/ K0 ^, \" e) I5 @6 yI regret not dying
7 }! F  l8 i1 ^0 _7 w1 F% FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& J- n" j! o: F3 QWith such a tongue as yours,
- v0 @: h$ A  [/ o5 x# @5 {3 bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 Z6 N; A9 _5 n5 O* c$ `1 t2 WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% e1 A; G$ B4 k" ?/ F2 I6 N( |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* N' Z' {9 d7 K4 A% M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! r' r' P2 w* R) s7 Q0 C3 l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ Y. P; _& l* ^- p% ]/ |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 p: E3 t* R7 F6 o3 z' g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 d5 s% ^+ ]/ [, l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 s4 S2 f+ {$ `& Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' o( S  _/ k% W& k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 b/ Y0 [( x5 W7 Z$ l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( v  S9 P$ `. D" L, B" @1 z! l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 I/ T+ H+ ]( w) y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ x! G5 _/ n0 m: u0 ]/ e  O9 X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ w4 ~, G& w% b- O6 f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ ~; o( d5 i, A5 D6 m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 S, |9 H3 {% Y. ^1 w+ v8 X- t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 b6 L, K# a1 [# }8 K4 o: F/ W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  l& ~) x4 y/ |* b% `9 H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( w# J$ F9 q4 V$ S8 S& C, Q/ r+ [+ _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( X" ~& l! h" }5 o9 O5 T9 |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 H- D) t, x8 U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  W* U$ u9 K8 _* t9 M! G; h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 Q5 q, m# X9 r. }) O, s" g- L<P>I regret not dying</P>
" s1 u* j3 m3 ]! [4 b% {# ~7 v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) n( q! U1 \$ o# b. L3 B7 S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 P7 l' D- v6 b3 |3 a4 l8 b' o9 G9 `( |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 l2 j' K. d1 h* C' h6 H' T- b1 c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 a1 K2 U. j; I; I1 V5 O/ [( i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 Q' ]9 D$ d8 e$ ]8 t: v# o: Q% D- m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) ~* ^6 l% G5 S1 Z6 v0 q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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' c4 [& Z0 X5 X1 i7 k1 n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, I- i$ ~5 y5 ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>