【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' }* p/ w. {8 r# w1 L3 ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
) v; @3 z! y, S6 h! y/ N, V" r$ r) _) fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  a$ g4 S; D- _With the moon kissing it every night
: S+ \" @8 w" ~6 `* g6 mSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 z( h( Z3 x9 ~% K( \* ]+ k0 z; eYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) z" U, ]; E# T  q( ~* TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" `3 p; Z; D" [I want so much to see inside your heart
/ Y, A% u! |/ C! S1 pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 q) h0 O3 z) `, l5 C2 FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  w! N& Q( j5 `9 |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" O3 i' ]3 ?8 H1 W0 X  L, TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! m4 q. Y+ M9 t* u3 W. c/ m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# s- V7 J; h1 W3 C6 P# [% X, b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  {6 S3 I/ m3 v8 b0 y* B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' ~, g: n) R- q( X" W2 H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. u' m; C/ S: b) e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% ~" R! ^" n: k- a) }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 o2 M+ V3 K) K: l5 Y3 I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 K( j. Y. |) D3 S& d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: M7 }, [& q7 I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 e* u7 L. x0 H- v! v% J, ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. P5 U7 c( G$ v* r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 _1 y5 X: A- n( ~! f1 `2 y) O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 U, T7 a7 C, e1 b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# u* y; s; G! n: V/ b* `$ j+ K' a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' y5 h' c  Z# P( g" O4 P% q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, Z* X6 B" T: k/ s7 F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 C2 O9 w4 L& d" p! o2 |* u( b- p1 s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 L6 Q; U2 M" d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 X5 x1 N, e+ y6 h) t- e9 ^" `" R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! x9 [5 u7 {  C/ _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% m; G, ]4 A+ i5 V- L7 t. G7 u- k5 `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 [6 G: O4 U, G5 o  X我请你剖开它

& F  _7 c9 f- A0 K; n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>