【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: U# @( `8 e6 [! D+ z( n3 GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( L/ S( X% P/ M: h. W  hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" B( H! R% C, P/ h8 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 F! e# z; M. c6 A6 ]With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; K/ r* P' v* y2 RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; i% q( y8 x4 T% [7 G3 gI love you I love you with all my heart
* i# n" e5 d8 ?3 a% D9 ~/ _Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: T$ W% D/ }1 F( S: V6 aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ i; s7 E2 p: M% v" N# a& BI want so much to see inside your heart
: w" o+ a- r$ \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, o8 L# A: J( v! [5 X; aI’m still filled with fear
6 o# k/ V* G, G# \( u7 VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ D  |( g3 B: D7 v! ^I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! T' r9 W6 v$ C5 o. d, V2 iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; D. b  u  ~+ R* X: _  h- D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) J5 A$ A9 l( ^/ [( |0 U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ v/ X3 x" \. o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 o% X2 b4 E* w* L  v) \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" @- v% _' t6 H6 T( d) z) }, i; L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: n; S( m& l2 S1 ~4 V0 E: ?1 U+ e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( U/ t" V. C0 t& q# ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. Z3 o4 U% H2 ~/ d! W; t6 o% B8 u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 ?( f0 H2 |' i/ K0 X% z( P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& i4 }! f3 ^5 J# h  }4 ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# F7 f* L5 D7 e( A1 `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( U0 m  \( q' `& Z9 X' O* q" t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' f, |* e+ ?/ a6 b3 I$ z; ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ h  ~& L  A8 r% s. w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 Q4 D7 V# y/ K9 u/ z/ _% K) Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. P; c, a0 z: O* l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 X" K* Q: P4 ~8 n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 O$ R3 Q* I4 |3 f2 U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ P! f4 D* d3 Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) K# i( M# N' I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* L  z* m# O+ |/ Q5 P9 h9 u' n& w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 O$ }9 T7 y4 \+ v: g+ o# `; e5 n<P>I regret not dying</P>
  V8 A1 J- b; q7 k% y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  t4 n) p  ~. t; @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 Q+ E6 Q: d  \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ X* A- M$ E' r5 {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% r+ q  ?2 a& U2 Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 @  o, P+ o+ c& z: R) r$ T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 {0 C! Z, E2 u: @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 r4 S/ y% Y1 u; G# O<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

9 d1 D! x- N, P) \9 f6 B/ F0 X( g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ |/ `4 t. n$ ^0 V$ R' ?! s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>