【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ Y* w& s; b4 O* b: c4 T" i8 i$ DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' W9 _7 d- R- a# q- p$ e3 |The sky is happy down to its soul
$ z' i% e4 o) R3 W7 K5 gWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. j2 I3 j$ Q# D: v( o+ D2 ?I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 j( a  A6 f2 c' F$ H! W8 }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* f1 K0 J- E* M) ]$ kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 N' t% g7 @2 a# \4 I: x5 CI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 |% Q0 G( O' b: T3 g3 |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: d3 q+ ], N8 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- {: m/ Y# d3 {8 C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 k. h& A! C% G+ t. F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 Y/ @8 O3 w! a/ Q2 l$ P) c) h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 R2 q6 _) K- y) Q" ?: V8 C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, A- P* f, z! p# r! _9 W<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) G3 D  Y8 L0 I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  L% I. X6 V2 B, n% f8 c% s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* A7 b; j! }, J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' W7 s( ]; C/ w! Q" O2 A. q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- p1 T( q8 D7 a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 j8 d: @) ^+ [$ v  j8 J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( s0 ]' `% w9 N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 R; }8 B# u5 A! ]" ]' N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% Y9 m$ t% `0 ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ s: D3 o, {* P& q2 D, D# L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! j3 Y8 b  z: v% N& h, J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 O8 U  H/ d- x* d- N$ C: H* Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* E! Z0 x2 A" Y0 c  c8 q5 f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  A; V: X& J. ?! n! V# R& N* X. C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) @+ }, I; h" R8 m# j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ y6 k. L- X* Z* F<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 M3 y# `2 B" P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 p# \/ b# {+ `' m: g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 d& Y0 Y" j+ a2 T, x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, p5 n/ U! [8 e. E8 h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 o  v# a9 m$ p, ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ I- K( d# q3 c- O$ t' N5 g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 \# f) ?+ n) m3 n( _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>