【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

; k- K" G5 y1 }一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
! \2 p& a% p+ X. c& d2 Q0 h' _vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

. P1 G6 q, _% K% @7 b" H再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

8 m- r9 ]1 t2 F8 W$ [The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
* z" y3 @; e  s* J" zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- ^5 a, E2 [6 c4 ^6 z& }夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

; m4 b; Q2 a! h' p- d/ aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 L- E' |% J3 [" m5 D凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. G: v( X& f7 j) s  j. w5 \/ z0 o月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空

With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
9 r0 j( v+ o( B8 ^9 TYou needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
" X% G! ~6 S0 _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
, _/ _( d8 A. |/ W% Y* C口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ |2 f) l3 z- X- I3 L真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
9 Y2 V3 o3 ~, N: X8 c7 d% R% @I love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
! A. t1 s6 Q6 W* u2 X: h/ H世间万物  皆不能比
+ @: S* r: t3 K0 @1 c. S0 a
" K9 @7 ?1 @; c, w3 jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 P# o6 {9 x% A. z整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% r, n" ?5 c' J& |9 u* A若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
1 x8 p/ T" ?/ k1 k+ N; p( R" o可我依然满心忧虑
: z9 o0 F: n9 g" s7 BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
* \! c4 Q! M4 z9 H真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
: _9 F3 f; @% t我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
- Q/ v6 U* O8 D6 c! z' I5 Q/ N# x" z0 N* KWith such a tongue as yours,
# S9 G9 m5 ~0 O$ @你这张嘴 真真厉害
6 }2 c2 z& T+ u, l4 @" ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; B: a8 A! G8 W7 ]  L0 Q# Q& b能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

& |7 F; K8 Z8 g/ j+ zThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ C" t, i* I# {! M' y从未向你吐露衷情
) v- W5 y4 Y! B* uThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 Y% l+ j1 G$ s' o# n, Q7 `: r. ^7 H3 y爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
3 `. \& q, e2 V+ C& k从此别无他意
# o, g9 @2 S9 t) A6 SWe meet and talk everyday,
" D* {" r$ s. W+ K你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! G  X' K. c: G  w9 `( s奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
3 G: {, a. ?! m" }I would probably know how you feel
6 K' j$ T% r9 v+ k% U+ O2 y/ M或能知你心意
& Z' V: [4 k' z4 D1 Q% OLove… just the word love
% M4 }4 E( {. {  U* o/ z7 \爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
% _( Z9 X, ~/ H5 [& N: K& k% v" s" V为何如此难言？
! S0 [* V# ^, V8 e) F6 R3 TI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
6 M) W! g! q/ a' eBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
" H0 F0 T% |! XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
  O9 @9 x/ l& N1 B4 a假如还不太迟
5 ~5 M  x2 E+ U* d  e) E- z( tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& Q' F! J1 ?& P2 \3 h" M  Q8 ^今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
: K) g" F. j1 ~7 FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ x, O- g" D, m& z不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
" W7 _  T+ E/ |( Y% l! J可否将它 托付于你?
# U/ @( j! F- d. |  C; o6 TEntrust my love within your heart
6 R, |3 |. ]* v; S; w  U6 A% t从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
( v: \; r1 z( N% T0 f, z4 v( v
Love… just the word love
+ h' [, f1 p: |+ q- m+ y4 j4 i9 b' @爱呀，爱就一个字
7 ~! |3 z6 i, B! v0 }) zWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
9 l0 X0 O$ O) o: c+ s+ T8 h) }5 e# QBut I never did
* j. S0 R$ W3 Q& m% C却始终未曾出口
* N: K0 r2 F( L4 m* jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
6 y" h2 H) t( |# i3 ]If today isn’t too late,
6 h: P/ [: x. P% l( r* m: R- A假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& |2 R8 a, D% o4 _9 ~; {4 J今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
/ O2 j9 x/ \+ a6 H- `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) u& L7 u) W1 @3 q不愿这份爱 逝如流水
4 {. ~9 T4 x2 [' {: G& _! uCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
) Z1 K' P4 x& k, r6 ZEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

7 \3 _3 X* |0 X9 b4 LCan I entrust it to you?
$ n! i9 Q5 Z) j' U3 i9 ^" E8 E' f& X可否将它托付于你？
5 S( T' o3 ]8 @; Y) nEntrust my love within your heart
) g. L: ]' n* J$ L  l+ T从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
$ k9 G7 \' `" W1 J4 e7 S0 U老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
& M  b, x3 C  w) P" c% \刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
  }/ ^0 B, j- [7 ~# Qvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

- A0 O8 I5 `9 t7 v2 \不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。