【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

# q3 g* M" ^* }7 ?# w# [7 H一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
' d1 W! V' _% b8 F. e7 kvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

The moonlight is shining brightly,
& Z, o( Z. I9 \: M4 n9 Z皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: c* i* z: E- B2 U/ `1 y  K3 M6 v5 z: A月光闪烁 在我眼中
' ^8 K, f  O" _6 r/ u; g9 y6 L' x4 SThe sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空
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' i9 s" O6 u$ S) n- O; |3 XWith the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
( H  B' N. R# f& H3 tSeeing the sky content with its love
: R% Y& ~; M) F夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
$ D. E" p) m' A1 g/ sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
* @( Q9 ?9 d% [0 GI really want to know just how much you love me
7 }9 u% t, a( I. f* r" v% X$ o( i真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
+ q1 q* o5 t7 P& k5 mNothing can compare to my love
5 `% m- M. i( y) ^% I世间万物  皆不能比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# T/ [! B  a( U" k% u0 J整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
# X4 m3 L0 q* O" u. d5 F我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
7 h2 f/ |; C* k3 w7 II’m still filled with fear
$ B( E" \( v; n! }- \4 G' _: R" s可我依然满心忧虑
: F/ [& C. s1 }3 k# b% ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 `/ P8 l$ b- W1 |4 q你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
% s% F* V( E0 r+ T5 j. N! SI regret not dying
, s( L2 u3 j+ M; M; s1 e3 R/ j真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
4 l3 D. R3 O) t( D/ w& |$ k我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
0 O% C, B5 M% [' |It’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
$ I) h& }+ ]- W$ J6 E5 {# YWith such a tongue as yours,
' Z. c& Y. b7 k# ?6 P/ n你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: @: Y/ {: x8 D. M0 X; f% W能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 z8 t; {) [8 G- ^- Z若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! A6 Z; q/ x9 Z0 h从未向你吐露衷情
+ d/ q! N6 }9 [7 [/ K7 O: FThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
( L: u! N& f2 Y3 sFrom the first moment we met,
: \0 o. c6 ]2 D, p$ K' `对你一见倾心
' e3 n: k# U6 Z. DI already loved you with all my heart
4 |5 X+ E2 k7 J& H/ f" m/ z从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
1 C" k/ E8 o( @3 `; e- mIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
: n# M/ s, r/ S- ]8 T) JI would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
5 x* F) J* z- g( uLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
8 d4 P7 S" r2 t) T' x! c$ pWhy is it so difficult to express?
6 G% z# ?! p3 B+ X' o& a" d为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
/ G4 n* N; p) J2 `6 E0 H: L$ m我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
3 ~0 w, K* h: \0 P3 dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
9 z. c- z- r3 Y! i" \If today isn’t too late,
3 G/ M; C# |) ?, a& U& b4 X7 \假如还不太迟
% n% N" L$ o! j; Z' x6 {4 PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# ?3 A2 J8 {4 o$ [# s: U: ?- ?今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
; t+ F+ K1 a& X: p$ h% S' wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
# f7 d" \8 |2 M% U0 w, vCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 p. u' d- S: v! r从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

/ K& Q' m5 o) x. P* W0 t1 uLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
. P, [4 s2 A) e0 n! ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
9 b& r/ b# M& o; K, H" g, I4 C. e为何如何难言？
- r% ~7 k% S0 O0 Q8 O8 Z' ~  u; II want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
5 f# {( W( b/ FBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ K. \! p$ r* ^0 G9 T: g: ]/ y只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
2 h! @+ u3 t/ [7 [$ O2 s! j假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
6 N# D9 L* Q; @9 E, ]/ ]Can I entrust it to you?
2 }9 S+ I; H& |4 R6 ^) h) K9 O可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
; s  F$ k# b* J& A5 v1 ~从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
* `- q, t: f* g* F  v. w9 g% o从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
; ^$ k7 s4 @" u; z7 e+ D* _老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
  t: K0 _; W2 J# F6 A1 i老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
+ ], {( ^& I9 C/ p/ Vvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

/ {- O# l6 l- T6 P* n/ V+ L不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。